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CM 220 College Composition II Unit 6 Seminar. Professor Thompson General Education, Composition Kaplan University. Happy Thanksgiving!. Unit 6. Assignments and draft guidelines. Unit 6 Reading. Unit 6 Invention and Tech Labs.
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CM 220College Composition IIUnit 6 Seminar Professor Thompson General Education, Composition Kaplan University
Unit 6 Assignments and draft guidelines
Unit 6 Invention and Tech Labs • Invention Lab: Strategies for defeating writer’s block. Review the links in the unit 6 overview reading for more on Writer’s Block! • Tech lab: Prezi (animated presentations), Photoshop and Gimp (graphic design)
Unit 6 Draft: The Blueprint for Progress • Purpose: Pull together all the pieces of your research, pre-writing, and organizational techniques into a coherent essay. • While this draft will not be perfect or complete, it is not “rough,” either. Do edit and proofread! • Be sure to format according to APA guidelines. • Consider submitting to the Writing Center for additional feedback.
Draft Guidelines • Includes introductory paragraph with thesis statement and concluding paragraph. Note: Introduction and conclusion will be revised and expanded as part of the unit 8 Invention Lab. • Supports main points effectively and clearly. • Uses research, evidence, and examples to support assertions. • Skillfully refutes counter-arguments without ignoring data that contradicts the student’s thesis. • Refers to at least 3 secondary sources in the body of the paper and on the references page. One should be from the Kaplan Library.
Draft Guidelines • Paragraphs are well-developed, coherent, and logically organized. • Style is appropriate for academic writing. • Style is clear and concise. • Project is free of serious errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation. • Follows accepted conventions of Standard American English. • Follows APA guidelines for the document layout and citations (including title page, in text citations, and References page). • Meets 3-5 page length requirement; this does not include the title and references page.
Writing workshop Clear and Concise writing Tips
Writing Workshop: Seven Steps to Revision • Highlight all of the "to be" and "to have" verb forms in the paper and change as many as possible to action verbs. For example, change "The man was on the corner" to "The man lingered on the street corner." Try to use strong, vivid verbs whenever possible!2. Take out any unnecessary prepositions. A preposition shows relationships between parts of the sentence: "The house with the purple doors at the top of the hill belongs to me" has several prepositional phrases ("with the purple doors," "at the top," "of the hill," "to me.") A much more concise revision would look like this: My hilltop house has purple doors.
Seven Steps • 3. Count sentence lengths. You want sentences to vary--have some shorter ones and some longer ones. Use phrases and clauses to start some sentences and vary sentence structures (simple, compound, complex, compound-complex). Don't have any extraordinarily long sentences, though! These often confuse (and lose) your readers.4. Make sure pronouns like "it, anyone, everyone, they" have a clear reference and make sure the pronoun agrees in number (singular or plural) to the noun it refers to. Original: It may rain today. Revised: Forecasters predicted rain today.
Seven Steps • 4. Make sure pronouns like "it, anyone, everyone, they" have a clear reference and make sure the pronoun agrees in number (singular or plural) to the noun it refers to. Original: It may rain today. Revised: Forecasters predicted rain today.5. Find all of the sentences using "which, who, that." Try not to overuse those indefinite pronouns.6. Try to avoid using words like "really, every, very." They are often unnecessary!7. Take cliches out of your writing (like "she's walking on thin ice") and replace them with original analogies and expressions.
Expletives • “Expletives” are unnecessary words in writing, much like “um” in speech. • Examples: There are many reasons to enjoy Thanksgiving. • Revised: We enjoy Thanksgiving for the savory smells, the lazy afternoon watching football, and the time spent with loved ones.
Having problems? Defeating writer’s block
What causes it? • Anxiety and stress • Fear of others’ opinions • Difficulties with research • Too close to topic
How to defeat it? • Know your topic—be prepared. • Don’t strive for perfection—this is a draft! • Don’t edit and proofread while writing. • Don’t stress over the introduction—come back to it later. • Be confident! • Just do it • Note: see the Dennis Stokes video for more details.
