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Now look at this corrected version

Now look at this corrected version. Still, it could be made even better. Can you continue it for another paragraph and add some powerful verbs, adverbs and description?. L.O. To improve the detail of a story to make it more interesting for the reader.

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Now look at this corrected version

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  1. Now look at this corrected version Still, it could be made even better. Can you continue it for another paragraph and add some powerful verbs, adverbs and description?

  2. L.O. To improve the detail of a story to make it more interesting for the reader. The magical angel was glittering and golden it had silver, sparkling wings and a shimmering dress. It hovered on a fluffy, feathery cloud up in the midnight atmosphere. The mystic angel gazed quietly over the girl as she slept in her queen-sized, quilted bed.

  3. Remember to add powerful verbs,adverbs and description. The girl woke up suddenly and she looked at the pretty angel on the cloud. “ I shall make a wish,” the girl whispered to herself. The girl knew that the angel would make it come true.

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