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Y10: Summary skills 2. Tuesday 7 th October LO: to demonstrate our summary skills & to evaluate our own work and that of a peer. Spelling test. 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10. Spelling test. 1 Summary 2 Accuracy 3 Receive 4 Obscure 5 Expression 6 Reliance 7 Sequencing 8 Grouping
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Y10: Summary skills 2 Tuesday 7th October LO: to demonstrate our summary skills & to evaluate our own work and that of a peer.
Spelling test • 1 • 2 • 3 • 4 • 5 • 6 • 7 • 8 • 9 • 10
Spelling test • 1 Summary • 2 Accuracy • 3 Receive • 4 Obscure • 5 Expression • 6 Reliance • 7 Sequencing • 8 Grouping • 9 Relevance • 10 Discrimination
Read the following article about ManishaKaur, a female boxer in Manipur, India, who has established a boxing academy for young people. On the opposite page, write a summary about the difficulties teenagers face in Manipur AND how Manisha is a role model for them. • Your summary should be about 100 words (and no more than 120 words). You should use your own words as far as possible. • You will receive up to 6 marks for the content of your summary, and up to 4 marks for the style and accuracy of your language.
Marking criteria • Content: up to 6 marks • Difficulties for teenagers • 1 few opportunities to achieve success • 2 high rate of unemployment / difficult to find a job • 3 isolated • How Manisha is a role model to teenager • 4 because of her boxing achievements / successful boxer / famous boxer • accept examples of her success e.g. national titles, world championships • 5 gives them a feeling of a family relationship • 6 strength of character / defiance and forcefulness • 7 came from a very simple background / overcame own problems • 8 trains twice as hard / hard work • 9 dedicated
Marking criteria • Content: up to 6 marks • How Manisha is a role model to teenager because of her boxing achievements / successful boxer / famous boxer (accept examples of her success e.g. national titles, world championships) • gives them a feeling of a family relationship • strength of character / defiance and forcefulness • came from a very simple background / overcame own problems • 8 trains twice as hard / hard work • 9 dedicated
Language (up to 4 marks) • 0 marks: meaning obscure because of density of language errors and serious problems with • expression/nothing of relevance • 1 mark: expression weak/reliance on lifting without discrimination • 2 marks: expression limited/some reliance on lifting from the original, but some sense of order • 3 marks: expression good, with attempts to group and sequence ideas in own words • 4 marks: expression very good; clear, orderly grouping and sequencing largely in own words
Some like it cool • Read the following article about the growing number of people who swim in ice-cold water. Write a summary of the possible health benefits of this activity. • Your summary should be about 100 words (and no more than 120 words). You should use your own words as far as possible. • You will receive up to 6 marks for the content of your summary, and up to 4 marks for the style and accuracy of your language.