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TEXTUAL MEANING: Creating well organized and cohesive text

TEXTUAL MEANING: Creating well organized and cohesive text. Helena I. R. Agustien Malang, 29- 30 April 2019. FOCUS:. The organization and flow of information and ideas at different levela of text: text opener, paragraph openers (topic sentences), the sentence opener ( clause Theme).

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TEXTUAL MEANING: Creating well organized and cohesive text

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  1. TEXTUAL MEANING:Creating well organizedand cohesive text Helena I. R. Agustien Malang, 29-30 April 2019

  2. FOCUS: • The organization and flow of information and ideas at different levela of text: text opener, paragraph openers (topic sentences), the sentence opener (clause Theme). • The shift between meanings closely aligned to concrete experience and meanings which are compressed and packaged into abstractions (nominalization) • The different types of links and connections across a text that make the text cohesive.

  3. HOW DO WE TEACH WRITING? WE TEACH WRITING AT • Sentence level • Paragraph level • Text level

  4. SENTENCE-BASED WRITING

  5. SENTENCE 1 Bread makes us ill as it does not contain the right nutrition or calories that we need to keep us warm in winter. SENTENCE 2 Rotting bread pollutes our water and causes nasty surface algae which kills our fish and gives us diseases. SENTENCE 3 It also makes our water smell.

  6. COHESIOVE TEXT: PARALEL STRUCTURE

  7. You Needed MeAnne Murray • I cried a tear, you wiped it dryI was confused, you cleared my mindI sold my soul, you bought it back for meAnd held me up and gave me dignitySomehow you needed me • You gave me strength to stand alone againTo face the world out on my own againYou put me high upon a pedestalSo high that I could almost see eternityYou needed me, you needed me • And I can't believe it's youI can't believe it's trueI needed you and you were thereAnd I'll never leave, why should I leave?I'd be a fool 'cause I finally found someone who really cares • You held my hand when it was coldWhen I was lost you took me homeYou gave me hope when I was at the endAnd turned my lies back into truth againYou even called me "friend” • You gave me strength to stand alone againTo face the world out on my own againYou put me high upon a pedestalSo high that I could almost see eternityYou needed me, you needed me • You needed me, you needed me

  8. DAILY PRAYER

  9. PARAGRAPH-BASED WRITING

  10. WRITING PARAGRAPH

  11. COHESION: THEME-RHEME STRUCTURE

  12. MODEL PARAGRAPH

  13. GENRE-BASED WRITING

  14. Text Types: Monologue/Essay

  15. FACTUAL TEXT TYPES: LITERARY TEXT TYPES:

  16. PUTTING A TWIST TO A RECOUNT

  17. Change the text into a recount

  18. CHANGING STYLE IMPROVING LITERACY LEVEL

  19. Speech written down (Lady gaga) the really fantastic thing about kindness is that it’s free… and it can’t hurt you or anybody else… it is the thing that brings us all together… in time of chaos and crisis… what we all tend to do is start pointing fingers at where we think the bad guys are… where the evil is… we all start arguing, everybody has different opinions about that …please do not forget… hatred or evil, whatever you want call it… is intelligent. it’s smart and it’s invisible. It doesn’t have a color, I doesn’t have a race, it doesn’t have a religion, it has no politics… it’s an invisible snake that while it is planning to make its attack it is thinking to itself I am going to divide my enemy into smaller less strong groups and then I am going to make them hate each other so that it’s easier to take them down… and as we’re all yelling at each other… trying to figure out which group it is that’s causing the problem evil’s winning… all around us… we need to shift the perspective … the solution is that we need to build a kinder and braver world… get rid of those labels … these different factions… gay, straight… rich, poor… mentally ill, not mentally ill… gun owner, not gun owner… none of this can matter anymore,,, we are unified in our humanity and we the only thing that we all know we all appreciate in one another is kindness… so this has to come before all things and you must operate relentlessly this way… with everything you have…

  20. written style with interpersonal features • Kindness is fantastic because it is free and it cannot hurt anybody. It is the thing that brings us together. • In times of chaos and crisis we tend to point fingers at whoever we think as the bad guys or the evils. We start arguing and presenting different opinions. However, we sometimes forget that hatred or evil is intelligent. It is smart and invisible. It does not have a color, a race, religion or politics. It is an invisible snake that while it is planning to make its attack, it is thinking of dividing its enemy into smaller and less strong groups that hate each other. In this way, it is easier to take the enemies down. • In the mean time the groups are yelling at each other and trying to figure out which group it is that is causing the problem. This is when evil is winning. It happens all around us and that is why we need to shift our perspective. The solution is that we need to build a kinder and a braver world. We need to get rid of labels such as gay and straight, rich and poor, mentally ill and not mentally ill, gun owner and not gun owner, and so on. None of this can matter anymore. • When those issues do not matter anymore, we are unified in our humanity. The only thing that matters is that we all appreciate each other’s kindness. Kindness has to come before everything else. We need to operate relentlessly with everything we have.

  21. written style 2 (objectified) The greatest thing about kindness is that it is free. Acting in kindness comes at no great cost or risk of inflicting harm upon oneself or others. It is the great catalyst that unites people of all creeds. Human beings often feel the need to understand the evil that lies at the heart of great chaos and turmoil There is often a moral drive to identify the villains if only to put a face on this evil. What follows, almost invariably, is the tendency draw lines in the sand, to smear and vilify the other. While evil is abstract and inanimate, hatred is conscious and tangible. Hatred is cunning and invisible. It knows no color nor race. It acts without regard for religion nor politics, an unseen serpent poised to strike with a singular purpose: to sow discord and division. Once divided, society will fracture into smaller, more vulnerable factions, turning on each other, paving the way towards destruction. And all the while we will remain oblivious, pointing fingers and laying blame while evil triumphs. Perspective is key. The solution is to foster a kinder and braver world that is not defined by factions and labels like gay, straight, rich, poor, mentally ill, sane, gun owners, non-gun-owners. These things can no longer be made to matter. Humanity is united by the common belief that kindness can be found in one another. It is this belief that must take precedence in finding common ground on which fruitful alliances can be built in the pursuit of real solutions. (Aditya)

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