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THESIS STATEMENTS. How to turn a bad essay into a stellar essay…. What is a thesis statement?. A thesis statement is a roadmap for your essay. It tells your reader what your topic is, what your focus is, and what your supporting details are. How do I make a thesis statement?.
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THESIS STATEMENTS How to turn a bad essay into a stellar essay…
What is a thesis statement? A thesis statement is a roadmap for your essay. It tells your reader what your topic is, what your focus is, and what your supporting details are.
How do I make a thesis statement? • STEP 1: Create a thesis Chart • Step 2: Decide on the main idea of your essay • Step 3: Write your main idea
Let’s Practice STEP 1… • PROMPT: Describe Mr. Blume’s personality.
Let’s Practice STEP 2… Now that we have made a thesis chart, we need to decide on a main idea… What is the main idea of this essay?
DO NOT WRITE THIS SLIDE DOWN… Which statement covers each supporting detail from the thesis chart? • Mr. Blume is a round character. • Mr. Blume is selfish. • Mr. Blume has a personality. • Mr. Blume has a complex personality. • Room 323 is an English class and Mr. Blume is the teacher.
Explanations of Examples… • Mr. Blume is a round character. This is a good thesis statement because a round character has many traits and Mr. Blume is cruel, selfish and conceited.
Explanations of Examples… • Mr. Blume is selfish. This is not a good thesis statement because it does not cover the other supporting details that we mentioned in the thesis chart.
Explanations of Examples… • Mr. Blume has a personality. This is not a good thesis statement because it is not specific enough. We need to hint at what Mr. Blume’s personality is so that we are actually making an argument.
Explanations of Examples… • Mr. Blume has a complex personality. This is a great thesis statement because it shows the main idea of our essay; Mr. Blume has many personality traits.
Explanations of Examples… • Room 323 is an English class and Mr. Blume is the teacher. This is not a good example of a thesis statement because it does not say the focus of the essay.
Now it’s your turn… • Draw another thesis chart.
Now it’s your turn… • Write a topic and a focus for the following idea. • Jem and Scout’s relationship
Now it’s your turn… • NOW… • Write three supporting details that support your topic and your focus.
Now it’s your turn… • Now… • Now write a thesis statement using the topic, focus, and supporting details you just created.
Now it’s your turn… • It could read something like this: Throughout the novel Jem and Scout proved to have a multifarious relationship. Or Because of Scout’s stubbornness, Jem’s mood changes, and their age difference Scout and Jem proved to have a complex relationship.
I will accept a thesis statement with or without the supporting details.