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PARALLELISM. Definition. Two or more words, phrases, or clauses that are similar in length and grammatical form. Also called parallelism .
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Definition • Two or more words, phrases, or clauses that are similar in length and grammatical form. Also called parallelism. • By convention, items in a series appear in parallel grammatical form: a noun is listed with other nouns, an -ing form with other -ing forms, and so on. • Failure to express such items in similar grammatical form is called faulty parallelism.
Examples • My favourite activities are running, jumping and dancing. 2. My favourite activities are to run, to jump and to dance.
Examples • The character of Bob shows determination, courage and respect. • The character of Bob shows that he is determined, courageous and respectful.
Examples • Bob shows determination when he calls his long-lost sister, rescues the cat from the tree, and escapes the burning building. • Bob demonstrates his courage through interactions with dangerous animals, relationships with his family, and escapades with circus performers.
Fixing Faulty Parallelism Faulty Parallelism: Josie loves to sing, canoeing and when she eats chocolate. Parallelism: Josie loves singing, canoeing and eating chocolate. Josie loves to sing, to canoe and to eat chocolate.
Fixing Faulty Parallelism Faulty Parallelism: The teacher displays her amazing teaching skills through communicating well with students, when she marks fairly, and her strong patience. Parallelism: The teacher displays her amazing teaching skills through communicating well with students, marking fairly, and showing patience.
Fixing Faulty Parallelism Faulty Parallelism: Some of my favourite foods are delicious cupcakes, fruit that is juicy, and the kind of bread that is just baked. Parallelism: Some of my favourite foods are delicious cupcakes, juicy fruit, and fresh bread.