经历感受

1. 经历感受

2. 典型例题 ［例题导写］ 词汇整理 句1：(1)organize an activity 句2：(2)volunteer 句3：(3)the Red Cross Hospital (4)have close chats with sb. (5)dance happily together 句4：(6)present gifts(7)take photos 难句翻译 句2：翻译:(1)At 8:30,we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip. (2)It took us about one hour and a half.合并：At 8:30,we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, which took us about one hour and a half.

3. 连句成篇： December 1st2012 Saturday Fine Today is the World Aids Day, so our school organizedan activitycalled “Take care of our lives, hand in hand with Aids children”. At 8:30 a.m., we volunteers gathered at the school gate and started our bike trip, whichtook us about one hour and a half.Soon after we got to the Red Cross Hospital, where most Aids children are staying, we began to have close chats with them to see how their life is going, and then we danced happily together. Having got to know them so well, we presented our gifts, took lots of photos and ate lunch together before we came back. I feel very great to see the Aids children so happy when they are not ignored and taken good care of.

4. ［能力提高］ 翻译句子 (1)I feel it our responsibility to give a hand to those children who are in great need of our help and care. (2)I find the activity meaningful， for I have leant how to communicate with others， realized the importance of helping others and enjoyed the fun brought by my active participation.

5. 即时练习 Last week, I took part in the speech contest. Before the contest, I was afraid of it, so I encouraged myself and asked the teachers and friends for help, and what’s more, I spent two hours practicing every day. During the contest, I was nervous, but I calmed myself down and tried my best to do it well. After the contest, I felt relaxed and I was grateful to my teachers and friends. And I won the first prize so I celebrated it with my friends. 亮点点击：记叙经历，用Before the contest…During the contest…After the contest连接起来，简单明了。I encouraged myself and asked the teachers and friends for help (向老师和朋友请教)和I was grateful to my teachers and friends (向老师朋友致谢)两句表达非常出色。

6. 课外作业 On October 15th, all the 45 members of the Students Union took part in the volunteer work for the sports’ meeting on the school playground. I worked from 7 to 12 in the morning and from 2 to half past six in the afternoon. I edited the articles of each class and broadcast them to cheer the athletes. What’s more, I broadcast the results and announced the award list. Although I was exhausted and had a sore throat, I was praised and it was worthwhile. 亮点点击：时间的表达from 7 to 12 in the morning and from 2 to half past six in the afternoon.十分简练，表示感受的句子Although I was exhausted and had a sore throat, I was praised and it was worthwhile.可套用在读写任务中描述经历感受部分。

7. 新闻报道

8. 典型例题 句2：(1)experience the campus life 句3：(2)visit / pay a visit to some places of interest / tourist attractions (3)learn / know about the local culture 句4：(4)the clean city， friendly students and delicious food / the cleanness of the city， kindness of the students and niceness of food(注意并列词组的词性一致) 句5: (5)an exchange visit

9. 难句翻译 句4： 翻译: The British students were deeply impressed by the clean city， friendly students and delicious food. / What expressed the British students deeply was the clean city， friendly students and delicious food. / The clean city， friendly students and delicious food left a deep impression on the British students. 句5： 翻译：In return， 38 students in Huawen Middle School are invited to visit Britain next March. / At the invitation of a British school， 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set off for Britain for an exchange visit next March.

10. 连句成篇：Huawen Middle School in Foshan City received a group of students from Britain last week. During their one-week stay in Foshan， the students experienced the campus life of Chinese students. They also visited some places of interest in Foshan and learned about the local culture. The British students were impressed by the kindness of Chinese students， cleanness of the city and niceness of food. At the invitation of a British school， 38 students in Huawen Middle School are to set off for Britain for an exchange visit next March.

