1. Saniyah: http://animoto.com/play/3YmEDZmTvXmUNw0Swo4x4AYou finished it with all the correct vocab Saniyah but you didn’t read any of the corrections which I wrote for you. You need to think about improving as well as finishing. Lots of good vocab – banana milkshake = batido de plátano. 11/20 Safiyyah: http://animoto.com/play/1j6JStw0BUQJiy0fNu2IGQSome accents missing on está and aquí + you haven’t written juice or grill correctly like we learnt in class. You always get about the same grade Safiyyah, your work is quite good but you aren’t correcting what was wrong. 10/20 Aminah: http://animoto.com/play/OCodK45f5GELosYQK21Y6QSpelling of ‘my’ wrong (mi) + address I spelt ‘dirección’ You’re not paying attention to words that look like English. Generally though a very good effort, please try to use whole sentences more – you’re sometimes not writing the whole thing. 15/20 Zoya: http://animoto.com/play/XPH11yR9sfLH7oyuyo52sgSpelling of veg and welcome wrong + a few sentences with bits missing but generally v good. Love music – v appropriate and the bit about ice creams is excellent. 16/20 Madiya: http://animoto.com/play/usaRhGJzExf8KxYJ23fohALots of little extra things that were great and I liked the food you chose. Main problem is missing parts of sentence ‘vamos a comer’ NOT vamos comer* + dirección = address 15/20 Raheesa: http://animoto.com/play/JhW82txU242npzAESKH4FwSpelling of England wrong but a great start. You haven’t read my comments so garlic bread still wrong + you have missed some whole sentences. Good but not great!! 15/20 Tayyibah: http://animoto.com/play/S4eZOQNjrN2inHrqXGOXuQYou won’t improve without reading the comments I write Tayyibah– adjectives in wrong place and many spellings wrong! Task completed but very inaccurate. 8/20 Sana: http://animoto.com/play/3nsDYeyyLBcwlKJEcoGFZQWell done for completing video – you didn’t correct all mistakes I gave you so a lot of adjectives still in wrong place. It’s a shame Sana because this work a good piece of work. You just need to spend a little more time reflecting on your work. 12/20 Atheeqa: http://animoto.com/play/vHsVFVZ611Euz09NIP1FJgThis is almost brilliant Atheeqa – just missed time and address and a couple of little mistakes with whole sentences. Overall really well done but finish the whole task 15/20 Naila: http://animoto.com/play/ucP6SLz5vhNZjP8ob9Za2AIncomplete so can’t get higher grade. I expect better from you. You’re missing pudding and drinks Naila. Get organised to do your homework. 6/20 Hafzah: http://animoto.com/play/tYDmA1s1wBk8o9hcEuWy1ANot corrected for homework so can’t score higher grades. Some spelling mistakes and adjectives in wrong place – a la parrilla needs to go after noun. 5/20 Luthfa: http://animoto.com/play/6Jd3WquFSGFHfCPlpUFztAMissing address and time but your corrections were good. I want you to organise yourself to read what I wrote so you can correct all mistakes AND finish it. 11/20 Khateeja: http://animoto.com/play/HFirLAYlfu1qocJmGJbmEQNot corrected for homework so can’t score higher grades and only starter completed. Good food vocab with machacadas in correct place. 5/20

2. Zara: http://animoto.com/play/BS560njX2gihKj8j3XX5dQCouple of things missing Zara (address and time) but a good effort considering you weren’t in lesson. Try to add a few more bits – your work has 0 mistakes!! 14/20 Amina: http://animoto.com/play/AT2zPL6oFxZevqPPfbNFzQAccents missing at start & spellings wrong (Inglaterra/mixta) Try to check these before putting them in – Otherwise everything completed and most things done very well. 13/20 Madeeha: http://animoto.com/play/00s0zOygVHFXD5v9hWPYRQ The main problem Madeeha is that you haven’t looked at the corrections I gave you. If you do your homework early please check back for my corrections. A shame because it’s a good video 12/20 Zenam: http://animoto.com/play/4c1zl7NCXP9sU8AwwrE2bAIncomplete Zenam! No pudding or 2nd course + mistakes not looked at. Very little effort made on this homework. 6/20 Talia: http://animoto.com/play/3Wu6A4dnTAQ4EEX3hv1y9QYou didn’t read my comments so all the mistakes you made were still there. You finished everything so task completed and well written but details letting you down. 13/20 Somayya: http://animoto.com/play/e7xJep00eEVCGA4zLpCx4QII really like this: lots of good stuff. I like the added description of cake and house and everything there. A fantastic homework (hasta pronto means ‘see you soon’. 19/20 Iqrah: http://animoto.com/play/Xj20kaMStlLRdL0QeWgRpgIt’s a great effort – I wish you hadn’t used translation sites for last bit and concentrated on giving time and address. Apart from this I’m really pleased with effort – keep it up 16/20 AaliyahB http://animoto.com/play/Kj9fdDZzzhbvKK3Gy4LfzwA better homework Aaliyah because you bothered to correct it – keep doing this! Patatasasadas(make it rhyme/agree) No time or address or drinks in Spanish 13/20 Alia: http://animoto.com/play/QDj0Fo0NRKZnimv76yoWOwGenerally good Alia – you don’t give an address + some of your sentences are not correctly written ‘vamos a comer’ = we’re going to eat. I like the 1st 2nd course – well written without errors. 12/20 KiranH: http://animoto.com/play/1Qo2vpiomXCxNjTxDaB3OAFantastic effort Kiran, your homework definitely improving and your Spanish here is great. Few sp mistakes (segundo = 2nd) Excellent ending too – v well written . 17/20 KiranQ: http://animoto.com/play/LyOVRzxTWaxMKT154rhGeAYou’re missing drinks and pudding Kiran so you can’t get a higher grade. Try to aim to finish your task as much as possible in lesson and then correct for homework. 5/20 Aisha: http://animoto.com/play/R3rsmXLQg5YwITnqtaHx7ASome errors in sentences – ensaladais 1 word + patatascaseras (needs to agree!!!) Missing address and time. A good effort considering your computer’s rubbishness. 14/20 Anisa: http://animoto.com/play/folq5LQvS42wXeVukcc1jwNot corrected for homework so can’t score higher grades. Your video isn’t checked as everything is the wrong way round. An improvement needed 2/20 Zahra: http://animoto.com/play/cKhqqXEDDLDY2gpEOKGrqQAccents missing on está and aquí. Lots of spelling mistakes that you could easily have found by looking at comments. A good ending and task completed but could be better 12/20