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扫码关注 回复： hello sun 获取课件制作、录课等实用工具包. 知识产权声明. 感恩遇见，相互成就，本课件资料仅供您个人参考、教学使用，严禁自行在网络传播，违者依知识产权法追究法律责任。 更多教学资源请关注 公众号：溯恩高中英语. Unit 2 Even if he is green. Creating Your Story 创意续写. Section I. 读原文. Characters Plots. Angie; Matt; Mom; Dad; baby. Where was Angie?

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感恩遇见，相互成就，本课件资料仅供您个人参考、教学使用，严禁自行在网络传播，违者依知识产权法追究法律责任。 更多教学资源请关注 公众号：溯恩高中英语

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  2. Unit 2 Even if he is green

  3. Creating Your Story 创意续写 Section I 读原文 • Characters • Plots Angie; Matt; Mom; Dad; baby • Where was Angie? • Did Angie open the door? How did I get into the tree house? • Why did Angie say she was never going to school again? • What’s my opinion about our family? • How did I convince her?

  4. 1) Where was Angie? She locked herself in the tree house. 2) Did Angie open the door? How did I get into the tree house? No, she didn’t.I crawled through the window opening Dad had cut in the wall. 3) Why did Angie say she was never going to school again? A kid at school made fun of her family, saying that her family was like a circus with different colors and that the new baby wouldn’t really be her brother.

  5. 4) What’s my opinion about our family? Our family is a real family. 5) How did I convince her? The writer tried to convince her by laying out the facts. • Theme Our family is real because we love each other no matter what color our skin is or whether we are adopted or not.

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  8. 读段首句 Paragraph 1: Then I continued with more facts. 原文参考：Angie looked up, still believing that kid at school more than she believed me. I could tell. What facts? • What did she do for me? • What did Mother do for her? • What did Father do for her? • Why? • Angie’s reaction or response? Did Angie believe me?

  9. 读段首句 Show the theme Paragraph2: Angie and I were talking when Mom called, “Hey, guys, are you coming down to meet your little brother?” • Before meeting： • What would I say to Angie? • Would they go down to meet their little brother? • What was their agreement on the baby? • After meeting： • What did the little brother look like? • How would they treat their little brother?

  10. 学生习作中的主要错误： • Where was the brother when he was speaking to the sister? • How old is the baby? What color is the baby? • The first para: Then I continued with more facts. • Facts are not convincing. (only focus on what the brother did; the facts can not show love) • 4. Real relationship among the family members • 6. 情节脱节：come / climb down the tree (缺少) – meet the baby

  11. Possible Version Para 1:“And who helped Mom bake and decorate that excellent cake for my last birthday?” I asked. Angie whispered that it was she because she was my sister. “And who stayed up late taking care of you every time you fell ill?” Angie pursed her lips and replied it was Mom. “And who built this tree house because you wanted one so badly, even after he’d hit his thumb with the hammer?” Angie giggled. “It’s a good thing Daddy doesn’t build tree houses for a job.” I knew what she meant. The tree-house floor was full of gaps. Still, it was a great tree house built with love, just like our family. Our family is real because we love each other.

  12. Para 2: Angie and I were talking when Mom called, “Hey, guys, are you coming down to meet your little brother?” Hearing that, I reached out my hand, asking Angie, “Shall we go now?” She took my hand and I pulled her to her feet. “When Mom and Dad brought you home for the first time, I felt proud and responsible as a big brother. The first time we see the new baby, we’ll know he’s part of our family. We’ll love him and want to take care of him.” “Even if he’s green?” Angie asked with a grin. “Even if,” I answered, and I let down the tree-house ladder.  Version 1

  13. Para 2: Angie and I were talking when Mom called, “Hey, guys, are you coming down to meet your little brother?” Hearing this, we stopped our conversation and let down the ladder. When we got down, a cute baby sleeping peacefully in my mother’s arms appealed to us at once. I approached and cautiously touched his soft hair. He meant a treasure to us, bringing new blood to our family. Angie, too, came and stared at the baby with great amazement, now believing he was part of our family. I could tell. She understands the meaning of family lies in the sympathy, help and love. Despite our skin, we will bravely overcome the difficulties we confront with together. That is the real family. Version 2

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