11. 即时练习 Guangzhou will begin waste sorting from January 1st, 2013 throughout the city. According to the rules, rubbish can be classified into four groups: recyclable waste, kitchen waste, harmful waste and other waste. Not only can waste sorting make good use of the waste material, but also it is energy-saving and environmental-friendly. It is suggested that the government should arouse people’s awareness of waste sorting and provide more waste sorting facilities. Improving the present waste storing and transportation means and doing more research on this aspect are also preferred. 亮点点击：not only… but also (连接两个句子时，前面一句用倒装句)句式的使用，It is suggested that… (人们建议)句式的使用，以及arouse people’s awareness of (唤起人们的……认识)表达等，都是本文的亮点。

12. 课外作业 Last Saturday, Li Hua found a wallet in People’s Square, in which there were an ID card and 3000 yuan. Not onlydidhe wait for three hours but also he tried to look for the owner everywhere. However, the owner did not turn upso he had to hand it in to the police. Several days later, the owner came to our school to express his gratitude to Li Hua and gave him 300 yuan as a reward. Li Hua said it was what he should do and did not accept it. 亮点点击：定语从句in which there were an ID card and 3000 yuan，用得非常出色。用express his gratitude to sb. 表达“向某人表示感谢”，很恰当。

13. 活动安排

14. 典型例题 ［例题导写］ 词语翻译 句1：(1)gain / enrich / increase our knowledge about the environment (2)protect our environment (3)save energy (4)in order to… / with the purpose of… / with the aim of… 句2：(5)from， to， on (6)teaching / classroom building (7)on (8)the lecture hall 句3：(9)those who want to participate in the contest (10)before (11)at (12)sign up 句4：(13)three first prizes 句5：(14)You are welcome to be there. / Welcome to join us. / Welcome to attend.

15. 难句翻译 句1： 翻译：(1)The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English. (2)The theme of the contest is: “Protect our environment and save our energy”. 合并：The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest， the theme of which / whose theme is: “Protect our environment and save our energy” to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English.(定语从句)

16. 句4：翻译：(1)Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest. (2)There are three first prizes， six second and twelve third ones. 合并：Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest， including three first prizes， six second and twelve third ones.(介词)

17. 连句成篇： Notice World Environment Day is approaching, so the Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest, the theme of which / whose theme is: “Protect our environment and save our energy ” to increase our knowledge about the environment and improve our spoken English. The contest will be held in the Lecture Hall on the 5th floor in the classroom building from 4:00 p.m.to 5:30 p.m., on Friday afternoon June 5th. Those who want to participate in the contest are supposed to sign up at studentcenter@163.com before May 25th. Lots of prizes will be delivered for the contest， including three first prizes, six second and twelve third ones. Dear fellow schoolmates, you are warmly welcome to be there and thanks for your participation. The students’ Union

18. ［能力提高］ 1. In order to raise our environmental awareness/ With the purpose of raising our environmental awareness，we will invite Dr. Li from Sun Yat- sen University to give us a wonderful lecture about the environment problem and he will also tell us about the pollution of environment in recent years in Guangzhou. 2. We have the great honor to have invited Professor to give us a wonderful lecture about the differences between eastern and western cultures this Friday afternoon， which will be held in the school stadium between 4:00 p.m. and 5:00 p. m.

19. 3. Everyone should make full notes， because this lecture can help us make good preparations for the coming speech competition next week. /Everyone should make full notes in this lecture， which can fully prepare us for the coming speech competition next week./Everyone should make full notes in this lecture so that he can be fully prepared for the coming speech competition next week. 4. All the students should gather at the gate of our school at 8:30 a.m.

20. 课堂练习 In order to enrich our school life, the English department will hold an “English Karaoke Contest” from 4 pm to 6 pm on December 28th on the stage of our school. The aims of the contest are also to arouse our interest in English and improve our spoken ability. If you are interested in English songs, please sign up at Esongcontest@126.com before November.25. Remember to prepare your own songs and costume, and you can invite your classmates to dance for you. All the students are welcome to take part in it and cheer them! 亮点点击：全篇句式丰富多样，如“In order to…” “If you are…” “Remember to…” “All are welcome to…”等，避免通篇都以I/We开头。表目的的句子The aims of the contest are also to arouse our interest in English and improve our spoken ability很漂亮。

