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Synthesis Debrief. “Trends” From Your Papers. Introductions. Set up works before thesis Present and unpack your lens This leads to purpose Develop a meaningful hook 1-2 sentences probably not enough Aim to show relevance of your topic. Thesis Statements.
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Synthesis Debrief “Trends” From Your Papers
Introductions • Set up works before thesis • Present and unpack your lens • This leads to purpose • Develop a meaningful hook • 1-2 sentences probably not enough • Aim to show relevance of your topic
Thesis Statements • Don’t try to cram all texts in the statement • Don’t try to attribute conclusion to all the authors • This is your thinking after evaluating all the works • These authors aren’t necessarily arguing the same thing • The “So What” • What is the impact? Why is this important? How do people change? • Avoid being wishy-washy or too general
Body • Topic Sentence • Claim, not summary • Key ideas from thesis • Build on previous ideas • Evidence • Discuss specific evidence • Quotes should come before your analysis in planning
Conclusions • Develop, develop, develop • 3-4 sentences not enough • Show significance • Tie to your intro • If your intro was filler, your conclusion will likely be as well
General • CITE your evidence • (Twain 45) • (Fitzgerald 17) • Embed your quotes • Quotations should not be sentences on their own in your writing • Use transitions • Between paragraphs • Between sentences – ideas should build and progress • CONCISION • Narrow focus in body paragraphs—limit the ground you will need to cover!
Revision Steps • READ your comments and take notes on your essay • REFLECT on your strengths and weaknesses (see website for handout) • PLAN your revision – what do you intend to change? • SCHEDULE a conference (now through Dec. 13) • PREPARE your revision plan and questions • ATTEND your conference; plan to take notes! • REVISE and EDIT your draft; Revisions will need to be condensed to no more than eight (8) pages (including Works Cited, which does not need to be on a separate page) • HIGHLIGHT or UNDERLINE your changes – everything that is different! • SUBMIT marked version to turnitin.com by 11:59 PM December 16 (A) or December 17 (B) • Bring written reflection and revision checklist to hand in during class on the due date.