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How do teenage curfews at the mall impact the community?. Potential thesis, part 1. While teenage curfews were intended to reduce conflict at the mall, these laws may cause bigger issues for the community. What points could you foresee in this essay?. Dangerous alternatives to malls
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Potential thesis, part 1 • While teenage curfews were intended to reduce conflict at the mall, these laws may cause bigger issues for the community
Dangerous alternatives to malls • Decrease in responsibility • Teenagers as consumers • Increased altercations as a result of laws • Cost of maintaining security at mall
P 306 of A&B • Choose 3 of the points we chose to create a detailed thesis • Then, create 3 topic sentences for this hypothetical essay
Although malls put in curfews to prevent loitering, in actuality these curfews cause teenagers to engage in more dangerous alternatives, send a negatuve message to teenagers, and cost more money for the malls.
From the topics the students created last class, create three problematic questions from this list. • Ask your group to give you three additional questions. • As a group, vote on the two most interesting questions.
Turn this question into a thesis with tension. • Develop a list of 5 potential points for your thesis • Create a detailed thesis with the 3 best points • Create three topic sentences for your thesis