21. 课外作业 Our school will hold a military training for all the Senior One students at the beginning of this term in the Huangpu Military Academy. The activity aims to exercise our willpower, help us to learn the good qualities from the soldiers and develop our awareness of teamwork. We will meet at the school gate at half past seven this Monday morning to take part in the one-week military training. We will pay a visit to the farm and the museum and have a picnic on Thursday afternoon. Don’t forget to wear your school uniform and bring the umbrella in case of rain. 亮点点击：锻炼意志力exercise our willpower 培养团队意识develop our awareness of teamwork. 的表达可用于写经历的读写任务中。用Don’t forget to…表达温馨提示，很恰当。

22. 调查报告

23. 典型例题 ［例题导写］ 1.make / do / conduct / carry out a survey about / on sth.; survey sb. about sth. 2. The survey / result shows that … 3. consider / choose / figure sb. as idols; think of sb. as idols 4. 50% of the girls / half of the girls（易错点提示：of不能少） 5. be the same as 6. sb. / sth. rank the first place / sb. / sth. is in the first place 7. sb. put…in the second place 8. as far as sb. be concerned / in one’s opinion 9.sb. hold the opinion that / sb. be of the opinion that 10. however/on the contrary / but / while

24. 连句成篇： Last week， we did a survey among 2,600 students on “who is your idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols，while 48% of the boys figure sports stars. As the data shows， “parents” ranks the second for the girls， but the fourth for the boys. However， the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself， Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.

25. ［能力提高］ 一、填空 1.(1) have surveyed(2)dislike(3)have(4)like (5)covering(6)providing(7)complain(8)are (9)making(10)has helped 2. (1)shows(2)were(3)suggest(4)will continue ［解析］第(1)题和(3)题，意思均是“表明”，用于引出调查报告的数据或结果，因此使用一般现在时；第(2)题和第(4)题空所在句子出现了具体的时间状语last year， next year，动词应根据相应的时态。

26. 二、勘误 1.改法一：There are 50% of the girls think (改为thinking 或who think) of film and TV stars as idols， however，(改为but，或把however前的逗号改为句号，然后另起一句，使用However)48% of the boys choose sports stars. 改法二：There are (删除There are)50% of the girls think of film and TV stars as idols， … 2. Last week， we did a survey on idols among 2,600 students and find (改为found) that the choices from boys and girls are (改为were) different. ［注释］该处动词时态与last week，did等相呼应。

27. 即时练习 Last week, we made a survey on how to spend your summer holiday among all the Senior Two and Senior Three students of our school. According to the survey, 96% of the Senior Two students will study while only 10% of the Senior Three students will study. And up to 78% of the Senior Three students plan to read the extracurricular books and 72% of them want to go travelling. However, only 43% of the Senior Two students plan to read the extracurricular books and 24% of them will go travelling. The differences may lie in the factthat Senior Two students suffer from great pressure of college entrance examination and want to improve their grades and Senior Three students who have just taken the College Entrance Exam want to broaden their horizons and experience life.

28. 亮点点击：调查类文章常用We made a survey on…among…开头；suffer from great pressure of college entrance examination(升学压力), improve their grades (提高学习成绩), broaden their horizons(开拓视野), experience life (体验生活)等表达很常用，记住哦！

29. 课外作业 In order toprovide better service for the students, our school canteen conducted a survey last month. 54% of them are satisfied with the taste of the food while 32% of them think it needs improving. As for the environment, 75% of the students are content and 14% think there is still room for improvement. When it comes to service attitudes, 51% of the students are satisfied while 21% are not. The students suggest the canteen provide dinnerware for those who forget to bring their own, and provide noodles and serve longer for the supper. 亮点点击：百分比的表达…% of the students are…很常用，要记牢，考生使用时易漏用of，切记。“至于/关于”的译法 As for…/When it comes to…/On the aspect of…交替使用，避免重复。

30. 招聘应聘

31. 典型例题 Dear Sir， I’m glad to see your advertisement. I’m willing to be a volunteer for the 26th Universiade to be held in Shenzhen. I was born on March 28th, 1993, and I am in good health. I think I can meet your ability requirements because I am skillful at communicating with foreigners in English. Besides， I can drive and have some related knowledge about sports and computers. Would you please tell me whether there will be any training before the Universiade and how I will be informed of the result? Many thanks， and I am expecting your early reply. Yours, Li Hua

