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EDITING and PROOFREADING. Editing for Punctuation, Sentence Style, and Word Choice DISCLAIMER: These are the most commonly used and misused rules/guidelines….they are not intended to be all-inclusive . COMMAS – When to Use Them. Commas are used most often:
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EDITING and PROOFREADING Editing for Punctuation, Sentence Style, and Word Choice DISCLAIMER: These are the most commonly used and misused rules/guidelines….they are not intended to be all-inclusive
COMMAS – When to Use Them • Commas are used most often: • To separate an introductory phrase or clause from the rest of the sentence • To separate two independent clauses that are joined by a coordinating conjunction • To separate items in a series • To separate a nonrestrictive clause (clause that does not supply information essential to a sentence’s meaning)
COMMAS – When NOT to Use Them • Do NOT use a comma: • If a dependent clause follows an independent clause: She is the only daughter although her father has six sons. • to set off a restrictive clause (essential to meaning): The child who is overlooked is often the daughter.
SEMICOLONS • Semicolons, like commas, separate certain elements of a sentence • BUT, they separate only grammatically equivalent elements - for example, two independent clauses • In most cases, commas separate items in a series • BUT, if one or more of the items in a series already include commas, separate the items with a semicolons: • Orwell set his works in Paris, France; London, England; and Moulmein, Burma.
QUOTATION MARKS • Quotation marks are used to set off quoted speech or writing and titles of essays, stories, and poems • Remember: • Commas and periods are always placed before quotation marks • Colons and semicolons are always placed after quotation marks • Question marks and exclamation points can go either before or after quotation marks, depending on whether or not they are part of the quoted material
DASHES and COLONS • Dashes are occasionally used to set off and emphasize information within a sentence, but use them in moderation • Jessica Mitford wrote a scathing critique of the funeral industry – and touched off an uproar. • Colons are used to introduce lists, examples, and clarifications, and they should always be receded by a complete sentence.
SENTENCE STYLE and WORD CHOICE • Eliminate awkward phrasing • Be sure your sentences are concise – eliminate repetition/redundancy, delete empty words/expressions, cut what is not absolutely necessary • Be sure sentences are varied – vary length, structure, and openings • Simple, compound, complex sentences • Choose your words carefully – choose specific words that identify particular examples and details • Avoid cliches