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1. Creating High-performing Writers in 90/90/90 schools Based on Alice Greniers presentation
At the 90/90/90 conference
San Francisco October 2010
2. What 90 90 90 Schools Research Tells Us A focus on student learning
Frequent assessment of student progress and multiple opportunities for improvement
An emphasis on nonfiction writing
Collaborative scoring of student work
-Reeves, 2010 Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
3. What 90 90 90 Schools Research Tells Us A focus on student learning
Frequent assessment of student progress and multiple opportunities for improvement
An emphasis on nonfiction writing
Collaborative scoring of student work Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
4. Emphasis on Nonfiction Writing
This is the most common characteristic in 90/90/90 schools Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
5. What does writing RESEARCH tell us? Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
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7. We know we should, but HOW do we teach writing? Writing taught once or twice a week is just frequently enough to remind children that they cannot write. They are like athletes who never get in condition, yet have to play the game before cynical spectators
-Donald Graves Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
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What if EVERY teacher in the building were a consistent teacher of writing? Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
9. Instructional Scaffolding Consistent, building-wide instruction
Built-in protocol for differentiation
Ability to tailor process to site and student needs
Relevance across curriculum areas Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
10. Foldable Non-fiction Paragraph
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Multi-paragraph Essay
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11. Color Coding Why?
Clear visual clue for students
Consistency building-wide
Common Writing Instructional language
Common understanding of the functions of a sentence, a paragraph, and an essay
What is it?
Step Up to Writings
Traffic Light Concept
Green: Go! State the topic and position
Yellow: Slow Down! Give Evidence
Red: Stop! Analyze and Explain Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
12. Facile Alignment with California EAP, CAHSEE, and EGUSD District Rubrics
The controlling statement containing the topic and position
evidence, facts, quotes, data, summary, concrete detail
analysis, explanation, elaboration, opinion, commentary Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
13. Alignment with other models Diehl C/PL Step Up to Writing
Green: Go! State the topic and position
Yellow: Slow Down! Give Evidence
Red: Stop! Analyze and Explain
Jane Schaeffer
Topic Sentence
(a topic and an opinion)
Concrete Detail
(facts, evidence)
Commentary
(analysis, opinion)
T-Bear
T: Thesis
B: Bridge to thesis
E: evidence, facts
A: Analysis, opinion, explanation
R: Return to thesis from Grenier (2010)
14. Non-fiction Paragraph: 5 steps Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
15. Non-fiction Paragraph Day One Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
16. Topic Sentence Work
Power-Number Statements Question-Statement
Occasion-Position FANBOYS
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17. Rough Draft
Students copy their sentences from the colored sentence strips onto lined paper.
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Synonym Star
Teacher highlights one word from each students paper
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18. re Paragraph Analysis
Revising
Revising the order of sentences
Revising for word choice
Synonym star
Verb choice
Drafting
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19. Reading Aloud
Reading the paragraph to a partner to help check for coherence.
Editing (CUPS)
Capitalization
Usage
Punctuation
Spelling Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
20. Multi-paragraph Essay: 5 Steps Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
21. Multi-paragraph EssayDay One Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
22. Multi-paragraph EssayDay Two Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
23. Multi-paragraph EssayDay Three Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
24. Multi-paragraph EssayDay Four Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
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26. Training the Class(Front-loading)Two weeks practice from Grenier (2010) Diehl C/PL
27. Differentiation Opportunities Stickers
Strips
Hight-lighters
Provide graphic organizers for gluing
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28. Differentiation Opportunities Vocabulary
Thesis and topic sentences
More practice
more T.S. types
lengthier introductions
sentence variety
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29. An Instructional Scaffold At our school
Everyone is a writer!
Everyone is a writing teacher! Diehl C/PL from Grenier (2010)
30. What will you need? Structure High-interest, quality prompts
Common course-alike team rubrics
Common foldable protocol
Supplies Ledger paper
Green, Yellow, Red (pink)
Highlighters
Overhead/whiteboard pens
Stickers
Magnets
Copy paper (for strips and sorts)
from Grenier (2010) Diehl C/PL