32. ［能力提高］ 1.短语翻译 (1)apply for (2)meet the requirements of application (3)a written exam on sth. (4)a physical examination (5)show great interest in / be greatly interested in (6)be fit for this job / be qualified for this job (7)be good at / be skilled at / be capable of / have good performance in (8)teamwork spirit (9)look forward to your reply (10)the deadline is…

33. 2. 翻译句子 (11)Your advertisement for a reporter on June 30th newspaper arouses my interest a great deal and I hope to offer my service at your company. (12)Your advertisement in yesterday’s Guangzhou Daily is very attractive and I believe I’m fit for it. (13)I can arrange time properly for my study， part-time jobs and extracurricular activities. (14)During my summer job in a company, I gained a great deal of first-hand knowledge about foreign trade and learned how to communicate with people of different interests and backgrounds. / During my summer, I worked in a company, where I gained a great deal of first-hand knowledge about foreign trade and learned how to communicate with people of different interests and backgrounds. (15)My fluency in English and French is first-rate. / I can speak English and French fluently.

34. 即时练习 Recently, a group of American middle students will pay a visit to our city and they need a student travelling guide. The applicants should be 15 to 18 years old, and over 1.60m tall for the female and over 1.75m tall for the male. We hope to find an outgoing applicant who is good at communicating with others and skillful in dealing with emergencies. What’s more, the applicant should be familiar with our local history and geography and has a basic understanding of the American culture and it is a must to have a good command of spoken English and a high level English listening ability. The payment is 200 yuan per day and if you are interested in it, please fill in a form on www. guangzhou. com.cn and upload a photo. 亮点点击：要求类的表达：…should be…/hope to find…/is a must 等的灵活使用，可避免句型单调。第三句We hope to find…who…with emergencies的信息点，组合得很好。

35. 课外作业 I read about your advertisement for a summer part-time English teacher in the newspaper and I am quite interested in it. I am a Senior Three student with excellent academic results. My English pronunciation is clear and standard and I can speak aloud and write beautifully. Besides, I am kind, patient, outgoing and good at communicating with others. More importantly, I have been a member of the Students’ Union and I am skilled in leading others, so I think I am qualified and I am looking forward to your reply. 亮点点击：用be skilled in/be qualified in 等表达“能胜任”，很出色。列举时除了Besides…/What’s more等，还可用 More importantly/ Last but not least 等。

36. 建议倡议

37. 典型例题 ［例题导写］ 词语翻译 句1：(1)cover / include (2)history， education， scenic spots / tourist attractions， food， famous people / celebrities 句3：(3)spark / stimulate / arouse one’s interest 句4：(4)improve one’s English 句5：(5)be popular among / with sb. / be well-received by / be welcomed by

38. 难句翻译 句2：翻译: (1)It would be better to broadcast it on weekends. / I suggest that the program be broadcast on weekends. / It is a good idea to broadcast it on weekends. (2)We students can have the chance to watch it. / It will be convenient for us students to watch it. 合并：It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it.(因果关系， 可以使用so…that…句型) 句3：翻译：(3)You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in / take part in the program. (4)It will surely arouse / spark / stimulate other students interest in it. 合并：You can also invite some middle school students to get involved in / take part in the program, which will surely arouse / spark / stimulate other students interest in it.(补充说明关系，可以使用which非限制性定语从句)

39. 句4： 翻译：(5)This program can get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou. (6)The students can introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors. (7)This program helps students improve their English. 合并：Not only will this program help students improve their English， but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors.(第5个句子和第7个句子是并列关系，因此我们可以用not only…but also…这组连词把它们连接起来，并且注意统一主语，第6句是作者提出建议的原因，可以用so as to 引导出目的状语。)

40. 连句成篇： Dear John， I know you’re going to set up an English program for middle school students. So I’m writing to suggest a program — “All-round Guangzhou”. This program will cover topics like the history, education, famous scenic spots, food and famous people of Guangzhou. It would be better to broadcast it on weekends so that we students can have the chance to watch it. Besides, you can also invite some middle school students to get involved in the program, which will surely arouse other students’ interest in it. Not only will this program help students improve their English, but also get them to know more about the culture of Guangzhou so as to introduce Guangzhou to foreign visitors, and I am sure it will be well-received by the middle school students. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration. Sincerely yours， Li Hua

