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ESSAY WRITING WORKSHOP. The Colleges Say…. If one thing could be perfect, it should be the essay." – Georgetown Admissions Officer. Who is reading my essay?. Admissions officers are people too! Some aren’t much older than yourself More than one person will read your essay
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The Colleges Say… • If one thing could be perfect, it should be the essay." – • Georgetown Admissions Officer
Who is reading my essay? • Admissions officers are people too! • Some aren’t much older than yourself • More than one person will read your essay • Directors, Associate directors, Faculty
WHAT YOU LOOK LIKE ON PAPER • Application • Transcript • Test Scores • Recommendations • Activity Resume • THE ESSAY
WRITING THE RIGHT ESSAYBRINGS “THE YOU” TO LIFE The College Essay can… • help the college assess your critical thinking and writing abilities • differentiate you from other applicants when classes, grades and test scores may look the same • help colleges understand your values, attitudes and interests
WHAT DO COLLEGES LOOK FORIN AN ESSAY? • Solid Writing • Clear Communication • Passion • Content • Answer the Question
TIPS TO KEEP YOUR ESSAYFROM GOING SOUTH • Controversial subjects are dangerous • Think small…focus on an event, a personal moment • Use vivid details to make it interesting • Tell your story in your own voice! • Avoid the ‘laundry list’ of accomplishments!
TIPS CONTINUED… • Be neat. The presentation of your work will speak volumes about you. • A casual attempt at the essay will communicate a casual interest in the college • PROOFREAD!!! • There are sum mistakes hat spell Czech will knot cache
RECIPE FOR THE COLLEGE ESSAY • THREE PARTS THINKING… • TO ONE PART WRITING…
WHAT IS BRAINSTORMING ? • Develop a list of personal achievements, activities, travel experiences, work experiences. What made you take part in these activities? • Make a mind map • Work in a group!
Treasures and LandminesThings to find and things to avoid • Answer the question!!! • Create a strong introduction • Be focused and provide detail • Use specific examples • Always write from the heart – You are not writing a school research paper • Link your conclusion to your introduction
WRITING AT ITS BEST! • Chose a topic, reflect then brainstorm • Prewrite: notes/ graphics • Hook the reader with a great opening sentence • Write an outline: beginning-middle-end • Write a first draft • Edit – have a friend or family member read the first draft • REVISE – REVISE- REVISE • Appearance of your final draft is important
How to make your admission counselor laugh Or why we proofread… • As an extra, we even saw Elizabeth Taylors home, which had a bridge attaching it to the hoe across the street. • In the spring, people were literally exploding outside! • Handwritten on an application: AP Engllish • From an activity resume: Cook and serve homeless.
DO’S & DON’TS FOR YOURCOLLEGE ESSAY • Do leave yourself enough time. Good writing does not happen in one draft • Do be specific in your writing topic • Do ask someone you trust to read your draft and tell you what they think • Write the essay yourself…if it sounds like a lawyer (or YOUR MOM) wrote it, they probably did • The only good writing is rewriting!