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Project Instruction. 2/28. Literary criticism is the study, evaluation, and interpretation of literature. A thesis is a statement or theory that is put forward as a premise to be maintained or proved. The goal of this paper is to prove an interpretation of a symbol in Macbeth .
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2/28 • Literary criticism is the study, evaluation, and interpretation of literature. • A thesis is a statement or theory that is put forward as a premise to be maintained or proved. • The goal of this paper is to prove an interpretation of a symbol in Macbeth.
Instruction • Combination of group and individual work • 100 points total • 30 (5 per day for the next week) • 70 (20 introduction, 30 body, 20 conclusion) • 5 points today for completing outline & deciding on concept or conflict • Example: Clothing & Ambition
Introduction Components OTHER THAN THE FIRST AND LAST SENTENCES…ORDER DOES NOT MATTER 1. General summary statement of play including author and title (preview) 2. Introduction of symbol and power: concept or conflict 3. Specific example of symbol (from Act I) 4. Circumstances of example
Introduction Components 5. Direct quote (Shakespeare) • Introduce quote with own words • Parenthetical reference • (Act I. Scene 2. Lines 3-4) = (I.2.3-4). 6. Significance of example 7. Thesis statement (theory of power: concept or conflict andintroduction of future examples) 8. Five to seven sentences
Sample 1: Summary In William Shakespeare’s Macbeth, force and fate pass the Scottish crown through three men. • Author • Title • Preview
Sample 2: Symbol & Power The ambition of Macbeth, a killer and a king, is represented symbolically by clothing. • Symbol • Power
Sample 3&5: Specific Example For example, upon hearing of his promotion, Macbeth replies, “The thane of Cawdor still lives. Why do you dress me in borrowed robes?” (I.3.109-110). • Direct quote • Introduction • Parenthetical Reference
Sample 4: Circumstances Prior to this announcement, three witches had prophetically greeted Macbeth by his current title, Thane of Glamis; a future title, Thane of Cawdor; and the ultimate title, King. • Context
Sample 6: Significance Macbeth’s question is significant because Macbeth acknowledges the title of Cawdor does not naturally belong to him. Additionally, the witches’ truthful prophecy encourages Macbeth to seriously consider his ascension to the throne. • Deeper meaning
Sample 7: Thesis Throughout the play, Macbeth’s rise and fall is traced through the fit and feel of his clothing. • Power • Symbol • Preview • Transition
Goals • Outline • Assign examples from packet to paragraphs • CHANGE SYMBOL (all say blood ) • IGNORE DUE DATE LINE: PROVIDED • Work chronologically • Introduction = Act I • Conclusion = Act V • More than one example can be used from one act • EXAMPLE: I.3.109-110 Macbeth gets promotion. • Connect symbol to concept or conflict
GOALS • Draft introduction • Turn into Mrs. Moore • Points • Safety • Body paragraphs = Monday • Revisions = Tuesday • Introduction • Body Paragraphs
Writing Style Reminders 1. MLA Format • Double spaced (every other line) on composition paper • Write legibly! Points will be deducted if illegible • Underline Macbeth (play) 2. Model Class Examples (Deviation will reduce score)
Continued 1 3. Only Third Person 4. No Contractions 5. No Slang or Conversational Language 6. Peer Edit -Most important for body paragraphs
Continued 2 7. Do Not Say “This Quote” Introduce Quote with Own Words • For example,” …” (Act. Scene. Line). • Character Name + verb, “…” (Act. Scene. Line). • Introductory clause, “…” (Act. Scene. Line). 8. Use Parenthetical References
How should we start? • Names on paper • “X” every other line for reminders • Re-read components and sample • Re-read examples focusing on introduction • Write one sentence at a time • The first and last ones are the hardest!
Body Paragraph 1NOT A BELL RINGER • Topic sentence • Act summary (incorporate act number into sentence) • Symbol • Power: concept or conflict
Body Paragraph 2 • Specific example: • Specific circumstances (scene) of example • Direct quote (Shakespeare) • Introduce quote with own words • Parenthetical reference (Act II. Scene 3. Lines 4-5) = (II.3.4-5). • Significance of example
Body Paragraph • Connection to thesis/transition (power: concept or conflict) • Five to seven sentences • DOUBLE SPACE AGAIN! • Mark every other line with an “X”
Transitions/Connections • Thesis: • Throughout the play, Macbeth’s rise and fall is traced through the fit and feel of his clothing. • Topic Sentence: • In Act II, Macbeth and his lady make the witches’ third prophecy come true by killing King Duncan for the royal robes.
Transitions/Connections • Final Sentence: • Having obtained the crown, Macbeth’s now reaches for absolute control over his country and his future. • Next Example: • Macbeth says, “Upon my head they placed a fruitless crown, /And put a barren scepter in my gripe, […]/No son of mine succeeding” (III.1.65-69).
3/5 • GOALS: • Revise introduction • I will visit each group. • Peer edit body paragraphs • Everyone reads all! • Thursday/Friday = “Final Copy” days
BELL 3/7 RINGER • The conclusion is the resolution of a paper; it is meant to tie up all the loose ends. • Another goal of this paragraph is to connect and discuss ideas from the individual body paragraphs. • Restate the idea of the thesis…not the sentence itself!
Components 1 • General summary statement of play (review) • Introduction of symbol and power: concept or conflict • Specific example of symbol (Act V)…
Components 2 • Circumstances of example • Direct quote (Shakespeare) • Introduce quote with own words • Parenthetical reference (Act V. Scene 6. Lines 7-8) = (V.6.7-8). • Significance of example
Components 3 • Discuss impact of power: concept or conflict on play (character or event) • Reference previous examples • See sample paragraph • Five to seven sentences
Examples • Thesis Statement: Throughout the play, Macbeth’s rise and fall is traced through the fit and feel of his clothing. • Closing Sentence: In conclusion, Macbeth’s attire physically represents his inability to retain the power he killed so many to obtain.
Goals • Thursday: Draft conclusion (turn in) • Friday: Rewrite introduction • Rewritten body paragraphs due MONDAY. • Monday: Rewrite conclusion • Final draft due!!!