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Comment Réviser Ta Lettre de Présentation. Anything missing? . Add whatever required content you may have missed If it’s significant (i.e. more than a simple sentence) ask Mme. Aiello to take another look at the new work
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Anything missing? • Add whatever required content you may have missed • If it’s significant (i.e. more than a simple sentence) ask Mme. Aiello to take another look at the new work • THEN correct your errors using the editing codes in your Livret de Référenceas a guide
Adjective placement • Consider rewriting some sentences to better show you understand adjective placement • Examples: • Le françaisestfantastique. Le françaisestunematièrefantastique. • J’aiunesoeur. Elle s’appelle Tina. Elle est petite. J’aiune petite soeur qui s’appelle Tina.
Paragraphing • Consider reasonable chunking of your sentences. • You can put your work into your new sentence order as you write the good copy, as long as you plan carefully. • Add a sentence or two if you need to, so that your paragraphs make sense. • Example: Maintenant, j’ai des questions pour toi.
Letter format • L’entête: Your first name & initial Allan Drive Middle School Bolton, Ontario, Canada • La date: You know how this looks! • Le destinataire: Your penpal’s name
Letter format cont’d • L’appel: See the posted list in the classroom • Le corps: This is what you drafted and revised • La salutation: See the posted list in the classroom • La signature – Yes, put your name again at the bottom. LAST NAME is optional.