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Developing Topic Sentences. Group 1: Media Violence. Poor Topic Sentence: Media violence and teenagers Revised Topic Sentence : ________________________. First Point: Proof / Details. Second Point 2:Proof / Details. Third Point 3:Proof / Details. Group 2: Eating Disorders.
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Group 1: Media Violence Poor Topic Sentence: Media violence and teenagersRevised Topic Sentence: ________________________ First Point: Proof / Details SecondPoint 2:Proof / Details ThirdPoint 3:Proof / Details
Group 2: Eating Disorders Poor Topic Sentence: Eating disorders effect many women.Revised Topic Sentence: ______ First Point: Proof / Details Second Point: Proof / Detaills Third Point :Proof / Evidence
Group 3:Lowering the Drinking Age Poor Topic Statement: This paragraph will discuss how why the government should lower the drinking age. Revised Topic Sentence: ______________________________ Second Point : Proof / Details Third Point: Proof / Details First Point 1: Proof / Details
Group 4: Teens and Cosmetic Surgery Poor Topic Statement:Why do teenagers want cosmetic surgery? Revised Topic Sentence: ______ First Point 1: Proof / Details Second Point 2: Proof / Details ThirdPoint 3:Proof / Details
Group 5: Sex Education Poor Topic Statement:Parents should teach their children sex education. Revised Topic Sentence: ______ First Point 1: Details / Proof Second Point: Details / Proof ThirdPoint 3: Proof / Details
Group 6 : Cell Phones and Driving Poor Topic Statement:Cell phones cause many accidents. Revised Topic: ______ FirstPoint : Proof / Details Second Point: Proof / Details Third Point: Proof / Details
Group 7 : Religion in Schools Poor Topic Statement:Religion should not be taught in schools. Revised Topic Sentence: ______ First Point: Details / Proof Second Point: Details / Proof Third Point: Details / Proof