文章的不同等第： A 类： 14-16 分 B 类： 11-13 分 C 类： 8-10 分 D 类： 5-7 分 E 类： 0-4 分

1. 文章的不同等第： A类：14-16分 B类：11-13分 C类：8-10分 D类：5-7分 E类：0-4分

2. 3．范文： （1）： I hate to do many things. For example, I hate to do too much homework and I hate to listen to loud music as well. Of all the things I hate to do, I hate shopping most. I think it’s a waste of time when I have to spend almost half a day shopping. In addition, after shopping, I often get tired and feel like sleeping. Seeing what I’ve bought, I think it’s not worthwhile. For these reasons, I hate shopping most.

3. (2) I like to do a lot of things. However, there are still many things I hate to do, such as having sports in the summer, eating vegetables or being interrupted by others when I am reading a book. I hate arguing with my friends most because it can make me angry and very sad. Another important reason is that arguing with my friends can harm the friendship. Thus, I hate arguing with my friends most.

4. 二．学生写作中存在的问题。 1．审题能力欠缺。（要点缺失，内容偏差，时态不准确） 2．语法错误实在太多。（拼写，标点，大小写） 3．中式思维导致Chinglish问题严重。 4．一些连接词使用错误，如：on the other hand, in addition, because, for example, such as 5. 文章要讲究逻辑性和注意客观事实。如：I can’t live without my friends. 6. 字数不够的情况并不多。 7．东拉西扯，内容反复，表达重复。 8．全文通篇简单句。 9．书写要端正，扫描进电脑。（每个阅卷者每天的工作量至少250以上）

5. 10．基础知识不牢固，有些表达容易混淆，如：have sports 与 do exercise；after 5 days’ hard work (working）; on the sofa 介词用错等. 11．选择的写作素材要切题。（有自身体会的最佳） 12．不能用题目中的句子充数。 13．不能随意更改题目要求中的细节。 14．文章不宜写得过长。 15．不规范的表达不要写，如：sep. 16．不要写结构太拖沓，松散的句子。 17．尽量多用课内的词组和表达。没把握的表达不用。 18．写完不检查。

6. (一). My parents help me grow up. Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "My parents help me grow up" ( 以"父母帮助我成长"为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) Some suggestions: • Parents’ care, love and help are very important in one’s life . • What parents do to help their children when they grow up. • How children should thank their parents. (At least 2 aspects 至少2方面)

7. A类: • We can’t grow up happily without our parents’ love, care and help. When I am ill, it is my parents that stay beside me. When I am in trouble, it is my parents that encourage me to overcome the difficulties. My parents play important roles in my life and I should thank them. In return, I should do something for them. For example, I can do some housework to make them have more time to relax. I can also give them birthday cards which are made by me. In a word, my parents do a lot for me, so I should thank them.

8. B类: • Parents’ care, love and help are very important in my life as they help me grow up. My parents give me a lot of knowledge as well as teach me how to be a person who is well-mannered, warm-hearted and honest. When I failed, they always encouraged me to have another try. When I achieved success, they told me to keep on working hard. I should be thankful to my parents for their help. I promise to be a good daughter and will love them forever. • 修改后： • Parents’ care, love and help are very important in my life as they help me grow up. My parents give me a lot of knowledge as well as teach me how to be a person who is well-mannered, warm-hearted and honest. When I fail, they always encourage me to have another try. When I achieve success, they tell me to keep on working hard. I should be thankful to my parents for their help. I will study hard and get good marks .I promise to be a good daughter and will love them forever.

9. C类 • As we all know, parents’ care, love and help are very important in our lives. Parents feed their children and dress up them when they grow up. So do my parents. As a kind child, I think I should thank my parents. But how?How children should thank their parents? I think I should take care of my parents when they are ill. What’s your idea? • 修改后： • As we all know, parents’ care, love and help are very important in our lives. Parents provide us with food and clothes. So do my parents. As their son, I think I should thank my parents. I should do more housework than before. When my parents are ill, I should take good care of them. I hope I can make them happy.

10. (二). “When I had my first success” Some suggestions: • What my first success was • When I had my first success • How I had my first success

11. A类: • My first success was getting the first prize in a table tennis contest when I was ten. Before the contest, I knew I was not as good as other players. I practiced playing table tennis hours and hours. I played it for at least four hours every day. I believed that “Practice makes perfect.” As a result, I beat all the other players and won the first prize as well as got 25 yuan as a reward. I think I won’t forget my first success forever. • When I was eight, my mother taught me how to make a cake. Although it was difficult for me at that time, I still learnt it carefully. In order to make the cake more delicious, I listened and watched carefully when my mother taught me. With my mother’s help, I succeeded in making a cake by myself at last. Besides that, I have also learnt that if I want to achieve success, I should work hard.

