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Unit Six : Delete Redundant and Needless Phrases

Learn how to simplify and streamline technical writing by removing unnecessary phrases. Improve the clarity and conciseness of your documents.

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Unit Six : Delete Redundant and Needless Phrases

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  1. Unit Six : Delete Redundant and NeedlessPhrases Знищуйте багатослівні та непотрібні фрази Українська навчальна система написання текстів в комп'ютерній мережі.

  2. Багато технічних документів завантажені багатослівними та непотрібними фразами, що можуть бути знищені або виражені простіше. Авторові потрібно запобігати надмірної кількості слів або непотрібних фраз, що роблять речення довшими.

  3. Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? • It is well known that a majority of Taguchi method applications have the capacity for addressing a single-response problem. • Revised: Most Taguchi method applications can address a single-response problem.

  4. Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? • It may be said that computers have the ability to incorporate kinds of equipment in order that the user is in a position to interact with the computer. • Revised: Computers can incorporate equipment so that the user can interact with the computer.

  5. Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? • It is the operator who makes a determination of the questions as to the phase should be implemented. • Revised: The operator determines whether to implement the phase.

  6. Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? • There is a guideline that makes a provision of the necessary requirements. • Revised: A guideline provides the requirements.

  7. Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? • It has been found that any error that might happen will be more destructive in light of the fact that XYZ applications is in a position to make direct calls to the hardware. • Revised: Any possible error will be more destructive since XYZ applications can make direct calls to the hardware.

  8. Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? • It has long been known that the logon between the workstation and NT server is encrypted considering the fact that an eavesdropper actually wants to gain the ID and password. • Revised: The logon between the workstation and NT server is encrypted because an eavesdropper wants to gain the ID and password.

  9. Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? • It is our opinion that Windows 95 is for all intents and purposes a good operating system in a situation in which the user has many requirements. • Revised: We believe that Windows 95 is a good operating system when the user has many requirements.

  10. Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? • It is possible that the error affects the necessary requirements when attempting to ascertain the location of the variables. • Revised: The error might affect the requirements when attempting to find the variables.

  11. Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? • It is noted that 10Mbps network cards are basically becoming obsolete for the reason of their slow data transfer rates. • Revised: 10Mbps network cards are becoming obsolete because of their slow data transfer rates.

  12. Як би Ви виправили це речення щоб зробити його більш стислим ? • It is interesting to note that monitoring features in most cases inform the user provided that a performance bottleneck occurs. • Revised: Notably, (OR Interestingly,) monitoring features usually inform the user if a performance bottleneck occurs.

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