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小马公开课 4.19 托福写作机经点题. 陈俊桦. 题型面面观. 绝对词 对比类 隐藏绝对词类. 1.Is there a good reason to be impolite(rude) to another person? We should never be impolite to another person. 化干戈为玉帛 VS 化骨绵掌. 文章结构1. 开头段: Disagree
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小马公开课 4.19托福写作机经点题 陈俊桦
题型面面观 • 绝对词 • 对比类 • 隐藏绝对词类
1.Is there a good reason to be impolite(rude) to another person? • We should never be impolite to another person. • 化干戈为玉帛 VS 化骨绵掌
文章结构1 • 开头段: Disagree • 段一:Under no circumstances should we be rude to another person for the reason that the only thing being rude leads to is a worse situation. When someone stepped on my feet, I give him a gentle smile. • 段二: As students, treating your classmates in a polite and good manner can help you cultivate healthy relationship that is conducive to your academic performance. • 段三:As young workers, do not be arrogant only if you have an omnipotent father. If not, being polite is a good policy. It will help you expand your social network, which will lead you to future career success. • 结尾段:Restate your proposition.
文章结构2 • 开头:Agree. There are some extremecircumstances in which being rude is acceptable and even advisable. • 段一: When a marriage or relation breaks down, those hurt have good reason to be impolite. • 段二:When the employee is always late for work or cannot deliver his/her tasks, the boss has good reason to be barbarous. • 段三:When the students always violate the normal order of the class, be careful the teacher will probably hit the ceiling. • 结论: I agree.
对比之:今昔对比 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past.
A>B • 3. Do you agree or disagree? • The car has had a greater effect on society than the airplane has.
结构1 • 开头:同意 • 段一: The car has a longer history and benefits a wider range of individuals. • 段二: The development of automotive industry enormously facilitates short distance transport. • 段三: Many commercial successes can be attributed to the development of cars : motor hotels; expansion use of “credit”, installments; drive-in businesses : drive-in restaurants • 段四: The car has long been an essential export product for countries such as the UK, Japan, Germany.
结构2 • 开头:Disagree • 段一: The development of civil aviation has enormously facilitated long distance transport. As a result, a series of related industries, such as international tourism, overseas study, international express, benefit a great deal. • 段二:In terms of disaster relief, it is the helicopters and airplanes that can indeed play a crucial role in alleviating the serious situation in the nick of time. • 结尾: Based on the above analysis, I disagree.
3. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? • Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that the whole society today expect young people to follow are too strict.
隐藏all • 1. Movies and television programs should present stories in which good people are rewarded and bad people are punished. • 2. Parents should allow children to make mistakes and let them learn from their own mistakes. • 3. Professional athletes, such as football and basketball players, do not deserve the high salaries that they are paid.
绝对词 • 5. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? • In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising.
结构1一边倒 • 开头:agree • 1.big companies • 2. medium-sized companies 3. small companies 结论:advertising campaign budget outweigh other investments.
综合写作 • The passage explores the issue that ..... The professor in the lecture, however, challenges what have been stated in the reading passage. • First of all, the passage maintains that ..., which is against by the professor in the listening material. He/she proves that • In addition, the author claims that .... However, the speaker casts doubt on the reading passage by saying that .... • Finally, it is said that ... in the reading material. However, the professor objects to the point in the reading. According to the lecture, it is believed that
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