41. ［能力提高］ 1.a 2. for 3. it 4. beneficial 5. concerning 6. which 7. to improve 8. but 9.with 10. consideration

42. 即时练习 Dear Xiaoming, You told me that you are excited and nervous about the coming college life and I am glad to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. First of all, you’d better get familiar with the life on campus ahead of time by logging on the website of the university and asking senior schoolmates for help. Besides, you should read more books to gain more knowledge and enrich your mind. In addition, it would be a good idea if you can make a plan about your university life and pay a visit to the campus to learn more about the surroundings. Get well prepared and wish you a great time in your new school! Yours Li Hua 亮点点击：表达建议，灵活运用了You should do, You had better do…, It would be a good idea if…等；另外，巧用了起连接作用的表达，如first of all, besides, in addition等，使句与句之间连接得更自然。

43. 课外作业 Hello everyone, I am Li Hua from the Students Union and I am calling on all of you to take part in the “Let’s Create a More Civilized Campus”. The activity is conducted to create a better atmosphere for our study and life, as a result of the fact that many of us leave litter everywhere, and damage the flowers, grass and trees from time to time. I suggest that everyone should stop littering around to keep our campus clean as well as take good care of the green plants. Besides, we should obey the rules of the school, not being late for school or leaving earlier. What’s more important, we are supposed to stop saying dirty words or telling lies, and care for other classmates to make the school full of love. I believe everyone, as a member of our school, should take responsibility to take part in the activity to create a more civilized campus.

44. 亮点点击：本文难度在于整合信息，范文通过合理的整合，即倡议名称和目的各为一句，然后通过两个倡议内容到一句的方式，用3句话覆盖5个倡议。另外，灵活使用了表建议的句型be supposed to do sth和suggest that sb should do sth等。

45. 投诉申告

46. 典型例题 ［例题导写］ 1.(1)the pair of shoes I bought on your website (2)there is something wrong with the pair of shoes I bought on your website (3)I am not satisfied with the shoes bought on your website (4)show my disappointment about 4.(1)on your website (2)complain about… (3)purchase / buy sth. from … (4)a pair of size-nine shoes/a pair of shoes of size nine (5)send / post …back (6)pay for … (7)postage (8)give sb. a refund / get one’s refund (9)What I ordered was… but I received…

47. 连句成篇： Dear Sir， I’m writing to complain about a pair of sneakers I recently purchased on your website. What I ordered was a pair of black size-nine shoes but I received a pair of white， size-8.5 shoes instead. Worse still， there was a ten-day delay in delivering my shoes， which should have been received on April 10. For the above reasons， I demand either a new pair of black size-nine shoes be posted to me immediately or I be given a full refund. Also， if I send back the wrong shoes， will your company pay for the postage? Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely， Li Hua

48. ［能力提高］ 1.(1)I am writing to complain about the poor service in your restaurant. (2)I am writing to complain about the poor quality of the products of your company and ask for solutions to the problem as soon as possible. 2.(1)to my disappointment (2)the course was simple and the topics were not fresh enough (3)Worse still (4)students could be provided with many chances to enjoy social practice (5)give half of my money back

49. 即时练习 Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about the two-day trip to Shenzhen organized by your travel agency. It was promised in your advertisement that a professional tour guide from Shenzhen would lead 30 tourists as a team, but actually, the tour guide even did not know the exact route and there were 40 people in our team. Besides,it was claimed that we would visit five famous attractions, while in fact we only visited 3 places of interest. Worse still, we not only had to pay for our meals except lunch, but also four people were arranged to share a room in a poorly equipped hotel, which was totally different from your promise that two tourists would share a room in a four-star hotel and meals were free. Please give 50% of my money back, or I shall be forced to take the matter further. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

50. 亮点点击：本文对比广告宣传和实际情况，用but, while，be different from等，表达恰到好处;另外，信息点较多，从句的巧妙使用也很关键，如It was claimed/promised that…, your promise that…等。