中考英语作文评分细则

1. 中考英语作文评分细则

2. It’s _______to study geography at school 1.确定你的观点； 2.围绕观点进行论述 3.要有具体事例（一至两点即可），并说明其原因

3. 2011中考英语作文评分细则 A节：每个信息点1分，共5分。错写、漏写均不得分，大小写忽略。 B节：先看其内容表达是否切题，然后根据内容和语言确定其所属档次并按该档次的要求来衡量，确定并调整档次： 各档次给分要求如下： 第四档 优秀 （19---15分） 写出全部要点（四个要点）：①补全标题； ②围绕观点进行叙述； ③举出具体事例1—2点；④说明原因； 语言优美且准确无误，行文连贯，表达清楚，文中使用一些高级词汇、从句、关联词语等可得满分。

4. 第三档 好 （14---11分） 写出四个要点中的三个，语言基本准确，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 第二档 一般 （10---5分） 1. 写出四个要点中的二个，语言有些错误，尚能表意，定为本档中的上线。 2. 只写出一个要点，语言错误较多，个别句子可读，或只写出内容要点有关的几个单词，定为本档中的下线。 第一档 差 （4---0分） 无标题，语言错误较多，个别句子可读，或只写出内容要点有关的几个单词。

5. 要点给分说明： • 确定你的观点(即补全标题) 得4分 • 围绕观点进行叙述 （In my idea, …）几句不限，得4分 • 举出具体事例无论一点还是两点均得6分 • 说明原因无论一点还是两点可得2分（只要有语言表达有所体现即可，无论是“围绕观点叙述”还是“对具体事例”所给出的原因均可）。 • 卷面整洁，字迹工整可加1分。 • 文中使用一些高级词汇、从句、关联词语等可加1分。

6. ： • 扣分说明： • 满分卷纸如书写不工整且涂抹现象严重，可扣卷面分1分。 • 卷面词数没有达到60词，根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线） • 如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事例不符视为跑题）根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生语言功底好，写跑题则降为下一档的上线。 • 如出现文字错误1-2点在所属档内不扣分，累加三处错误扣一分。 • 如出现语法错误: 短文时态用错扣除1分，句型结构错误2处扣1分。 • 满分卷纸如书写不工整且涂抹现象严重，可扣卷面分1分。 • 卷面词数没有达到60词，根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线） • 如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事例不符视为跑题）根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生语言功底好，写跑题则降为下一档的上线。 • 如出现文字错误1-2点在所属档内不扣分，累加三处错误扣一分。 • 如出现语法错误: 短文时态用错扣除1分，句型结构错误2处扣1分。

7. It’sinteresting to study geography at school 4

8. It’sinteresting to study geography at school. Geography is one of the subjects in middle schools. In my idea, It’sinteresting to study geography at school 6

9. It’s boring to study geography at school • lots of people think in middle school our be happy but I don’t think so in middle school my favourite subject is PE.and the geography I want to beat it .It’s so boring to study geography. I can see the map . I think it’s ok but teacher teach me you must study geograph oh my god I really don’t like it .it really boring.I think geography is bad and bad.But my teacher asked me it’s important very important.So I learned it now I know the geography is helpful for us but it really boring 13

10. Interesting I think it’s interesting to study geography at school. Do you know why I think it’s interesting to study geography at school.Now I’ll tell you.Because if we learn geography well it’s useful and interesting. One day my teacher asked me do you know where is the Channel Tunnel.I said No.That day my teacher told me”everywhere is in the world.Since that day I know it’s interesting to study geography at school.That night,I went home and told my mother where is the Channel Tunnel.My mother was very happy and said you are wonderful.That night I was very happy.it’s interesting to study geography .Because we can know which country is beautiful famous .what is the weather like in the place that we want to know.So I think it is interesting to study geography at school. 16

11. Interesting Studying geography is interesting.It’s for many reasons. Firstly as everyone know geography is a subject that we must study.So studying geography is my duty and we should be interested in it. Secondly geography is helpful when I lost my way on a trip.It usually help me to find the correct route. What’s more.It’s also teaches me how to plan a trip.so it’s very helpful. Finally it brings me news from all over the world,and I can know a lot of local manners.Such as how to say hello to Japanese what to say first in the USA. For these reasons .I prefer geography .In a word ,geography teaches me a lot.And I think It’s interesting to study geography at school. 18

12. Necessary It’s necessary to study geography well.As the world is developing faster and faster. Many of us would rather choose to travel abroad instead of studying at home. Let us suppose that if we know nothing about geography how can we enjoy the good time？I can still remember the terrible experience when I was in France with mom .Because we didn’t know much about geography knowledge.we almost lost our ways. The last but not least geography really plays an important role in our lives it’s helpful to our own development.As a result.it’s obvious that studying geography is necessary . So we must try our best at school. 20

13. First of all,……………………………... ………………………. In addition…………………………….. ………………………………….. What’s more,…………………………. …………………………………… The last but not least……………….. ………………………… In a word,…………………….

