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2006-2007 第一学期 英语期中考试 写作讲评. 高二年级. 1 正确理解题意 - 审题。.
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1 正确理解题意-审题。 • Yesterday evening , I had two tickets. So I wanted Mary to go with me for the concert. But she couldn’t want to go because she wanted to review her lessons . I was very sad , but I didn’t give up . I said to her , “give me at least two reasons.”
She couldn’t know how to answer . So she went with me. We enjoyed the concert and had a very good evening .
2.选择正确的表达方式。 • I have two tickets . In yesterday evening, I want Mary to go with me for ___concert . But Mary go to review her lessons. I try to persuade her .
I said could give at least two reasons . she finally go with me . we so happe.The Mary want to go with me . Next to . “of course . I wan to go with you . Next to .” I said.
3. 注意时态和语态的一致。标点符号使用要规范。 • Yesterday evening, I had two tickets to want Mary to go with me for the concert . So I asked her “could you go with me for the concert?” she said :no, I had to review my lessons.” It doesn’t matter, but the concert had the pop singer by Jay,Vivian, JJ. GG so on.
I thought you will miss the best the concert . Although you didn’t go with me . I would go with Lucy for the concert , I hope you not to angry with me. At last finally Mary said : I believe you say , so I went with you for the concert.
优秀作文 • As I had two tickets, I wanted Mary to go with me for the concert yesterday evening. But she couldn’t go with me because she wanted to review her lessons. I tried to persuade her. I said to her that the concert was very interesting and she had to have a rest .
“ Relaxing is also very important !” I said. So finally , she went with me. Of course , both of us enjoyed the concert very much and had a very good time.
Last month, we went to the Summer Palace with school trip. We reached there at 9:30a.m. and I began to walk with my friend soon. When we walked half around the lake__we felt very tired and hungry. We had a picnic while we were having a rest. Then we went on our walk trip until we came back to the place where we started .
We met other friends and had the second dinner together. We didn’t stop talking until it’s time to go back. It’s 4:00 p.m. that we got back to schoolyard . I thought that I fell asleep quickly that night.
I had two tickets and wanted Mary to go with me for the concert yesterday evening. But she couldn’t go with me, because she must review her lessons . I tried to persuade her , said , It was very interesting , you would regret . If you didn’t go to the concert .
On the other hand , you could review the lessons after going to the concert . Finally , she went to the concert with me. We enjoyed the concert.