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Be Prepared … Grab a paper from the table Sit with your Puppet Group Have Day 2 Homework out. Give me some points Mr. B. I will be around to give you points for Day 2 Notes!. Chapter 13 Day 3 Puppet Play. A. Writing Clear. B . Elaborate and Explain. B . Elaborate and Explain.
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Be Prepared… • Grab a paper from the table • Sit with your Puppet Group • Have Day 2 Homework out Give me some points Mr. B
B. Elaborate and Explain Poor Examples Narrator: The Mormons moved out West. Character: I am moving out to California! James K. Polk: We should annex Texas.
B. Elaborate and Explain Precise Examples Narrator: After facing heavy persecution in New York, the Mormons were forced to emigrate out West to seek refuge. Character: I am going to move to San Francisco, California in hopes striking it rich by mining gold. James K. Polk: By annexing the state of Texas from Mexico, the United States can add more land to the country.
C. Substantial Dialogue 1) Do all my characters sound alike when they speak? 2) Am I revealing character traits and emotions? 3) Is my dialogue overbearing?
C. Substantial Dialogue 4) Am I moving the story forward? 5) Am I allowing my characters to react to what is being said? 6) Am I using correct punctuation at the end of a dialogue passage to indicate the emotion?