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Agenda 9/12/12

Agenda 9/12/12. Update Table of Contents Exercise: Emotions and Reactions Notes: Inner Thoughts Work on Rough Draft. Announcements. Last day to serve detentions before they turn into 30 mins (lunch, after school) Vignette due next Tues. Table of Contents (Copy).

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Agenda 9/12/12

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  1. Agenda 9/12/12 Update Table of Contents Exercise: Emotions and Reactions Notes: Inner Thoughts Work on Rough Draft

  2. Announcements Last day to serve detentions before they turn into 30 mins (lunch, after school) Vignette due next Tues

  3. Table of Contents (Copy)

  4. Exercise: Emotions and Sensory Details (p.16) (Copy) Choose 3 of the 6 words listed below. Write down the words, then write down things that happen to you physically when you experience this emotion. Angry Hungry Nervous Fearful Impatient Bored **Example: Excited: heart races, sweat, headaches, knee taps, hard to be quiet

  5. Notes: Inner Thoughts(Copy all notes, but not examples) 9/12/12

  6. Inner thoughts are NOT: Dialogue No quotation marks used Not lines that people said Summary Events that occurred

  7. What do they add my vignette? Let’s reader inside your head Creates a fuller picture of experience you had Helps you practice and understand sensory details

  8. How do I do that? Sensory Details Imagery Figurative Language: Similes, Metaphors Reflect on whats happening and how you are processing the moment inside your head

  9. Examples: Sensory Details + Figurative Language Instead of: I was mad because she said that. My blood began to boil, and I could feel my heart pounding with rage. Instead of: I was hungry. My stomachs began to rumble like a volcano; I could already feel the acids eating away at my stomach lining. Instead of: It made me happy to hear someone say that. I blushed and felt the warmth of the redness displayed on my face.

  10. Examples: Reflecting I couldn’t believe he left me. Did that mean he never cared? Did it mean he cared too much? At this point, I had to do everything I could to focus on driving. The first punch stunned me. I couldn’t believe some one else’s fist was making contact with my delicate eye. Immediately, I was blinded with pain, but had no time to think about stopping.

  11. Directions • Turn to your Outlines • Raise your hand so Ms. Tucker can stamp it • Leave computer station, AFTER you get stamped • Start rough draft

  12. To do list: Vignettes Prewrite Outline Draft 1: Dialogue + Inner Thoughts If you have gmail, start typing in Google Docs Peer Edit

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