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描述文. 目的： 透過生動的文字描述人物、景物、經驗等事物， 創造出栩栩如生的意象，讓讀者宛如親見。. 善用「五官」. 視覺 ： The rolling hills are filled with wheat and dotted with small farmhouses . 聽覺 ： The sound of the bacon sizzling while it cooks is almost as enjoyable as its smoky, salty taste. 嗅覺 ：

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  1. 描述文 目的： 透過生動的文字描述人物、景物、經驗等事物， 創造出栩栩如生的意象，讓讀者宛如親見。

  2. 善用「五官」 • 視覺： The rolling hills are filled with wheat and dotted with small farmhouses. • 聽覺： The sound of the bacon sizzling while it cooks is almost as enjoyable as its smoky, salty taste. • 嗅覺： The pizza smellswith a cheese and tomato aroma.

  3. 善用「五官」 • 味覺： The salty bacon had a nice chewy texture. • 觸覺： I love the warm sensation of a sliceof pizza in my hands.

  4. 決定描寫的角度與重點 • 從自然景色描寫： As gentle breezes blow, the flowers fly through the air like snowflakes and carpet the ground with a sweet-smelling blanket of white. In honor of the Hakka Tung Blossom Festival, a celebration of Hakka culture combined with the natural beauty of Taiwan.

  5. 從活動描寫： There are plenty of events that take place throughout the festival. These events include traditional dances on stages, arts and crafts fairs, and special delicacies for visitors to sample. You can see old Hakka women as they braid straw teapot holders, or you can buy an expertly crafted clay pot as a gift.

  6. 依時間順序或空間遠近鋪陳 • 依時間順序 • In the 9th year of Sianfeng reign (1859), the Spanish father Fernando Sainz arrived in Kaohsiung Port. Unafraid of the anti-foreigner, he built his straw house to restart his mission. In 1863, the first Catholic church in Taiwan, a Dominican church was built with soil and bricks. In an expansion in 1928, a Gothic clock tower combined with Roman columns in the interior are built as artistic creation and dedicated to the Holy Mother, renamed as Holy Rosary Cathedral (天主教玫瑰聖母堂).

  7. 依空間遠近鋪陳 • My dorm room is on the second floor of the twentieth building. When I walked into my room, I see the clean, white ceiling above my head. The four small beds at both sides of the room contain neatly placed pillows and quilts. On both sides of the beds are four small, white deskwith small metal chairs that fit nicely with the desks. Above the desks are four large, wooden bookcases with an orderly arrangement of books and files. Underneath the desks are neatly stacked blankets and other objects.

  8. 可以客觀和主觀來描寫 • 客觀 • Hong Kong is a crowded city that is filled with life. From the island of Kowloon, you can look across the harbor and see the lights of Hong Kong at night. It has one of the most spectacular city skylines in the entire world. The architecture is fascinating, with many unusual skyscrapers reaching high into the sky. Behind these magnificent buildings is a mountain, and many apartments and other buildings have been built on the slopes of the mountain. They are amazing feats of architecture.

  9. 主觀 • One of myfavorite places to visit in Taiwan is Kenting.I love to go there because it is almost sunny, and it contains some of the prettiest beaches in Taiwan. Ienjoy going with friends. We can swim, lie in the sun, and relax and read books on the beach. In the center of town there are many restaurants that serve very tasty food.

  10. Love River What will you think of when you talk about Love River?

  11. lights & fireworks canal dragon boat pollution Love River bike music coffee cafe band

  12. Mind map(心智圖) Love River Location Features begins in Kaohsiung County, and runs through Kaohsiung City canal (運河) pollution (汙染) Transportation boat of love (愛之船) entertainment (娛樂) MRT bicycle bus

  13. \ central idea: Love River supporting points: canal pollution boat of the love entertainment example1 example2 example1 example2 example1 example2 example1 example2

  14. canal (運河) • 1.It was a shallow creek(小溪), and it could only be crossed by ferry(擺渡). • 2. It became a canal during the Japanese colonial period(日本殖民時期).

  15. pollution (汙染) • 1.It used to be dirty because of the polluted water released from factories upstream and the waste water out of households. (家庭) • 2. It now becomes clean and clear for the fish to be seen after the hard-working of the city government (市政府).

  16. Boat of Love (愛之船) • 1.It’s a good place for dating. Lovers riding on the boat can enjoy the romantic journey. • 2. At night, people floating up and down the Love River can watch the beautiful scenes on both sides of the river.

  17. Entertainment (娛樂) • 1.Along the Love River are bicycle lanes. In • the late afternoon, many people go biking there for health and pleasure. • 2. It’s also great fun to take a sip of coffee with soft music in the cafés on both banks of the Love River. The light display along the river provides us with enjoyment of sight.

  18. Entertainment (娛樂) • 3. During the Lantern Festival, the Love River is decorated with beautiful laser lights. Water dances and fireworks especially catch everyone’s eyeat night. • 4. Dragon boat race is also a great event held every year. Each team all over Taiwan competes for the medal.

  19. Transportation(交通) • MRT: • Take Orange Line, and get off at City Council(市議會). • Bus: • Take bus o south, o north, 14, 25, 56, 60, 76, 77, 78, 91, 99, 214, 219, or 248. • Bicycle: • Ride along Boai Road(博愛路) and turn left on Hesi Road(河西路).

  20. Outline (大綱) • A. Introduction a. What spot is it ? Love River b. What features will you think of? • 1.canal 2. pollution • 3. boat of love 4. entertainment • c. Please give more details. • 1.1It was a shallow brook, and it could only be • crossed by ferry. • 1.2It became a canal during the Japanese colonial period.

  21. Outline (大綱) • 2.1 It used to be dirty because of the polluted water • released from factories upstream and the waste • water out of households. • 2.2 After the hard-working of the city government, it now becomes clean and clear for the fish to be seen. • 3.1 It’s a good place for dating. Lovers riding on the boat can enjoy the romantic journey. • 3.2 At night, people floating up and down the Love River can watch the beautiful scenes on both sides of the river.

  22. Outline (大綱) • 4.1 Alongthe Love River are bicycle lanes. In the late afternoon, many people go biking there for health and pleasure. • 4.2 It’s also great fun to take a sip of coffee with soft music in the cafés on both banks of the Love River. The light display along the river provides us with enjoyment of sight. • 4.3During the Lantern Festival, Love River is decorated with beautiful laser lights. Water dances and fireworks especially catch everyone’s eyeat night.

  23. Outline (大綱) • 4.4Dragon boat race is also a great event held every year. Each team all over Taiwan competes for the medal.

  24. Outline (大綱) • B. Location & Transportation • a. Where is it? It begins in Kaohsiung County • running through Kaohsiung City, and flows into • Kaohsiung Harbor. • b. Which vehicles can we take? • 1. MRT: Take Orange Line, and get off at City Council. • 2.Bus: Take bus o south, o north, 14, 25, 56, 60, 76, 77, 78, 91, 99, 214, 219, or 248.

  25. Outline (大綱) • 3. Bicycles: • Ride along Boai Road and turn left on Hesi Road. 參考資料: 高雄旅遊網http://khh.travel/tw/

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