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ISA/ACER Testing Feedback. PUTTING YOUR BEST FOOT FORWARD. Story: Development. Many students wrote long introductions Not enough time to conclude, or even reach the climax Several students wrote about topics that had nothing to do with travel delays
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ISA/ACER Testing Feedback PUTTING YOUR BEST FOOT FORWARD
Story: Development • Many students wrote long introductions • Not enough time to conclude, or even reach the climax • Several students wrote about topics that had nothing to do with travel delays • YOU MUST INCORPORATE THE PROMPT SOMEWHERE INTO YOUR WRITING • Suggestion: Start in media res(in the middle of the action) and flashback later if you have time
Essay: Development • Most students had a clear thesis • However, you MUST take a stand • In 30 minutes you do not have the time to develop an essay that considers multiple viewpoints • There is not right or wrong answer • Use specific, real examples: • “My family is composed of five people and it’s perfect.” • “My friend’s family has eight people; it’s far too many.”
Story: Organization • Again, it may be a good idea to start in the rising action or near the climax • In the first three lines of the story you must establish: • Main characters • Setting • The conflict • You can always dash off a quick resolution if you are running out of time
Essay: Organization • Good overall • A clear thesis that elaborates reasons will guide the rest of your essay • Each reason in the thesis becomes a body paragraph • Introductions are often too long • 2-3 sentences in your introduction are sufficient • Spend more time developing ideas
Conventions • Comma splices: write shorter sentences • Fragments: make sure your ideas are complete. • Even though we fight sometimes = incomplete idea • Word choice • Where = donde / were = eran, fueron
Dialogue Dashes are NEVER used for dialogue in English “I can’t believe this,” my father exclaimed. “Darn!” Quotation comma small end of punctuation Mark inside case sentence inside quotes quotation letter capital