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1. Intro Paragraph How long was Judy Garland over the rainbow; high on booze and drugs? HOOK Born Frances Ethel Gumm, Judy was in the entertainment business since she was a baby. Her mother introduced her to uppers and downers as a young girl. Despite many hit movies such as The Wizard of Oz, Meet Me in St. Louis, and Easter Parade, MGM Studios released her from their contract. She was damaged goods by 28 years old, and considered an unreliable physical and emotional wreck. At 37 years old, she was a semi-invalid after recovering from a near fatal overdose. Told she could never work again, Judy went on to a full recovery and within two years gave one of the most legendary comeback performances in history. Drugs, alcohol, family, and the movie studio all contributed to the death of Judy Garland. Body 1 Sub Topic 1 – Drug use at an early age given by her mother Body 2 Sub Topic 2 – Judy was washed out in the movie industry at 28. The movie studios fired her because she was not dependable due to drug and alcohol use. Body 3 Sub Topic 3 – Judy was found dead in 1969. She died from a barbiturate overdose THESIS Why do we use the triangle to organizer our essays?

2. Conclusion Paragraph Judy Garland was used by her family and the movie studio by being given drugs as a child and became addicted as an adult; succumbed to her vices at the age of 44. Thesis Restated Body 1 - Restated During childhood, her mother fed her drugs to enhance her performance. To keep her awake, happy and peppy; she was given barbiturates. When she needed to come down, she was fed sedatives. Before she was 30 years old, the movie studio deemed her a liability. All the years of drug use took a mental and physical toll on Judy. She was late to work and when she was performing the drugs made her a wreck. The studio discounted her hit films and blacklisted her. Body 2 - Restated Body 3 - Restated Regardless of a near death experience at 37, Judy went on to give one of the all time memorable concerts at Carnegie Hall. This lead to Judy’s career to take an upswing. Despite this success, she overdosed in a London Hotel on prescription drugs. The same drugs she was given as a child. Somewhere over the rainbow, Judy Garland has finally found peace! HOOK Restated Sample