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Chapter 6. Completing Business Messages. Learning Objectives. Discuss the value of careful revision and describe the tasks involved in evaluating your first drafts and the work of other writers List four techniques you can use to improve the readability of your messages
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Chapter 6 Completing Business Messages
Learning Objectives • Discuss the value of careful revision and describe the tasks involved in evaluating your first drafts and the work of other writers • List four techniques you can use to improve the readability of your messages • Describe eight steps you can take to improve the clarity of your writing and give four tips on making your writing more concise
Learning Objectives • List four principles of effective design, and explain the role of major design elements in document readability • Explain the importance of proofreading and give eight tips for successful proofreading • Discuss the most important issues to consider when distributing your messages
Help the Writer Succeed Understand the Writer’s Intent Evaluating, Editing, and Revising the Work of Others
Revising to Improve Readability • Vary sentence length • Keep paragraphs short • Use lists to clarify and emphasize • Add headings and subheadings
Short (up to 15 words) Medium (15–25 words) Long (over 25 words) Varying Your Sentence Length
Using Lists to Clarify and Emphasize • Show sequence of ideas • Heighten visual impact • Emphasize key points • Simplify complex subjects • Provide visual breaks • Expedite skimming process
Descriptive Headings Informative Headings Organization Attention Connection Adding Headings and Subheadings
Editing for Clarity • Long Sentences • Hedging Sentences • Faulty Parallelism • Dangling Modifiers • Long Noun Sequences • Camouflaged Verbs • Sentence Structure • Awkward References
Editing for Conciseness • Delete unnecessary words and phrases • Shorten long words and phrases • Eliminate redundancies • Recast “It is/There are” starters
Comments Attached to a PDF File Reviewers can use a variety of tools to modify text, insert comments, record audio commentary, and “rubber stamp” documents. All the comments, corrections, and other markups are listed in order and can be filtered by reviewer.
Production Quality Effectiveness Professionalism Importance Producing the Message
Multimedia Tools The window at the left shows all the stored audio and video elements available for use. The window at the right previews the video or screencast, frame by frame.
Using Technology to Produce Your Message • Templates and style sheets • Page setup features • Column and paragraph formatting • Numbered and bulleted lists • Information in tables • Images, text boxes, and objects
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Proofreading Your Message Create a Checklist to Check For: • Writing Errors • Design Flaws • Layout Problems Review Production Issues Such As: • Misspelled Words • Punctuation Errors • Inconsistent Fonts • Problems with Page Numbers