The next step Creating strong paragraphs
Strong Paragraphs • Are limited and focused • Are unified and coherent • Are clearly related to the thesis • Are well developed • Include a clear topic sentence, supporting sentences, and a clear conclusion
How do I create such a paragraph? • Decide on your main idea for the ¶. • Write a topic sentence expressing your argument. • Explain/develop that idea in ¶ body. • Give example(s). • Explain relevance of examples. • Complete ¶ or transition into next paragraph. (“Paragraph Development,” 2007).
More Help with Paragraphs • For a helpful Writing Center workshop on this topic, review: http://khe2.acrobat.com/p75782349/?launcher=false&fcsContent=true&pbMode=normal
How do I develop paragraphs? • Use examples and illustrations • Cite data (facts, statistics, evidence, details, and others) • Testimony from experts (interviews, quotes, paraphrases) • Use an anecdote or story • Define terms in the paragraph • Compare and contrast • Evaluate causes and reasons • Examine effects and consequences • Analyze the topic • Describe the topic • Offer a chronology of an event (“On Paragraphs,” 2010).
Use of comparison/contrast and example Slave spirituals often had hidden double meanings. On one level, spirituals referenced heaven, Jesus, and the soul, but on another level, the songs spoke about slave resistance. For example, according to Frederick Douglass, the song "O Canaan, Sweet Canaan" spoke of slaves' longing for heaven, but it also expressed their desire to escape to the North. Careful listeners heard this second meaning in the following lyrics: "I don't expect to stay / Much longer here. / Run to Jesus, shun the danger. / I don't expect to stay." When slaves sang this song, they could have been speaking of their departure from this life and their arrival in heaven; however, they also could have been describing their plans to leave the South and run, not to Jesus, but to the North. Slaves even used songs like "Steal Away to Jesus (at midnight)" to announce to other slaves the time and place of secret, forbidden meetings. What whites heard as merely spiritual songs, slaves discerned as detailed messages. The hidden meanings in spirituals allowed slaves to sing what they could not say.
How could this paragraph be developed? We should provide more financial support for 9/11 First Responders. Many are currently in poor health or dying from complications resulting from exposure to toxins at Ground Zero. It is unfair for them to suffer and die without adequate support from the government. What would YOU do to make this paragraph stronger?
Putting paragraphs together Effective transitions
Using Transitions • Show relationship between ideas • Demonstrate that thoughts are logical and progressive, rather than random and accidental • Provide unity and coherence • Provide smooth “flow” within and between paragraphs
Other approaches • Repeating key words or phrases • Using parallel structure (express content in grammatically similar ways) • Summarizing/rephrasing idea in preceding sentence or paragraph to link to new idea
What transitions would you use and where? One of Mary Washington University’s best features is its small student population. The average class size is 25-30 students. Students have many opportunities to meet in one-on-one conferences with their professors. This gives each student the opportunity to discuss class assignments.
What is wrong with this paragraph? Club Palm Resort's beaches are beautiful, and the surrounding countryside is quite scenic. The quality of the food leaves a lot to be desired. Many vacationers enjoy the variety of outdoor activities and the instruction available in such sports as sailing and scuba diving. Unfortunately, security is poor; several vacationers' rooms have been broken into and their valuables stolen. Christmas in the Bahamas can make the thought of New Year's in Chicago bearable.
Paragraph Workshop Share a paragraph from your draft you are currently working on. Offer your classmates advice on strengthening their paragraphs.
References Brooke, B. (2009). Effective paragraphs. Bob Brooke’s Writer’s Corner. Retrieved from http://www.bobbrooke.com/WritersCorner/effectiveparagraphs.htm Clements, K. (2010). Essay development. In The Kaplan Guide to Successful Writing, eds. D. Martinez, S. Carlson, & K. VanDam, p. 159-204. New York: Kaplan Publishing. Jensen, M. (2010). The writing process. In The Kaplan Guide to Successful Writing, eds. D. Martinez, S. Carlson, & K. VanDam, p. 35-47. New York: Kaplan Publishing. Paragraph development. (2007). The University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill. Retrieved from http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/paragraphs.html. Stokes, D. (2008, April 20). 6 tips to overcoming and cure for writer’s block [Video file]. Retrieved from http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YF9MxWxP3zQ Transitions. (2007). The University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill. Retrieved from http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/transitions.html