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PERSUASIVE ESSAY BLOOPERS!

PERSUASIVE ESSAY BLOOPERS!. BY: MRS. DeSandre **With special thanks to those of you who are guilty of writing bloopers. Without you, this PowerPoint would not exist. Find the Fluff. The book is really good and it has lots of things in it. And the fluff is….

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PERSUASIVE ESSAY BLOOPERS!

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  1. PERSUASIVE ESSAY BLOOPERS! BY: MRS. DeSandre **With special thanks to those of you who are guilty of writing bloopers. Without you, this PowerPoint would not exist.

  2. Find the Fluff • The book is really good and it has lots of things in it.

  3. And the fluff is….. • The book is really good and it has lots of things in it. • What kind of things does it have? • Action, ice cream, tragedy? • Be specific!!

  4. What doesn’t belong here? • This book is for like a girl, not a boy.

  5. And the rejected word is… LIKE This book is for like a girl, not a boy What is like a girl? Is that someone who is almost a girl, but not quite? PLEAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

  6. Find the third grade writing… • Making this book into a movie is bad.

  7. And the third-grade word is… • BAD • Making this book into a movie is bad. • This sounds too simple. Replace it with the following: • A bad idea • Not likely to be profitable • Anything else that sounds 8th grade appropriate.

  8. What isn’t correct? • I think it must of been hard to live that way. • I had to turn spell check off so that it wouldn’t automatically change “must of”. to “must have”. • If the computer did this, you should too!

  9. What’s wrong here? • This is a amazing book.

  10. And the answer is…. • This isn’t a amazing book. • It’s AN amazing book. • We use “an” rather than “a” when the first letter of the next word begins with a vowel.

  11. But I have 3 reasons in my opening paragraph, so what’s wrong here? • Three reasons why this book should be turned into a movie are: it would be a very exciting movie, the movie would be suspenseful, and the movie would keep audiences on the edge of their seats.

  12. And the problem is…… • Three reasons why this book should be turned into a movie are: it would be a very exciting movie, the movie would be suspenseful, and the movie would keep audiences on the edge of their seats. • These are not three reasons why a book should be made into a movie. This is one reason stated three times. Don’t bore your reader. You won’t do well if the person grading your paper is sleeping - zzzzzzzzz-

  13. Finally, what’s inaccurate here? • Mrs. DeSandre is a wonderful, kind, intelligent, and beautiful teacher. Her LA students are lucky to have her.

  14. And the inaccurate information is… • There is nothing wrong with this statement. It is 100% true.

  15. And this is….. THE END

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