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70%. Only capitalize initial words and proper nouns. B. The 1st sentence is enough to open on a positive note. The idea is already in paragraph 2. Google what is said about using “please find”. Auto-signature font color, size, and formatting should be the same as those used in the letter.
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70% Only capitalize initial words and proper nouns. B The 1st sentence is enough to open on a positive note. The idea is already in paragraph 2. Google what is said about using “please find” Auto-signature font color, size, and formatting should be the same as those used in the letter.
78% B 75% 83% 75% PROBLEM STATEMENT & TOPIC SENTENCE (V2) Mr. Yuhan Satapo G10 25 Nov 2013
topic: 5 tips to stop smoking with start plans 75% Insert all your sources into the correct places in your problem statement
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References Economics, T. (2013). SMOKING PREVALENCE; MALES (% OF ADULTS) IN THAILAND. Retrieved 24 November, 2013, from Trading Economics: www.tradingeconomics.com Sunanta. (25 August, 2011). World Tobacco Control Laws for a Smoke – Free Thai Society. Retrieved 24 November, 2013, from Thai Health Promotion Foundation: http://en.thaihealth.or.th The links are incorrect. Solution: It is correct that the text only shows the website address. However, the hyperlink should open to the file that you selected. Ventures, H. M. (2013). Social, Sneaky, or Skinny? The 7 Types of Smokers. Retrieved 24 November, 2013, from Health: http://www.health.com • Wikipedia. (14 November, 2013). Maslow's hierarchy of needs. Retrieved 25 November, 2013, from Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org
Topic:7 Thai etiquettes for foreigners 83% Insert all your sources into the correct places in your problem statement
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References • AngloINFO. (25 November, 2013). Thai Customs and Etiquette. Retrieved 25 November, 2013, from AngloINFO: http://bangkok.angloinfo.com • Areva. (19 October, 2012 ). Temptation of Assuming – Thai Culture. Retrieved 25 November, 2013, from Thailand News: www.thailandnewsworth.wordpress.com The links are incorrect. Solution: It is correct that the text only shows the website address. However, the hyperlink should open to the file that you selected. Learning-theories.com. (2007). Social Learning Theory (Bandura). Retrieved 23 November, 2013, from Learning-theories.com: www.learning-theories.com
topic: 7 questions to check your sleeping problems 75% Insert all your sources into the correct places in your problem statement A* = 90 to 100 A = 80 to 90 B = 70 to 80 C = 60 to 70 D = 50 to 60 F = 0 to 49 [In drafting: PASS or FAIL grade only]
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references Center, U. H. (20 November, 2013). Sleep Rocks! ...get more of it! Retrieved 24 November, 2013, from The University Health Center: http://www.uhs.uga.edu/sleep/ Cherry, K. (2013). Theories of Sleep. Retrieved 25 November, 2013, from About.com: http://psychology.about.com The links are incorrect. Solution: It is correct that the text only shows the website address. However, the hyperlink should open to the file that you selected. SleepPhones. (2007). College Students and Sleep. Retrieved 24 November, 2013, from SleepPhones: www.sleepphones.com
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