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Teen Suicide ): . By: Harmony Moore (:. Thesis Statement:. Teen suicide is way more important than people make it due to bullying, wanting to end their pain, and their rates are increasing ra pidly . Paragraph One Topic Sentence :.
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Teen Suicide ): By: Harmony Moore (:
Thesis Statement: • Teen suicide is way more important than people make it due to bullying, wanting to end their pain, and their rates are increasing rapidly.
Paragraph One Topic Sentence: • Studies show that one of the main leading causes leading up to suicide is being bullied.
Evidence SentenceParagraph 1: • According to students that attend Yale University “ bully victims are two to nine times more likely to commit suicide than non-victims.”
Paragraph Two Topic Sentence: • For many teens who commit suicide they do it not to end their lives but to end the pain they are in.
Evidence Sentence Paragraph 2: • They're depressed and unhappy; from their point of view their situation is hopeless, their problems unsolvable. It's hard to imagine tomorrow will be any better when you hate your life today. Cause & Effect: The best often die by their own hand, just to get away, and those left behind, can never quite understand, why anybody, would even want to, get away, from, them.
Paragraph 3 topic sentence: • Over the years suicide rates in teens have increased rapidly and continue to grow.
Evidence SentenceParagraph 3 • Justin Patchin stated that within the last few years suicide rates have gone down but within two years the rates skyrocketed back up.
Having a rough day?Place your hand over your heart. Feel that?It’s called purpose. You’re alive for a reason. Don’t give up! (:
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