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最大限度地展示您的研究成果 －英语论文写作与编辑 第二讲 张科宏博士 长青藤编辑中国区编辑主任 同济大学兼职教授 哈佛大学医学院助理教授（ 2003 － 2007 ）

长青藤编辑. Ivy Editing & Consulting. 最大限度地展示您的研究成果 －英语论文写作与编辑 第二讲 张科宏博士 长青藤编辑中国区编辑主任 同济大学兼职教授 哈佛大学医学院助理教授（ 2003 － 2007 ） Tel: 021-51370992 E-mail: kz@ the ivy editing .com. 长青藤编辑. Ivy Editing & Consulting. 语言问题 拼写错误 格式错误 冠词使用错误 文法错误 用词不当.

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最大限度地展示您的研究成果 －英语论文写作与编辑 第二讲 张科宏博士 长青藤编辑中国区编辑主任 同济大学兼职教授 哈佛大学医学院助理教授（ 2003 － 2007 ）

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  1. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 最大限度地展示您的研究成果 －英语论文写作与编辑 第二讲 张科宏博士 长青藤编辑中国区编辑主任 同济大学兼职教授 哈佛大学医学院助理教授（2003－2007） Tel: 021-51370992 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com

  2. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 语言问题 拼写错误 格式错误 冠词使用错误 文法错误 用词不当 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  3. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 语言之外 科学逻辑错误 描述模糊 难以理解的超长复合句 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  4. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Wang et al., Neuroscience Letters 382:236-241, 2005 Acupuncture, a pearl in the Traditional Chinese Medicine, has been shown to bring about functional recovery after spinal cord injury, it has been widely used by doctors and favorably received by patients. ……. E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  5. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Wang et al., Neuroscience Letters 382:236-241, 2005 Acupuncture, a pearl in the Traditional Chinese Medicine, has been shown to bring about functional recovery after spinal cord injury, it has been widely used by doctors and favorably received by patients. ……. E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  6. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Wang et al., Neuroscience Letters 382:236-241, 2005 Acupuncture, a pearl in the Traditional Chinese Medicine,has been shown to bring about functional recovery after spinal cord injury, it has been widely used by doctors and favorably received by patients. ……. E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  7. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Wang et al., Neuroscience Letters 382:236-241, 2005 Acupuncture, a pearl in the Traditional Chinese Medicine, has been shown to bring about functional recovery after spinal cord injury, ithas been widely used by doctors and favorably received by patients. ……. E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  8. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 南宋末年，金兵大举入侵中原，朝廷昏聩无力，百姓生灵涂炭。。。。。话说嵩山脚下一对杨姓夫妇，年过半百，膝下尚无子嗣。 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  9. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 南宋末年，金兵大举入侵中原，朝廷昏聩无力，百姓生灵涂炭。。。。。话说嵩山脚下一对杨姓夫妇，年过半百，膝下尚无子嗣。 海上起了风暴，老约翰还是开着破船驶离了港湾。 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  10. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Acupuncture, a pearl in the Traditional Chinese Medicine, has been shown to bring about functional recovery after spinal cord injury, it has been widely used by doctors and favorably received by patients. ……. E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  11. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Acupuncture, a pearl in the Traditional Chinese Medicine, has been shown to bring about functional recovery after spinal cord injury, it has been widely used by doctors and favorably received by patients. ……. Acupuncture expedites the functional recovery after spinal cord injury. E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  12. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Danshensu alleviates traumatic brain injury by down-regulating neuronal expression of NMDA receptors E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  13. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Danshensu alleviates traumatic brain injury by down-regulating neuronal expression of NMDA receptors Traumatic brain injury (TBI) is a serious public health concern in developed countries. In the US, TBI is the leading cause of death in young adults, with a mortality rate of >20% within 30 days of the trauma. Danshen (Salvia miltiorrhiza) is a Chinese Traditional Medicine, and has long been used to treat many diseases in China. …… E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  14. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Danshensu alleviates traumatic brain injury by down-regulating neuronal expression of NMDA receptors Traumatic brain injury (TBI) is a serious public health concern in developed countries. In the US, TBI is the leading cause of death in young adults, with a mortality rate of >20% within 30 days of the trauma. Danshen (Salvia miltiorrhiza) is a Chinese Traditional Medicine, and has long been used to treat many diseases in China. …… E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  15. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Danshensu alleviates traumatic brain injury by down-regulating neuronal expression of NMDA receptors Traumatic brain injury (TBI) is a serious public health concern in developed countries. In the US, TBI is the leading cause of death in young adults, with a mortality rate of >20% within 30 days of the trauma. Danshen (Salvia miltiorrhiza) is a Chinese Traditional Medicine, and has long been used to treat many diseases in China. …… E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  16. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Danshensu alleviates traumatic brain injury by down-regulating neuronal expression of NMDA receptors Traumatic brain injury (TBI) is a serious public health concern in developed countries. In the US, TBI is the leading cause of death in young adults, with a mortality rate of >20% within 30 days of the trauma. Danshen (Salvia miltiorrhiza) is a Chinese Traditional Medicine, and has long been used to treat many diseases in China. …… E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  17. