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Chapter 8. Using Sources. Contents (Writing and Grammar). Identifying Plagiarism Acknowledging (grammar and writing) Paraphrasing and word choice Direct and Indirect Quotations Voice Clauses to phrases/ phrases to clauses and other structure manipulations Summarizing. Plagiarism.
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Chapter 8 Using Sources
Contents (Writing and Grammar) • Identifying Plagiarism • Acknowledging (grammar and writing) • Paraphrasing and word choice • Direct and Indirect Quotations • Voice • Clauses to phrases/ phrases to clauses and other structure manipulations • Summarizing
Plagiarism • What is it? • The theft of words, ideas, or art • Am I a bad person if I plagiarize? • No. Most plagiarism is done out of ignorance or misunderstanding of source acknowledgement.
Some Famous Plagiarists • Martin Luther King, Jr. (social leader) • Plagiarized his doctoral dissertation and parts of his “I Have a Dream” Speech. • H.G. Wells (writer War of the Worlds and The Time Machine) • Began his career through plagiarizing another author • George Harrison (from the Beatles) • Plagiarized the melody of his famous “My Sweet Lord” song from another musician.
Plagiarism • So it’s okay to plagiarize? • No. And it’s nearly impossible to do it.
Plagiarism pg. 222 • 1. Plagiarism is cheating. • 2. A person (including you) owns everything he or she writes. • 3. Plagiarism is against the law
Acknowledgements pg 223 • Use the correct grammar when acknowledging a source • Inform the reader about the name of the author and of the source • Use reporting verbs to provide this information
Verbs of Report pg 223 • say • report • state • claim feel • argue deny • believe maintain • contend • indicate • point out • show Facts Theories/ opinions Demonstration
Practice • Read the source material from wikipedia.com • Use the Wikipedia source for the effects of World War II in Europe to practice these verbs of report. • Practice using a factual reporting verb, a theoretical reporting verb, and a demonstrative reporting verb (3 citations, direct or indirect)
Acknowledgement Patterns:First Mention • Practicing Pattern 1: • “There were six chickens last night, but when I woke up this morning . . .nothing.” Fox Maxwell Prattville, Alabama • Practicing Pattern 2: • “The meteor shower is a regular event that occurs every thirty-six years over Madison County, and will continue to do so for another 2000 years.” Chief Meteorologist Ruben Stanley Montgomery Skywatch Weather Station Montgomery, Alabama
Acknowledgement Patterns:First Mention • Practicing Pattern 3: • “Mohammar Gaddafi was a despot, the people of Libya considered him a despot, and the international community holds him in contempt of common decency.” “Libya’s Power Struggle” Time, April 4, 2011 • Practicing Pattern 4: • “The writing on the wall predicts huge job losses, in the thousands, in Wisconsin if Governor Walker signs the July union-busting Bill on his desk.” Author Unknown “Unions at Stake” USA Today March 3, 2011
Acknowledgment Patterns: Subsequent Mention • Practicing Pattern 1: • “I honestly believe there is a chicken thief in the neighborhood. I even know who it is. Why, it’s Bob down the road. He’s always been jealous of my beautiful chickens.” Fox Maxwell Prattville, AL • Practicing Pattern 2: • “The shower is scheduled to last for 2 short hours. Visibility is good for the first hour, but around 1 AM some light cloud cover may obscure viewing in the metro area.” Chief Meteorologist Ruben Stanley Montgomery Skywatch Weather Station Montgomery, Alabama
When Do I Acknowledge? • In general, if the information can be found in four or more sources then the information is factual and does not need to be acknowledged. • Ex. “The sky is blue.” Barack Obama • You do not need to quote or acknowledge Mr. Obama because this is common, factual information.
Paraphrasing pg. 225 • “Give the same idea using different words.” • Choose synonymous words carefully • Use words with similar contextual meaning • Ex. You want to paraphrase a scientific article about insects. The article uses the phrase “mass of insects.” “Congregation” is a religious synonym of “mass,” so it would not be accurate to substitute “congregation” when discussing science. • Match tone • Use as many reasonable changes as possible
Paraphrasing • Synonyms • Changing Word Forms • Indirect quotation • Changing Voice • Manipulating Structure • Changing Word Order
Paraphrasing: Synonyms • A word with the same approximate meaning, tone, and contextual meaning is a synonym • Discuss the examples on pg. 226 • Sources: paper or digital thesaurus • In your journal, practice finding synonyms as you paraphrase this example. • “Regarding cost, the vehicle on the lot is not attainable.” • Share with a partner and evaluatethe synonyms • Diagram
Changing Word Forms • Use your paraphrased sentence from the previous exercise to practice new word forms. • Ex. “Regarding cost, the vehicle on the lot is not attainable.” • The vehicle cost prevents attainment. • Share with a partner • Diagram as a class.
Diagrams: 10-20 • Subject Complements • Predicate adjectives • Predicate nominatives • Linking Verbs • Noun References • Direct Objects • Pronoun objects (whom, what)
Skipped • Changing Voice • Changing Word Order
Clauses to Phrases&Phrases to Clauses • See Word Document for example breakdown • Choose one topic sentence from the original cause-effect topic sentences (there are three) and try to paraphrase by converting clauses to phrases or phrases to clauses. • Don’t worry about being totally correct! Do your best and share your work with the class.
Identify and Practicing Techniques pg 229-231 • Identify the techniques together for exercise 8.3 • Complete 8.4 on page 231 for homework
Direct Quote or Paraphrase?Pg 226-227 • When using sources, how do you choose between a direct quotation or a paraphrase? • Use a direct quotation when: • When the original is more succinct • When the original is more witty • When the original has greater impact • Finally, avoid overusing direct quotations—try to paraphrase whenever possible.
Final Rules for Paraphrasing • 1. Acknowledge source (author or source name) • 2. Avoid “I think” or “I believe” phrases • 3. Research carefully • 4. Use quotation marks for direct quotations • 5. Be accurate • 6. Maintain tone • 7. Avoid adding your own beliefs or ideas to the paraphrase • 8. Close the source when paraphrasing
8.5 • Individual paraphrase assignments for homework. • Paraphrase one of the four quotations in your journal (title: 8.5), bring your paraphrase to class the next day, and share it
Summary, Quote Punctuation, andIndirect Quotation Rules • Read the definition of a summary on page on page 233 at home. For this chapter, we will not practice the summary. • Read the punctuation rules for quotations on page 235 (“Rules for Direct Quotation”) at home. We will not drill these rules. Instead, when you encounter a situation where you want to quote directly, refer to this page and find the rule you want to use. • Do not read the section “Rules for Indirect Quotation” on page 237. The rules here are for reporting spoken sources, not written sources, so it is not useful to us.