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What do you know? One of these is incorrect:. Jamie likes playing the P laystation , the X box and play the N intendo. Jamie likes the P laystation , the X box and the N intendo. Nancy likes playing the Playstation , the Xbox and the Nintendo. One more try….
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What do you know? One of these is incorrect: • Jamie likes playing the Playstation, the Xbox and play the Nintendo. • Jamie likes the Playstation, the Xbox and the Nintendo. • Nancy likes playing the Playstation, the Xbox and the Nintendo.
One more try… -Jordan played football, took a shower and gone to sleep. -Jordan played football, took a shower and went to sleep.
PARALLELISM is… -The balance between two or more similar words or phrases. -Parallelism is also called parallel structure or parallel construction. Parallel construction prevents awkwardness, promotes clarity and improves readability.
In laymen’s terms… • Parellelism can be used to convert hard to understand sentences into easily readable text. • Example: “I like jogging and to play checkers.” becomes “I like jogging and playing checkers.”
Used with elements joined by coordinating conjunctions • My dad likes hunting and to play sports. X • My dad likes hunting and playing sports.
Parellelism is used with elements in lists or in a series • I can not decide if I like The Phantom Menace, The Clone Wars, or The Revenge of the Sith more. • I can not decide if I Like the Phantom Menace, The Clone Wars, or if I like The Revenge of the Sith more. X
Parallelism is used with elements being compared • I would rather be watching cartoons than to listen to music. X • I would rather be watching cartoons than listening to music.
Parallelism is used with elements joined by a linking verb • To tackle well is to play good football. • To tackle well is playing good football. X
Parallelism is used with elements joined by a correlative conjunction Anthony not only wants dinner, but also desert. X -Anthony wants not only dinner, but also desert. Also correct: -Anthony not only wants dinner, but also wants desert.