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Danshensu alleviates traumatic brain injury by down-regulating neuronal expression of NMDA receptors Traumatic brain injury (TBI) is a serious public health concern in developed countries. In the US, TBI is the leading cause of death in young adults, with a mortality rate of >20% within 30 days of the trauma. Danshen (Salvia miltiorrhiza) is a Chinese Traditional Medicine, and has long been used to treat many diseases in China.…… E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  18. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Danshensu alleviates traumatic brain injury by down-regulating neuronal expression of NMDA receptors Traumatic brain injury (TBI) is a serious public health concern in developed countries. In the US, TBI is the leading cause of death in young adults, with a mortality rate of >20% within 30 days of the trauma. Danshen (Salvia miltiorrhiza) is a Chinese Traditional Medicine, and has long been used to treat many diseases in China. …… E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  19. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Danshensu alleviates traumatic brain injury by down-regulating neuronal expression of NMDA receptors Traumatic brain injury (TBI) is a major cause of death and disability worldwide. In majority of the cases, patients die days or even weeks after the trauma due to secondary damage instead of the primary damage sustained at the moment of impact. Increasing evidence indicates a critical role of NMDA receptor in the secondary damage after TBI. ……. E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  20. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Danshensu alleviates traumatic brain injury by down-regulating neuronal expression of NMDA receptors Traumatic brain injury (TBI) is a major cause of death and disability worldwide. In majority of the cases, patients die days or even weeks after the trauma due to secondary damage instead of the primary damage sustained at the moment of impact. Increasing evidence indicates a critical role of NMDA receptor in the secondary damage after TBI. ……. Danshensu is a major active component of danshen (Salvia miltiorrhiza), a medicinal herb native to China and Japan. …….. E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  21. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Dopamine D4 receptor antagonists alleviate cognitive deficits in schizophrenic patients E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  22. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Dopamine D4 receptor antagonists alleviate cognitive deficits in schizophrenic patients Clinical studies suggested that dopamine D2 receptors are involved in schizophrenia. However, no pathological evidence is avaliable for a role of D2 receptors in its etiology. E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  23. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Dopamine D4 receptor antagonists alleviate cognitive deficits in schizophrenic patients Dopamine D2 antagonists could alleviate negative symptoms in schizophrenic patients. However, postmortem analysis and imaging studies failed to reveal abnormal D2 recptor density or signaling in patients with schizophrenia. E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  24. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 如何识别编辑公司 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  25. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 中国作者撰写论文核心障碍 1）语言障碍 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  26. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 中国作者撰写论文核心障碍 1）语言障碍 拼写／用词／文法 可读性 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  27. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 中国作者撰写论文核心障碍 1）语言障碍 2）思维模式障碍 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  28. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting Ross Baldessarini, MD. DSc Editor-in-Chief, Ivy Editing Professor, Harvard Medical School In addition to language problems, many papers by Chinese physicians are poorly organized. Very often, I understand all sentences but have no idea what the authors are trying to say with the paragraphs and the entire manuscript. E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  29. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 编辑 “编”：组织 “辑”：裁减 “编辑”：帮助作者讲述 “故事” E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  30. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 优秀的编辑公司 1）编辑团队 真正懂行的专家 有编辑中国作者论文经验 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  31. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 优秀的编辑公司 1）编辑团队 真正懂行的专家 有编辑中国作者论文经验 2）编辑模式 多轮次互动改稿 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  32. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 优秀的编辑公司 1）编辑团队 真正懂行的专家 有编辑中国作者论文经验 2）编辑模式 多轮次互动改稿 3）畅通的沟通渠道 国内编辑：精通中／英文的科学家 E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  33. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 鉴别 “ 伪劣产品” 1）闪烁其词的编辑团队 “美国哈佛大学医学院王博士” E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  34. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 鉴别 “ 伪劣产品” 1）闪烁其词的编辑团队 “美国哈佛大学医学院王博士” 2）不可置信的低廉费用 “每千字人民币168元” E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  35. 长青藤编辑 Ivy Editing & Consulting 鉴别 “ 伪劣产品” 1）闪烁其词的编辑团队 “美国哈佛大学医学院王博士” 2）不可置信的低廉费用 “每千字人民币168元” 3）明显的撒谎 “我们的合作伙伴包括美国哈佛大学和 Nature 杂志社” E-mail: kz@theivyediting.com; Tel: 021－51370992

  36. 谢谢大家！ 联系方式： 021－51370992；15800492870; kz@theivyediting.com www.ivy-editing.com； www.theivyediting.com (2011年7月15日) 长青藤编辑部分成员： 临床医学：神经科学／心理学： Anne O’Donnell, MD, PhDRajeev Desai, PhD 波士顿儿童医院哈佛大学医学院助理教授 细胞生物学：免疫学： Jesse Potash, PhD Bryan Hurley, PhD Nature Methods杂志前编辑哈佛大学医学院助理教授

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