14. First of all,studying geography makes great different to us.we can know more about our earth,so that we can lead a better life. In addition,studying geograph brings us a lot of fun,as a result it’s good for us all. What’s more,we can understand the climate better and we can choose a better place to live in.If we study geograph well,it will be difficult for us to get lost.That is to say we will be safer than before. The last but not least in order to be a good student,we are supposed to be good at any subject. In a word,It’s important to study geography at school.

15. 2012 中考书面表达 人生就像上面的漫画，充满喜怒哀乐，时而恐慌，时而陷入沉思，请你以 I like to be ___为题，写篇短文，叙述与上面漫画表情有关的一段故事或经历（词数80-100）。步骤与要点如下： 1.确定主题，并在文中说明原因； 2.围绕主题，进行叙述； 3.讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。

16. 要求： 1补全标题（可选择A节方框中的词汇，也可选用其它词汇); 2 字迹工整，语言规范； 3 鼓励写出真情实感，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分；

17. 要点给分说明： • 确定你的观点(即补全标题) 得5分 • 围绕观点进行叙述或举出具体事例为四档作文。（即15分起）

18. ： 扣分说明： • 如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事例不符视为跑题）根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生语言功底好，写跑题则降为下一档的上线。 • 累加三处以内错误扣一分。 • 满分卷纸如书写不工整且涂抹现象严重，可扣卷面分1分。 • 卷面词数没有达到60词，根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线） • 如考生写跑题（标题与文中叙述或事例不符视为跑题）根据情况酌情降一档（下一档的上线或下线）比如该生语言功底好，写跑题则降为下一档的上线。 • 如出现文字错误1-2点在所属档内不扣分，累加三处错误扣一分。 • 如出现语法错误: 短文时态用错扣除1分，句型结构错误2处扣1分。

19. ` I like to be happy 5

20. ` I like to be a doctor 4

21. Ilike to be happy So Ilike to be happy。 6-8

22. Smile or laugh by opening the mouth and showing the teeth.this is happy .I like to be happy.Because this is good and makes me relax .One day,we had a exam .but I failed ,I was sad .My parents were angry to me and shouted at me ,I was very sad .I hope that my parents can understand me .I told my teacher .My teacher is kind and encourages me ,I was very happy.I always happy.The next time ,I passed the exam. My parents was happy .They gave me many clothes .I like to be happy. 15

23. . • It’s common knowledge that happiness plays an important part in the world .It can make us do some things better.It can also make us confident .So I would like to be happy. • One day ,there was an exam.It was very important .So many students were afraid to face it.They felt very nervous .And they were afraid to fail the exam.But I was very happy to get a chance to prove myself .And I reviewed the lessons carefully.In the end I passed the exam successfully as well as got high marks. • I have learned about the importance of happiness .So let’s be happy together. 20

26. 2010 If I enter my favourite high school,I’ll _________1.确定主题; 2.围绕主题（学习，生活，个人成长等）进行叙述 3.要有具体事例（1-2点即可）并说明其原因。

27. 2009 I’ll tell the good news to____ • 1当时的心情； • 2 告知师长，亲人或朋友的原因； • 3.临行前做哪些准备 • 4.回国后有哪些打算

28. 2008I’ll use the Students’ cards to buy____ 1所购物品的名称； 2 购买该物品的原因 3.想用该物品做哪些事情

29. 给学生的话： 1作文要打草稿 ，尽量不要勾抹 2.找好点，分段写让批卷老师一目了然， 只要不少点，基本就是四档作文。

30. 教学反思： 1重视1600词 ２教会中等及中下等生抓点，和分段 　　３关注好学生作文中的细节问题，（名词单复数，单三，动名词作主语，宾语重句语序，时态，等）。 　　４给作文教学足够的时间 5 总结出能百搭的句子和短语　　　　　　　　　　　　

31. 　　　　　教研员的话： 　１．不是考学生地理知识。 　２．英语作文不能与语文作文等同看待。 　３．鼓励学生写出真情实感，背的作文不 给满分。 　４．作文的包装很重要。 　５．此次作文毕业考试题里有渗透。

32. Have a nice summer holiday !