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Mastering the Hamburger Model for Effective Paragraph Writing

Learn how to write compelling paragraphs using the Hamburger Model. Understand the structure with topics like topic sentences, details (lettuce, tomato, cheese), and closing sentences. Dive into exercises to enhance your paragraph writing skills.

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Mastering the Hamburger Model for Effective Paragraph Writing

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  1. English Comprehension and Composition – Lecture 16 Objectives: Paragraph Writing

  2. What is a paragraph? A developed, but manageable thought.

  3. Writing a ParagraphHamburger Model The hamburger paragraph format provides a clear structure for writing an organized paragraph.

  4. Essentials of a Good Paragraph • Unity • A good topic sentence • Logical sequence of thoughts • Variety • A comprehensive final sentence

  5. Hamburger Paragraphs How to write a really great paragraph!

  6. The Topic Sentence (Top Bun) • Very first sentence of your paragraph. • Always needs to be indented. • Tells what your paragraph is going to be about. There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach.

  7. The First Detail (Lettuce) There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. • Should not be the most important detail. • Needs to follow directly after the topic sentence. • Needs to be full of good “lettucy” details!

  8. The Second Detail (Tomato) • Still should not be the most important detail. • Needs to follow directly after the lettuce sentence. • Needs to be full of good “juicy” details! There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school.Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach.

  9. The Third Detail (Cheese) There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. • Still not be the most important detail. • Needs to start differently than other sentences. • Needs to be full of good “cheesy” details!

  10. The Last Detail (Meat) There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach. • Finally!! The most important detail. • Should start differently than most of the other sentences. • Needs to be full of good “meaty” details!

  11. The Closing Sentence (Bottom Bun) • Should look a lot like the topic sentence. • Needs to summarize the topic. • Needs to be an obvious end to the sentence. There are many reasons that I love to teach. First of all, I love to teach because I love being at school. Another reason I love teaching is that the days go by quickly. A third reason I love to teach is because I love seeing a student understand something new. Finally, I love to teach because I love to be around kids. These are just a few reasons I love to teach.

  12. How to Write a ParagraphSome Exercises

  13. The topic sentence introduces the main idea of a paragraph. Although most people believe that man’s best friend is a dog, I think it should be a cat. Cats have been used as pets since the time of the pharaohs in Egypt. They have been found in countries all over the world. Obviously, cats have been the favorites of man for hundreds of years. I suppose cats are so well liked because they are gentle, friendly and easy to take care of.

  14. What’s missing? He collects books that were written over a hundred years ago. But he is also interested in the best sellers of today. If I ever need to get him a present, I know I can always please him by buying him a book.

  15. What’s missing? The most beautiful flower is the rose because it comes in so many different colors. Another beautiful flower is the daisy which sometimes grows wild. Spring flowers like tulips, daffodils, and crocuses are also very pretty.

  16. What’s missing? First, Canada has an excellent health care system. All Canadians have access to medical services at a reasonable price. Second, Canada has a high standard of education. Finally, Canada’s cities are clean and efficiently managed.

  17. He collects books that were written over a hundred years ago. But he is also interested in the best sellers of today. If I ever need to get him a present, I know I can always please him by buying him a book. • Which of the following topic sentences is the best one for the above paragraph? • A. Reading is fun. • B. Books are my father’s hobby. • C. My father was a main influence in my life.

  18. The most beautiful flower is the rose because it comes in so many different colors. Another beautiful flower is the daisy which sometimes grows wild. Spring flowers like tulips, daffodils, and crocuses are also very pretty. • Which of the following topic sentences is the best one for the above paragraph? • A. Don’t you just love spring? • B. The rose is the most loved flower the world over. • C. There are many lovely flowers to consider for your garden.

  19. First, Canada has an excellent health care system. All Canadians have access to medical services at a reasonable price. Second, Canada has a high standard of education. Finally, Canada’s cities are clean and efficiently managed • A. Canada is our friendly neighbor to the north. • B. There are three reasons why Canada is one of the best countries of the world. • C. Choose Canada as a great place to vacation.

  20. Write a paragraph on any one of the following topics. • My Idea of a Fun Weekend • My Favourite Restaurant • My Most Embarrassing Moment • If I Were a Teacher • My First School Memories

  21. Recap • What is a Paragraph • Hamburger Model • Exercises

  22. References The material has been adapted from the following links: http://www.google.com.pk/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=paragraph+writing+ppt&source=web&cd=1&ved=0CE4QFjAA&url=http%3A%2F%2Fweb.cn.edu%2Fkwheeler%2Fppt%2Fparagraph.pps&ei=vQwRUMnuCuXF0QWp0IGwCw&usg=AFQjCNEV31nZiDsaNJEkEHI4ChcdsVhtfg http://www.google.com.pk/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=hamburger+paragraph+writing+ppt&source=web&cd=1&ved=0CFEQFjAA&url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.readingrockets.org%2Fcontent%2Fpdfs%2Fparahamburger.ppt&ei=4Q0RUOaJIMGw0AXVy4DQBg&usg=AFQjCNGltgFBrsaVoWUpwTGEB0SANuNbDw http://www.google.com.pk/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=hamburger+paragraph+writing+ppt&source=web&cd=7&ved=0CF4QFjAG&url=http%3A%2F%2Feng-lang-arts-6-preap01.hcms.eanesisd.net%2Fmodules%2Flocker%2Ffiles%2Fget_group_file.phtml%3Fgid%3D1857947%26fid%3D7787447&ei=4Q0RUOaJIMGw0AXVy4DQBg&usg=AFQjCNEGJfN3y8yUIpxgKna0_CrDUNamVg http://www3.pef.uni-lj.si/~tujijeziki/rp/1_letnik/exercises_on_paragraph_writing.pdf http://www.victoria.ac.nz/llc/academic-writing/ http://www.uefap.com/writing/exercise/parag/paragex3.htm

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