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Paragraph Writing . Chunking. -Topic Sentence (TS). Definition: A sentence that reveals what the content of the paragraph will address; the main idea (stated) This is the first sentence of any paragraph. When responding to a prompt , you can restate part of the prompt as you TS. .
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Paragraph Writing Chunking
-Topic Sentence (TS) • Definition: A sentence that reveals what the content of the paragraph will address; the main idea (stated) • This is the first sentence of any paragraph. • When responding to a prompt, you can restate part of the prompt as you TS.
Concrete Detail (CD) • Definition: Facts, evidence, proof, quotations, or a specific reference from/to a text that helps develop the main idea of the paragraph. • All paragraphs should have two CDs. • CDs need to be introduced with transitions.
Transition • Definition: A word or phrase that signals the writer is about to reveal a detail from a text that is not his or her own idea. • Transitions help to make a paragraph flow more smoothly. • Transitions are usually followed by a comma. • Examples: • For instance, for example, in addition, additionally, consequently, as a result, furthermore, etc.
Commentary (CM) • Definition: interpretation, explanation, analysis, opinion, and/or support that explains why the CD is important and how it connects to the main idea stated in the TS. • Your commentary is your own thinking.
Chunk • Definition: The combination of concrete details (CD) and commentary (CM). • Formula: • 1 concrete detail + 2 commentary (or more) • This creates a fully developed explanation!
Concluding Sentence (CS) • Definition: The sentence at the end of the paragraph that sums up what the paragraph has been about by rephrasing the TS. • Concluding Sentence- should be unique from the TS.
Building an Eight Sentence Chunked Paragraph Topic Sentence Concrete Detail Commentary Commentary Concrete Detail Commentary Commentary Concluding Sentence Chunk One Chunk Two
Chunking Model ~ Ebenezer Scrooge Topic Sentence (TS): In the movie, A Christmas Carol, Ebenezer Scrooge is a dynamic character. Concrete Detail (CD): For example, Commentary (CM):
Chunking Model ~ Ebenezer Scrooge Concrete Detail (CD): Commentary (CM):
Paragraph Checklist • Does the topic sentence provide a framework for what is discussed in the rest of the paragraph? • Are all of the concrete details mainly factual? • Does the commentary include the opinions of the author? • Is each chunk (1 concrete detail and 2 commentary) related? Is the proper ratio used? • Does the closing sentence provide a summary, restating, or wrap-up of the paragraph?
Sample: A Benign-and Useful- ‘All American Muslim’ • Vocabulary to know: • Benign- of mild character; a gentle disposition • Miniscule- very small • Extremists- belief in and support for extreme ideas • Boycott- refusing to deal with a person, organization, or country • Bigot- a person who won't listen to anyone whose ideas or beliefs are different from his or her own • Milquetoast- timid; unassertive • Ramadan- 9th month in the Muslim calendar; strict fasting takes place during the month
Eight Sentence Chunked Paragraph Topic Sentence Concrete Detail Commentary Commentary Concrete Detail Commentary Commentary Concluding Sentence • Subject: Deadly plague threatening N. American bats • Choose to discuss ONE of the following using the 8 sentence chunked paragraph: • Occasion • Audience • Purpose • Tone • Main Idea