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Willow Class’ fantastic writing! Term 3 Dinosaur Topic. By Olivia H ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth will fall out and they will stink. You should feed him meet because he will get hegry ’. Writing instructions on how to look after a dinosaur.
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By Olivia H ‘You must brush his teeth because his teeth will fall out and they will stink. You should feed him meet because he will get hegry’. Writing instructions on how to look after a dinosaur
‘You need to get him a drek (drink) because ofwis (otherwise) he will be festy. And lest (last) you nee to love him.’
By Keane ‘Brilliant brontosaurus Tall T-Rex Amazing Abrosaurus Spiky Segosaurus’ Creating a poem using Alliteration
By Thaddeus The dinosaur is as fus (fast) as a car. The dinosaur is like gen grus (grass). The dinsoaur is fus as a snayoo (snail) His teeth are sharp like a nif(knife). Writing a poem using similes
By Tommy First you run saft (fast) Next you climb saft (to safety) Now you hide Then you call help! Writing instructions for what to do if a dinosaur chases you
By Elizabeth Dinosaur chomp Dinosaur stomp I fill neves (nervous) Dinosaur angry Dinosaur roar I am filling petrifid Dinosaur grunt Dinosaur loud I coud run away Using a repeating pattern or line when writing a poem
By Lucy S On Monday 9th January 2014 we found a letta from T-Rex I was excited. We went to Nersry and Found a clue. I red it I was scared! We saw clue 3. The class was excited and it was fun! Then we went to the hall way there was a huge footprint. And (we) found the egg. The T-chersiad “Wow! It is huge”. Recounting an event in the form of a newspaper article