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Writing topic sentences (TS). Use the following steps: Step 1: QA ( tgc and what each is about) Step 2: Brainstorm for points/reasons to answer the question (arguments) using 5W1H, PERMS, levels Step 3: Take a stand
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Writing topic sentences (TS) Use the following steps: Step 1: QA (tgc and what each is about) Step 2: Brainstorm for points/reasons to answer the question(arguments) using 5W1H, PERMS, levels Step 3: Take a stand Step 4: Craft TS ensuring that each point/reason/argument supports your stand. Make sure that you have one alternative argument.
Step 1: Question Analysis (QA) Is marriage important in today’s world? Having fundamental functions, purposes, benefits Topical word: Marriage Define: legal union to establish family unit, for protection of individuals ie husband, wife, kids, property Characteristics: Developed Countries and cities– pp are more individualistic, think of own happiness first, less conservative ideas etc Less dev countries (LDC) and rural communities – more traditional values
Step 2: Brainstorm for TS – using 5W1H, PERMS and levels • Is marriage important in today’s world? Modern society – characteristics eg individualistic, personal happiness above family/community Conservative society – traditional values To who (5W1H) in what kind of society (5W1H)? 5W1H/PERMS 1)To educated (PERMS) women in modern societies, 2) To men in rural and religious (PERMS) communities, etc • Levels • Individual level – educated women, men in conservative society • government level - govt in labour-scarce countries support the idea of marriage because
Topic Sentences to support your stand Each TS provides a reason for your stand Q: Is marriage important in today’s world? * To whom in what type of societies? Why? Considering the values/characteristics that the various types of societies hold (context). * Who deems marriage not important because …(why) consider the values/characteristics of that society (context)
Essay Plan (Incomplete) Question: Is marriage important in today’s world? Stand: Marriage is losing its importance in some parts of the world. (This is better than saying “not important” because you want to show a trend that is taking place.) TS 1 : Marriage is not important because (not necessary) Educated women in modern societies (who/level - individual) do not perceive marriage as (why) important for gaining financial support as they are well-capable of doing that themselves unlike (contrast) in the case of women in traditional societies where their ability to meet their basic needs is greatly dependent on marriage.
2nd TS • In modern, liberal societies (level), marriage seem irrelevant at worst and antiquated at best to the current generation labelled as “Generation Me”. • Antiquated - outdated or old-fashioned
Alternative TS • Marriage is especially important for Asian societies(who/level) that subscribe to the belief that marriage leads to the formation of the traditional family; the bedrock of society.
Alternative TS • Even as society modernises and traditional values erode, many individuals (who/level) view as a goal to be pursued because marriage is a formal representation of a personal, lifelong commitment that also provides social and economic stability.