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My original poems. Fernando Hernández. T able. I am poem. I am who I am and only that I think with my mind I hear with my ears I see with my eyes I want to be me I am who I amand only that I pretend to be me I worry about nothing I get angry when I wake up I hope the world peace
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My original poems Fernando Hernández
I am poem • I am who I am and only that • I think with my mind • I hear with my ears • I see with my eyes • I want to be me • I am who I amand only that • I pretend to be me • I worry about nothing • I get angry when I wake up • I hope the world peace • I am who I am and only that • I understand with my mind • I belive in myself • I say what I think • I dreamwiththeeyesclosed • I am who I am and onlythat
Whatispoetry? • Poetryis a wayforourselftoexpresswhatwethink.
Reader response • Well this poem is written by lee young lee.The name of the book is my little father. Well the main point of this poem is dead and the son tells that he will be always in his hart. I like it because is not that deep so you don’t have to think it that much. I think that the message and meaning is good by telling that when some one dies you can keep it alive in your hart. The way of telling the poem is perfect. It doesn't have a lot of details. I think is good enough.
limerick • There was a hot pocket from china • That liked to eat a lot of pasta • Then he ate lady gaga • He also ate her mama • But he only ate them in Italia
Tanka • Once there was a girl • She expected our world • To act always like kids • Then she open her eyes • But she didn´t understand • But she will make us change
Diamante Sky Beautiful blue Flying, skydiving, changeing clouds, birds, flowers, worms , Laying, driving, staying Brown, dirty earth
Narrative • I hold my brother in my hands • He stares at me • Tyes to touch me with his tiny hands • I smile and hug him • We gow up together • We paly together • We fight we save both butts • It´s youst like a seesaw • We have highs we have lows • We are up we are down • But we help each other • Like bros, like friends
Labyrinth • Some times wefeelliketouchingthesun • Wefell so colselikeifweweretotouchit • Wefeel so power full likeifwewerethekings of theworld Fernando Hernández (Phoetry)