Day 2, Session 2 Making Strategic Choices in Writing Instruction

1. Summer 2012Educator Effectiveness AcademiesEnglish Language ArtsTransitioning to the CCSS by Making Strategic and Informed Choices in the Classroom Day 2, Session 2 Making Strategic Choices in Writing Instruction

2. Preparation for Day 2, Session 2 As you embark on your Day 2 journey, for Session 2 you will need: • Myth or Reality Handout • Chart paper and markers • Please remove the 3 slide handout from the participants’ binders

3. Session Outcome Participants will develop knowledge to make strategic choices in writing instruction.

4. Overview of the WritingStandards What do you think are the big ideas or themes in the CCSS writing standards? • Expect students to compose arguments and opinions, informative/explanatory pieces, and narrative texts based upon sources • Focus on analytic writing and the use of reason and evidence • Emphasize ability to conduct research – short projects and sustained inquiry • Require students to incorporate technology as they create, refine, and collaborate on writing • Expect students to meet each year’s grade-specific standards and retain or further develop skills and understandings mastered during the preceding grades

5. Writing in PreK-2 • includes all the instructional shifts in writing for the CCSS • builds the foundation to independent student writing through Speaking and Listening • enables students to gain mastery and application of Foundational Skills • demonstrates increasing sophistication in all aspects of writing, from vocabulary and syntax to the development and organization of ideas in a developmentally appropriate manner. How does this look in the primary grades?

6. Organization of the Writing Strand Standards 1, 2, and 3 are the writing types: • argument (secondary)/opinion (elementary) • informative/explanatory • narrative

7. Organization of the Writing Strand Standards 4 , 5, 6 (Production and Distribution) apply to all three of the writing types: • W4:Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style appropriate to task, purpose, and audience • W5:Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. • W6:Use technology, including the internet, to produce and publish writing and to interact and collaborate with others.

8. Organization of the Writing Strand Standards 7, 8, and 9 (Research) can include all three types of writing: • W7:conduct short as well as more sustained research projects based on focused questions, demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation. • W8:Gather relevant information from multiple print and digital sources, assess the credibility and accuracy of each source, and integrate the information while avoiding plagiarism. • W9:Draw evidence from literary or informational texts to support analysis, reflection, and research.

9. Organization of the Writing Strand Standard 10: Range of Writing Wrapping it all Together: Practice, Practice, Practice Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of tasks, purposes, and audiences.

10. The Writing Standards Standard 10: Range of Writing Standards 4, 5, 6: Production and Distribution Standards 7, 8 , 9: Research The Core: Standards 1, 2, 3: The Writing Types

11. Myth or Reality? • Complete the handout identifying whether each statement is a myth or reality. • Do not share responses.These will be revisited and discussed at the end of this session.

12. Common Core State StandardsAnInstructional Shift in Writing Analytic Writing by Writing to Sources and Writing Using Sources—student writing (argument, informational, narrative) is in response to text, rather than de-contextualized writing prompts.Students stay grounded in the text, responding to high quality text-dependent questions with evidence-based written responses.

13. Rationale • According to ASCD*, 70% of writing that students have been doing in K-12 does not actually require reading from text. • Using textual evidence in writing and speaking is important on the NAEP national assessment and on international assessments as reported by PIRLS. This applies to both literature and informational text. • It makes writing authentic and relevant. Using evidence in writing and speaking is important for both career and college writing. *ASCD is the Association for Supervision and Curriculum Development

14. How Do We Know that Students are Writing to Source? Ask yourself: Can students respond to the writing prompt without reading the text?

15. The Moon-Catchin’ Netby Shel Silverstein I've made me a moon-catchin' net,And I'm goin‘ huntin‘ tonight,I'll run along swingin‘ it over my head,And grab for that big ball of light. So tomorrow just look at the sky,And if there's no moon you can betI've found what I sought and I finally caughtThe moon in my moon-catchin' net.But if the moons still shinin' there,Look close underneath and you'll getA clear look at me in the sky swingin‘ freeWith a star in my moon-catchin' net.

16. The Moon-Catchin’ Netby Shel Silverstein • The narrator in the poem wants to catch • the moon. Explain what it would be like to go to the moon and what you would see, feel, and hear if you went there. You may want to include details about: • how far you would have to travel to get there • what you would want to bring with you • the temperature, wind, and seasons • no gravity

17. The Moon-Catchin’ Netby Shel Silverstein Explain the narrator’s wish. Identify the words or line in the poem that makes you think that is the narrator’s wish. Explain what the narrator plans to do to get his wish.

