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1. “Let thy speech be short, comprehending much in few words; be as one that knoweth and yet holdeth his tongue .” Ecclesiastes 32:8. Outline. The benefits of brevity Why manuscripts are wordy Deciding whether + what to trim Most common trims Efficient trimming. 3.

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  1. 1 “Let thy speech be short, comprehending much in few words; be as one that knoweth and yet holdeth his tongue.” Ecclesiastes 32:8

  2. Outline • The benefits of brevity • Why manuscripts are wordy • Deciding whether + what to trim • Most common trims • Efficient trimming

  3. 3 “Never use a long word where a short one will do.” George Orwell

  4. 4 “Use short words, short sentences and short paragraphs. Never write more than two pages on any subject.” David Ogilvy

  5. 5 “When you’re done with a piece of writing, go back and cut 20%. Trust us, it’s possible.”www.dorisandbertie.com

  6. 6 “Perfection is achieved, not when there is nothing more to add, but when there is nothing more to take away.” Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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