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Conclusion Paragraph Feedback

Conclusion Paragraph Feedback. Areas of improvement Summary of best points lists – wordy/awkward Epiphanies need additional development—remember: think big picture!. Positives Strong re-stated thesis statements (prongs, too!) Ideas for the best points were good. Sample Conclusion Paragraph.

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Conclusion Paragraph Feedback

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  1. Conclusion Paragraph Feedback Areas of improvement • Summary of best points lists – wordy/awkward • Epiphanies need additional development—remember: think big picture! Positives • Strong re-stated thesis statements (prongs, too!) • Ideas for the best points were good

  2. Sample Conclusion Paragraph Out of all the thematic concepts that exist in Book 1 resurrection is the most prevalent as shown threw the memories brought back, finding Dr. Manette, and Telsons Bank. Threw Dr. Manette’s memories of his prison cell and expecting the drawbridge the resurrection of memories was clearly shown. It was also shown when Dr. Manette was found after years of being in prison and ‘resurrected’ and ‘recalled’ back to life. The paper clearly illustrates the impact that resurrection has on the life of people and the different meanings that it carries. The story makes it hard to underestimate the power of resurrection and the way it affects people.

  3. Sample Conclusion Paragraph Loyalty is shown to be the most important thematic concept in Book I because of the dedication of Defarge, Lucie, and Lorry towards Dr. Manette. Through the extreme concern Defarge displays towards Dr. Manette, the deep love Lucie has for her father, and the selfless attempt Lorry makes to recall Dr. Manette to life, Dickens shows the importance of loyalty in the novel. The devotion these characters display towards each other keeps the story tied together because without it none of the events that occurred in the novel would have been possible. From the repeated appearance of this idea in the book, readers can see that it is important to be faithful to their loved ones. The impact that devotion has on the characters of this novel shows readers that loyalty is a characteristic that is necessary to maintain good relationships.

  4. Today’s Purpose • Work with a sample ICE prompt; • Develop a three-pronged thesis statement; • Develop 3 topic sentences; • Identify and analyze 3 poignant quotes.

  5. The Setup • Get together with your groups based on your character card. Put your desks together; • Appoint a group recorder; • Appoint a group spokesperson; • Get ready to think and write!

  6. Practice ICE Prompt Evaluate the heroism of the character, ______. Is he or she heroic or cowardly? Use your character card to help produce the following…

  7. Thesis statement 5 Minutes Craft one3 pronged thesis statement that answers the prompt question. Be ready to share!

  8. Topic Sentences 5 Minutes Write three strong topic sentences that answer the prompt question. Be ready to share!

  9. Quotes & Analysis 10 Minutes Select three poignant quotes that could be used to answer the prompt question. Be sure to offer a detailed analysis of each quote and connect your analysis back to the prompt question. Be ready to share!

  10. Consider trying the following stems: • Based on Dickens’ characterization,… • As a result of looking at ____’s actions,… • _____ demonstrates heroism due to… • Dickens intends to illustrate… • The implication of _____’s actions suggests… • Readers are able to infer that ____ is heroic because…

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