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英语写作复习 议论文

英语写作复习 议论文. 优点：. save time,. cheaper …. Shopping on the Internet. 缺点：. quality?. not safe/ pay ， …. 网络购物究竟有何 利弊 呢 ?. Beginning:. Main part ( 正文 ):. Ending:. An outline. 直接点题，开门见山. 总结，号召，个人观点. Beginning:. Main part ( 正文 ):. Ending:. 网络购物有 优点 也有 缺点 呢 ? 请写一篇短文， 谈谈网上购物的好坏。.

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英语写作复习 议论文

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  1. 英语写作复习议论文

  2. 优点： save time, cheaper … Shopping on the Internet 缺点： quality? not safe/ pay，…

  3. 网络购物究竟有何利弊呢?

  4. Beginning: Main part (正文): Ending: An outline 直接点题，开门见山 总结，号召，个人观点

  5. Beginning: Main part (正文): Ending: 网络购物有优点也有缺点呢? 请写一篇短文， 谈谈网上购物的好坏。 Shopping on the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages 1. Advantages: save time cheaper … 2. disadvantages: quality？ pay / not safe Every coin has two sides . We should … properly.

  6. 1.completeness(完整) 高分作文四要素：

  7. 1.迂回表达难点,不受汉语牵制. 网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好坏。 优点： 省时间，更便宜 ；不受营业时间的限制 缺点：看不到实物；网络支付不安全。 不受营业时间的限制 go shopping at any time can only see pictures 看不到实物

  8. 1.迂回表达难点,不受汉语牵制. make exams easier 降低考试难度 use both sides of the paper 充分利用纸张 不遗余力 try one’s best 被大学录取 become a university student 翻天覆地的变化 great changes 举足轻重 play an important part

  9. 2.简单句 She is kind. We all like her. 3.优化简单句 （通过从句，好词好句） She is so kind that we all like her.

  10. Shopping on the Internet has advantages and disadvantages . Shopping on the Internet has many advantages. We can save a lot of time. We can buy cheaper things. We can also go shopping at any time. It also has disadvantages. We can only see the pictures of the things on the Internet. So we don’t know about the quality. We need to pay on the Net. It is not safe. We should be careful when shopping on the Net. We should use the Internet properly . It can serve us better. We can not only save lots of time but also buy cheaper things . It’s not safe to pay on the Net. We should use the Internet properly so that it can serve us better.

  11. 1.completeness(完整) 高分作文四要素： 2. fluency(连贯性）

  12. Linking expressions ( 议论文中的衔接词 for example such as besides what’s more even worse what’s worse 举例： 递进： 转折: 原因: 结果: 目的: 对比: 总结： 个人想法： 多个观点： however , but because of thanks to because as a result so so that in order that in order to do while on one hand + on the other hand in a word in all/short last but not least in my opinion/view First,… Second,… Third, … Finally,…

  13. Shopping on the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages. _________________,shopping on the Internet has many advantages.__________, we can not only save lots of time but also buy cheaper things . _____________,we can shop at any time . ____________________,it also has disadvantages. We can only see the pictures . So we don’t know about the quality. ________________, it’s not safe to pay on the Net. ____________, we should use the Internet properly so that it can serve us better. On one hand, For example, What’s more, On the other hand, What’s worse, In my view

  14. 1.completeness(完整) 高分作文四要素： 2. fluency(连贯性） 3. correctness(正确）

  15. Check: Grammar Spelling Punctuation 标点

  16. Group competition !(小组竞赛） 1.短文中共11个错误 。 2.一旦发现错误，直接站起来并指出 错误。 3.找到错误最多的组获胜。 1.I want to make you understand 2.Now many people plan to 3.buy cars instead of bike.Theythink 4.it’s fast to drive cars.But I think that 5.car .make the air dirty. It’s easy .to 6.by bike to school or work. Ride bikes 7. can help people keep health, and, 8..some students even advise their 9. parents cycle to work. Ready go!

  17. Dear Editor: Now many people plan to buy cars instead of bike. They think it’s faster to drive cars. But I think that cars make the air dirty. It’s easy to by bike to school or work. Ride bikes can help people keep health, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes always make me happy, so I prefer to ride to school. I am quiet happy to see that many students ride to school in China, some students even advise their parents cycle to work. Jane 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 Spelling Grammar Punctuation

  18. Dear Editor, Now many people plan to buy cars instead of bikes. They think it’s fast to drive cars. But I think that cars make the air dirty. It’s easy to ride to school or work. Riding bikes can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes always makes me happy, I prefer to ride to school. I am quite happy to see that many students ride to school in China. Some students even advise their parents to cycle to work. Jane

  19. 高分作文四要素： 1.completeness(完整) 2. fluency(连贯) 3. correctness ( 正确) 4. handwriting

  20. 中考英语作文命题趋向之一 -----突出时代性

  21. 七嘴八舌！ 出谋献策！ What can we do to reduce the air pollution?

  22. stop smoking What can we do to reduce the air pollution? spread messages about protecting environment ride bikes or walk

  23. 中国的空气污染越来越严重，为了控制空气污染，中国的空气污染越来越严重，为了控制空气污染， 请给出4个建议并提出号召或希望。 建议： 1.多种树 2. 戒烟 3. 以步代车 4.宣传环保知识 Beginning： （开门见山，直奔主题。） 1.plant trees 2.stop smoking Main part 3.ride bikes or walk 4.spread messages … Ending: （ 号召或希望）

  24. Good beginnings: In China, the air pollution has become a serious problem. It’s everyone’s duty to control it. The air pollution has become more and more serious. We should do everything we can to control it. How can we reduce the air pollution in China? Here are some suggestions.

  25. 中国的空气污染越来越严重，为了控制空气污染，中国的空气污染越来越严重，为了控制空气污染， 请给出4个建议并提出号召或希望。 建议： 1.多种树 2. 戒烟 3. 以步代车 4.宣传环保知识 Beginning： （开门见山，直奔主题。） 1.plant trees 2.stop smoking Main part 3.ride bikes or walk 4.spread messages … Ending: （ 号召或希望）

  26. 1. We should / had better / must… How to give suggestions: 2. We ought to / are supposed to … 3. It’s necessary/ important for us to … 4. Doing … is a good way to …

  27. 中国的空气污染越来越严重，为了控制空气污染，中国的空气污染越来越严重，为了控制空气污染， 请给出4个建议并提出号召或希望。 建议： 1.多种树 2. 戒烟 3. 以步代车 4.宣传环保知识 Beginning： （开门见山，直奔主题。） 1.plant trees 2.stop smoking Main part 3.ride bikes or walk 4.spread messages … Ending: （ 号召或希望）

  28. Good endings: • In short , we should do our best to reduce • the air pollution! Let’s say no to pollution! 2. In a word , if we follow the advice above, the air will be fresher and fresher! • 3. In all , let’s fight with the the air pollution! • We need fresh air!

  29. 满分12分 扣分栏 - 0 - 0 - 0 总得分____

  30. Before writing: An outline (完整性） While writing After writing : Check（准确性） • Indirect • Simple sentences • Improve • linking words （连贯性） 书写工整！

  31. Homework: • 目前,考试作弊现象严重,请围绕以下要点写一篇文章. • 原因: 1. 考试太难 2. 自身努力不够、 • 3.大量时间花在网络上 • 看法和建议: • 作弊有害 2. 做人要诚实 学习要努力 • 3.学校减少或降低考试难度

  32. Goodbye! Thank you!

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