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THE THESIS STATEMENT. A very basic thesis statement is a single sentence at the end of the first paragraph that tells the reader the main idea of your essay . A thesis statement should do these three things:
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THE THESIS STATEMENT • A very basic thesis statement is a single sentence at the end of the first paragraph that tells the reader the main idea of your essay. • A thesis statement should do these three things: 1. It should clearly express what the essay is about.2. It should make a discussible point.3. It should indicate the structure of the essay.
Original Thesis: Many Americans are buying foreign cars. • Revised Thesis: Many Americans are buying the Toyota Corolla because of its competitive price, fuel economy, and high resale value. • The revised thesis statement clearly expresses what the essay is about (the Toyota Corolla.) It gives us a topic than can be discussed (why people are buying the Toyota Corolla.) And it establishes the organizational structure of the essay (three specific reasons for the model's popularity: price, fuel, and value.)
Original Thesis: San Francisco is an interesting place to visit. Revised Thesis:San Francisco is a stimulating place to visit because of its magnificent location, its theaters and art galleries, and its many fine restaurants. • The revised thesis statement tells what the essay is about (San Francisco). It gives a topic that an be discussed (why San Francisco is such a great city.) And it indicates how the essay will be organized (three body paragraphs discussing the city's location, its art galleries and museums, and its wonderful restaurants.)
Original Thesis:Chess is a great game. • Revised Thesis:Playing chess is a popular activity among students because it is inexpensive, engrossing, and can be played almost anywhere. • The revised thesis statement states the main idea of the essay (chess.) It gives a topic than can be discussed ( chess is a popular activity.) And it reveals how the essay will be organized (three body paragraphs that deal with how cheap, entertaining, and portable chess is.)
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