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Publish or Pear- ish. Moving through research in the 21 st century Michael Davis—Millard West. Photo from: http://www.flickr.com/photos/26351962@N05/3770703158/. My Agenda:. A word of disclosure Past images New images Process Intended results Discussion/Q&A.
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Publish or Pear-ish Moving through research in the 21st century Michael Davis—Millard West Photo from: http://www.flickr.com/photos/26351962@N05/3770703158/
My Agenda: • A word of disclosure • Past images • New images • Process • Intended results • Discussion/Q&A
What we are trying to avoid: Frazzby JefMallett—September 22, 2009 (Comics.com)
Identify The image I used to use…and still do at times: EXPLAIN Photo from: http://www.iceberg.pl/
The image I’m trying to convert to: Photo from: http://www.flickr.com/photos/26351962@N05/3770703158/
…and here’s why: A pear is better for you! Photo from: http://botit.botany.wisc.edu/images/130/Fruits/Pomes/Pear_MC_.jpg
They are alike SMALL AT THE TOP FULL AT THE BOTTOM
The differences WATER AT THE TOP INPUT FROM THE TOP IT’S ALL JUST WATER You have to go deep to get to the “core” WATER AT THE BOTTOM
The process: • Start with a thesis • Choosing a format to follow • CARS • Notetaking/validation • Structure
Thesis • It is a controlling idea • This is nothing new • However… • It should be a controlling idea from the start • “Fighting a good fight” • Like a topic sentence, all research should go back to the thesis • Reassure them that through the process it can and should change
Thesis • Places to go: • Empire State College • Capital Community College, Hartford, CT
Choosing a format: • MLA—Modern Language Association • They will gladly sell you their stuff • Purdue University Online Writing Lab (OWL) • Has a few discrepancies, but is a format • APA—American Psychology Association • Another widely used formatting system • The bottom line is to choose on and stick with it
CARS—a system developed through the Millard Public Schools Speech Communication Teachers • CREDIBILITY • ACCURACY • REASONABLENESS • SUPPORT
CARS—a system developed through the Millard Public Schools Speech Communication Teachers • CREDIBILITY— • evidence of authenticity and reliability • Author’s Credentials • Evidence of Quality Control • professional peer reviews, etc. • Lacks when… • Anonymity • No indication of reviews • One-sided reviews (biased) • Red flags: like bad grammar, etc.
CARS—a system developed through the Millard Public Schools Speech Communication Teachers • ACCURACY— • the information is actually correct • Factual • Timely • Comprehensive • Lacks when… • No dates, or “old” dates • Assertions are vague • Generalized language • One-sided information
CARS—a system developed through the Millard Public Schools Speech Communication Teachers • REASONABLENESS— • Fairness • Objectivity • Moderateness • Consistency of information • World view perspective • Lacks with… • Intemperate tone or language • Over-claims and hyperbole • Sweeping, generalized statements • Conflict of interest
CARS—a system developed through the Millard Public Schools Speech Communication Teachers • SUPPORT—source and corroboration information • Corroboration—support from other sources • Triangulate findings • Three is a “magic number” • External consistency • Lacks with… • Stats with no source • Absence of documentation • No corroborative source(s)
Here’s what I use: Mine
My way of putting things together: • My adaptation to the note card system:
My way of putting things together: • My adaptation to the note card system:
My way of putting things together: Full document
A brief word on structure: • I prefer a system of three: • One piece of evidence is chance • Two shows a coincidence • Three shows a pattern • After all, a stool needs at least three legs to stand on its own
Paragraphs • Concrete Detail : Commentary • One Concrete Detail • A student’s statement of truth based on research • Needs TWO Commentaries • Facts from actual source(s) Full Document
Paragraphs Body Paragraph Format (11 sentences, 100+ words) FORMAT: • Topic Sentence (TS) • CD—could start with “For example…” • CM • CM • CD—could start with “In addition…” • CM • CM • CD—could start with “Furthermore…” • CM • CM • Concluding Sentence
Back to our pear… The stem is the source of information Research is a growing process Growth can’t stop before the it is done Products need to get to the core A pear is better for us all! Photo from: http://botit.botany.wisc.edu/images/130/Fruits/Pomes/Pear_MC_.jpg