12. B类: • I have succeeded many times in my daily life, but the first success was the most important to me. When I was in the primary school, I was too timid to say my ideas. However, my class teacher encouraged me and gave me courage. Since then, I raised my hand more often than before to improve myself. Finally, I succeeded in making a speech in a competition. The first success gave me a lot of confidence. • 修改后： • I have succeeded many times in my daily life, but the first success was the most important one to me. I went to Nanchang with my mother at the age of ten. We climbed Mountain Lu. There were so many steps I had to climb and it rained heavily, but I didn’t give up. Finally, I reached the top of the mountain and had a good view. From the first success, I’ve learned though there may be much difficulty in my life, I mustn’t be afraid and should never give up

13. C类: • My first success was that I could ride the bicycle by myself. When I was 7 years old, I knew it was very hard to learn to cycle when I 7years old. I trained cycling one after one until I succeeded in learning to ride the bicycle. I felt very happy and excited that time. That success is unforgettable for me. • 修改后： • My first success was that I succeeded in learning to ride a bicycle. When I was 7 years old, I knew it was very hard to learn to cycle. I practiced day after day and fell down many times till I was able to ride. I felt very happy and excited at that time. That success is unforgettable to me.

14. （三）Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "My opinion about friendship" Use the following points as a guide. (短文须包含下列要点) • The importance of friendship in your life • How you get along with your friends (At least two aspects.至少2个方面) • A类: • In my opinion, friendship is definitely important in my life. When I feel upset, it is my friends who help me get rid of sadness. To get along well with my friends is very important. I shouldn’t laugh at my friends when they make mistakes. What’s more, when they tell me something private about themselves, I will listen carefully and keep the secrets. After all, I can’t live happily without friends.

15. B类: • Friendship is an important part in my life. I can’t even work or study without the help of my friends. They always encourage me and give me happiness. In return, I’m always ready to help them when they are in trouble. I think it’s a good way to get along with friends. That’s because everyone needs help most sometimes, and if the help is from a friend, he be thankful to the friend very much. • 修改后： • Friendship is an important part in my life. I can’t work or study well without the help of my friends. They always encourage me and give me happiness. In return, I’m always ready to help them when they are in trouble. Besides, I always keep my promises because it’s a good way to get along with friends. I think it’s very important for me to do something for my friends.

16. C类: • Friendship plays an important role in my life. It gives me hope, energy and care. Without friends, wemay lonely and sad. When I’m in trouble, my friends encourage me anytime. However, getting along with friends needs a proper way.To be honest in order to make others believe you. And to be kindness and easy-going so as to make others like you. In a word, whenever I go, whatever I do, friendship is a delight to me. • 修改后： • Friendship plays an important role in my life. It gives me hope, energy and care. Without friends, I may feel lonely and sad. When I’m in trouble, my friends encourage me. It’s necessary to get along well with my friends. To be honest makes my friends believe me. And to be kind and easy-going can make my friends like me. In a word, wherever I go, friendship is a delight to me.

17. Suppose you had a wonderful time in Nanhui during Shanghai Peach Blossom Festival (上海桃花节). Write at least 60 words about the trip with the information in the table.

18. Now that the spring is coming, it’s a good choice to take a trip to the countryside. I went to Nanhui last week and enjoyed myself there during Shanghai Peach Blossom Festival. As Nanhui was far away from my home, I got a little tired after several hours’ ride. However, you can never guess what a beautiful view I saw as soon as I got off the bus! Besides the nice weather and the clean air, I was also attracted by many different peach blossoms. What’s more, the delicious food and the friendly people there made me feel relaxed. I will never forget this festival which was from March 25 to April 12

19. 08区模拟考 • D类: • When The 2008 Olympic Games will be hold in Beijing On 2008. There are exciting. The Chinese people feel happily. And students are happy too. We should do something for the 2008 Olympic Games . We must learn English at good. Because there are many different countries people will come from China. We will talk to them. We should help their.

20. 08区模拟考 • D类: • 2008 Olympic Games will come in Beijing. Chinese people are proud of it. By the way, we can learn a lot things about it.such as brzve.The players are brave. We will help the people,We are students. So we can help classmates about subjects help visitors they way to the everywhere. And we must learn hardly. To make Beijing more beautiful.