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Unit Reading. Rewriting Students’ works. Cindy and Eric by 21. It is dark. Cindy and Eric are hungry and dirty. See! A big pond is over there. Wow! The pond is clean. They are lucky. They take a bath in the pond. Oh, no! The ugly witch is so hungry too. Kevin and James by 11.
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Unit Reading Rewriting Students’ works
Cindy and Eric by 21 • It is dark. • Cindy and Eric are hungry and dirty. • See! A big pond is over there. • Wow! The pond is clean. • They are lucky. • They take a bath in the pond. • Oh, no! The ugly witch is so hungry too.
Kevin and James by 11 • Kevin and James are thirsty and tired. • Look! A big and pretty house is over there. • Wow! A big cake-they are lucky. • Oh, no! An ugly and young bear.
Angel and Hana by 33 • It is dark. • Angel and Hana are tired and sleepy. • Look! A big and soft bed is over there. • Wow! A big bed-they are lucky. • Oh,no! An big and hungry giant. A
A boy and a girl by 28 • It’s afternoon. • A boy and a girl are happy and energetic. • See! A big and beautiful bird is over there. • Wow! A cute and pretty dog. • They are lucky. • The girl says, “I like cute animals very much. • The boy says, “We are poor!” • The girl says, “Why?” • The boy says, “Look! A dinosaur is over there.” Look!
Tom and Jack by 13 • It’s morning. • Tom and Jack are old and hungry. • Look! A big and dirty bathroom is over there. • Oh, my god! The cake is in the bathroom.
Jun and Amy by 8 • It is dark. • Jun and Amy are hungry and tired. • Look! A tall and beautiful house is over there. • Wow! A big cookie-they are lucky! • Oh, no! An old and mean witch.
Snow White by 31 • It is afternoon. • Snow White is hungry and tired. • Look! A small and cute house is over there. • Wow! Seven small bowls and seven small beds. • She is happy. • Oh! Look! Seven short and cute people go home. are going home.