18. Writing to Source How does it look in the state unit writing?

19. How does this look in our units? Grade 4 Unit, “Heroes” In this Lesson Seed students will write a short argument/opinion piece citing textual evidence: Use your Hero Organizer to help you select the hero you think made the greatest contribution. Describe what made your person or animal a hero. Write about why you think this person or animal’s contribution was the most important compared to the other heroes.

20. How does this look in our units? Grade 4 Unit, “Heroes” This lesson focuses on the novel, Shiloh, by Phyllis Reynolds Naylor. It asks students to respond in writing to the prompt below: Think about what you know about heroes. Is there a hero in the text at this time? Explain why you think there is or is not a hero. Cite specific text evidence from one or more of the chapters to prove your point.

21. How does this look in our units? Kindergarten Unit, “Coming Full Circle with Cycles” In this Lesson Seed students participate in an interactive read aloud, Bird Migration by Robin Nelson. After discussion, they respond by writing a sentence about one bird depicted in Bird Migration.

22. Writing to Sources Discussion: • How can we include more text dependent prompts in our lesson planning? • How can text dependent prompts be incorporated into routine writing for short as well as extended time frames? • Why is it important to include text dependent prompts in student writing? What question(s) do you still have about writing to source?

23. For Consideration . . . Does this mean that we never have students write to prompts that are not text dependent? NO!

24. Writing Using Sources Writing, using text as a stimulus. On the PARCC assessments, students could be asked to write a narrative using a piece of text as a stimulus. What could this look like?

25. Writing Using SourcesFrom our units . . . Grade 1 Unit, “Teamwork” This Lesson Seed asks students to read the short story, Mama’s Coming Home and write a narrative about a time when members of their families worked together as a team.

26. Text as a Stimulus for Narrative WritingFrom our units . . . Grade 7 Unit, “The Choices We Make” This Seed asks students to use the choices made by the characters in the various unit texts to write a narrative about a choice. The student may choose to make this autobiographical.

27. An Instructional Consideration What does Blending Writing Types and Purposes Mean to You? Student writing that uses a blend of narrative and expository structures and demonstrates multiple writing purposes and multiple writing types.

28. Blending Writing Good writers often mix . . . • writing purposes—Often one piece of writing will combine two or more purposes in one piece of text—writing argument or to inform or explain. • writing types—narrative, exposition, and argument. Often one piece of writing will combine two or more types of writing in one piece of text.

29. Blending WritingSome Examples . . . • Writing an introduction—students can use a narrative/anecdote as a hook or lead • Writing an argument—insert a anecdote to support a claim or write an argument in a narrative structure • Writing a narrative essay—insert a section written in an expository structure (or vice versa).

30. Blending Writing Writing for relevant real-life situations rarely isolates one purpose or one type of writing.

31. What is an essay? • According to Merriam-Webster:an analytic or interpretative literary composition usually dealing with its subject from a limited or personal point of view • According to Dictionary.com: a short literary composition on a particular theme or subject, usually in prose and generally analytic, speculative, or interpretative

32. A Final Instructional Implication . . . How does a narrative essay differ from an expository essay?

33. The Narrative Essay • Summarizes events and experiences • Usually employs the first person • May mix scholarly and non-scholarly content • Voice may be conversational and first person • May be used as a medium for writing argument

34. Making Strategic Choices in Writing What are the advantages of choosing to write an essay in a narrative versus expository structure?

35. The Narrative Essay • Allows for symbolism and emotion • Allows the reader to discover • Includes the human element • Voice may be conversational and first person • Allows for creativity and the use of vivid verbs • Allows for a sense of meaning that is hard to achieve in an objective, scholarly way

36. PARCC Assessments What do we know about how writing will be assessed in the PARCC Assessments?

37. What We Know Now!Grades 3-5 • Write a summary (Grade 4/5) • Recount the key details and main idea (Grade 3). • Write an analytic essay that incorporates evidence from multiple sources. • Write a narrative using text as a stimulus. *Note: this is subject to change as the PARCC assessments are written and revised.

38. For Discussion: What are the Instructional Implications of the way we believe that PARCC will be assessing writing?

39. Myth or Reality? • Complete the last two columns of the handout identifying whether each statement is a myth or reality. • Compare your answers to those from the beginning of the session. • Discuss the differences with the members of your small group. • List your “Big Ideas”from the session on chart paper.

40. Reflection Day 2, Session 2 3-2-1 3Name 3 ideas or points from this session that caught your attention. 2 Name 2 ideas or points you plan to explore further. 1Name 1 idea or point that you think is critical for discussion during your school team time later today.