Moving to the Five Paragraph Narrative Essay

1. Moving to the Five Paragraph Narrative Essay A Write On Activity

2. How do you move from the graphic organizer to a five paragraph essay? • I had a surprise • party. • Only family • Really shocked • Held at zoo • Grandma made • my favorite cake. • Triple layer • Chocolate • Trick candles • Biggest piece My eighth birthday was the best one I ever had. • My parents gave • me the best gift • of all. • Puppy • Goldy • Best friend As you can see, my eighth birthday was a most memorable celebration.

3. Begin with the introductory paragraph. • The introductory paragraph is formed from the topic sentence. My eighth birthday was the best one I ever had.

4. Begin with the introductory paragraph. • In a narrative essay it answers these questions: • Who? • What? • When? • Where? • Why?

5. Who? Begin with the introductory paragraph. • I shall never forget my eighth birthday. My parents surprised me with a party at the zoo. Grandmother baked my favorite cake. There were many gifts from friends and family. It was a wonderful celebration.

6. What? Begin with the introductory paragraph. • I shall never forget my eighth birthday. My parents surprised me with a party at the zoo. Grandmother baked my favorite cake. There were many gifts from friends and family. It was a wonderful celebration.

7. When? Begin with the introductory paragraph. • I shall never forget my eighth birthday. My parents surprised me with a party at the zoo. Grandmother baked my favorite cake. There were many gifts from friends and family. It was a wonderful celebration.

8. Where? Begin with the introductory paragraph. • I shall never forget my eighth birthday. My parents surprised me with a party at the zoo. Grandmother baked my favorite cake. There were many gifts from friends and family. It was a wonderful celebration.

9. Why? Begin with the introductory paragraph. • I shall never forget my eighth birthday. My parents surprised me with a party at the zoo. Grandmother baked my favorite cake. There were many gifts from friends and family. It was a wonderful celebration.

10. Don’t forget the hook! • The biggest, best birthday ever…that would describe my eighth birthday! My parents surprised me with a party at the zoo. Grandmother baked my favorite cake. There were many gifts from friends and family. It was a wonderful celebration.

11. …to indent! And remember… The biggest, best birthday ever…that would describe my eighth birthday! My parents surprised me with a party at the zoo. Grandmother baked my favorite cake. There were many gifts from friends and family. It was a wonderful celebration.

12. Use vivid words as you write the next 3 paragraphs from you graphic organizer. Paragraph 3 Paragraph 2 • I had a surprise • party. • Only family • Really shocked • Held at zoo • Grandma made • my favorite cake. • Triple layer • Chocolate • Trick candles • Biggest piece My eighth birthday was the best one I ever had. Paragraph 4 • My parents gave • me the best gift • of all. • Puppy • Goldy • Best friend As you can see, my eighth birthday was a most memorable celebration.

13. Remember to use transitionwords! They help make connections for the reader. After that… It all began with.. • I had a surprise • party. • Only family • Really shocked • Held at zoo • Grandma made • my favorite cake. • Triple layer • Chocolate • Trick candles • Biggest piece My eighth birthday was the best one I ever had. Later… • My parents gave • me the best gift • of all. • Puppy • Goldy • Best friend As you can see, my eighth birthday was a most memorable celebration.

14. The last square will be the summary paragraph. • I had a surprise • party. • Only family • Really shocked • Held at zoo • Grandma made • my favorite cake. • Triple layer • Chocolate • Trick candles • Biggest piece My eighth birthday was the best one I ever had. • My parents gave • me the best gift • of all. • Puppy • Goldy • Best friend • As you can see my • eighth birthday was • a most memorable • celebration.

15. Summary Paragraph As you can see, my eighth birthday was a most memorable celebration. Can Include: • Concluding sentence • Summary of other paragraphs • Feeling sentence • Question • Exclamation

16. Summary Paragraph As you can see, my eighth birthday was a most memorable celebration. The party at the zoo, a delicious cake, and a special gift made it a memorable birthday. I think it was a superb way to remember the day I was born.

17. The Five Paragraph Essay Let’s read the final product!

18. The Introductory Paragraph The biggest, best birthday ever…that would describe my eighth birthday! My parents surprised me with a party at the zoo. Grandmother baked my favorite cake. There were many gifts from friends and family. It was a wonderful celebration.

19. 2. First Square It all began with a surprise party at the zoo thrown by my parents. No one mentioned my birthday all morning so I figured everyone had forgotten it. I was shocked when my mom drove me to the zoo parking lot, and everyone jumped from behind cars shouting, “Surprise.” Only close family was invited.

20. 3. Next Square After that we went to my Grandma’s house. She had made my favorite cake. It was a triple-layer chocolate delight. I blew and blew at the candles until I finally realized they were trick candles. Grandma gave me the biggest piece, yummy!

21. 4. Next Square Later my parents gave me the best gift of all. It was a fuzzy golden retriever puppy. I named him Goldy. He is still my best friend today.

22. 5. Summary Paragraph As you can see, my eighth birthday was a most memorable celebration. The party at the zoo, a delicious cake, and a very special gift made it a memorable birthday. I think it was a superb way to remember the day I was born.

23. Follow these steps to create a fantastic five paragraph essay!