Only two types of writers

1. Only two types of writers Good writers and quitters

2. No one reads our copy.

3. I mean, who likes all those words?

4. Our stories are so boring.

5. We’d rather have pictures than that boring stuff.

6. No one reads our copy. I mean, who likes all those words? Our stories are so boring. We’d rather have pictures than that boring stuff.

7. Art students do pottery, drawing and painting. “I took art because I like to draw,” art student Alexis Hernandez revealed. Some students think art is fun. “I think art is fun,” Alexis added.

8. Art students do pottery, drawing and painting. “I took art because I like to draw,” art student Alexis Hernandez revealed. Some students think art is fun. “I think art is fun,” Alexis added. Why isn’t this a story?

9. Alexis Hernandez tucked the unruly wisp of hair back into place with her mud-caked hands. She had battled with her bangs for the last 30 minutes as her bowl took shape on the pottery wheel. “Anybody got like a clippie?” Alexis said to no one in particular in her Art I class third period. Her feet kept the wheel in a steady rotation with alternating tapping as the bowl became rounder and rounder. “My grandmama will love this bowl,” Alexis said. “It has to be like absolutely awesome.”

10. Do you see Alexis at the pottery wheel?

11. Do you see the hair falling in her eyes?

12. Do you see her hands?

13. Do you hear her voice?

14. Do you see her feet?

15. So, maybe they like stories, just not boring ones.

16. Lion and Bronco fans were on their feet as Boyd’s offense ran onto the field following a timeout. The Broncos stood on the Lions’ 12-yard-line. With 1:20 remaining, a touchdown would seal the game for Boyd but a defensive stop would force a fourth down.

17. Lion and Bronco fans were on their feet as Boyd’s offense ran onto the field following a timeout. The Broncos stood on the Lions’ 12-yard-line. With 1:20 remaining, a touchdown would seal the game for Boyd but a defensive stop would force a fourth down. Boyd quarterback Jacob Coffey took the snap from under center and pitched left to running back Bryan Maxwell. Maxwell took the pitch, found a crease between his guard and tackle and shot out of a cannon into the south end zone. Lion fans could only hang their heads and reach for their car keys as they watched Boyd score two fourth-quarter touchdowns to take a 12-7 lead.

18. Trailing by 6 with 1:15 left in the quarter, the kick return unit headed out to the field in an attempt to set up the offense with decent field position. Sophomore kick returners Robert Radway and Dario Jackson adjusted their alignment to field what they thought would be a squip kick, but a confident Bronco kickoff team decided to kick deep instead.

19. Trailing by 6 with 1:15 left in the quarter, the kick return unit headed out to the field in an attempt to set up the offense with decent field position. Sophomore kick returners Robert Radway and Dario Jackson adjusted their alignment to field what they thought would be a squip kick, but a confident Bronco kickoff team decided to kick deep instead. “It was such a nervous feeling being on the field for that play,” Robert said. “Before we went out on the field Coach told me I was going to run it back, and when they kicked it deep, I knew I had a chance.”

20. Robert fielded the ball on the 17-yard-line and fired off behind a Dario Jackson block. The front four on the kick-off team opened up a seam on the left side of the field. He burst through the crease leaving all Broncos behind except for the kicker.

21. Robert fielded the ball on the 17-yard-line and fired off behind a Dario Jackson block. The front four on the kick-off team opened up a seam on the left side of the field. He burst through the crease leaving all Broncos behind except for the kicker. “As soon as I got to the kicker, it was over,” Robert said. “I broke his tackle and blew right by him.”

22. Robert fielded the ball on the 17-yard-line and fired off behind a Dario Jackson block. The front four on the kick-off team opened up a seam on the left side of the field. He burst through the crease leaving all Broncos behind except for the kicker. “As soon as I got to the kicker, it was over,” Robert said. “I broke his tackle and blew right by him.” With the crowd and the sideline going crazy, Robert high-stepped into the end zone untouched for the score.

23. Robert fielded the ball on the 17-yard-line and fired off behind a Dario Jackson block. The front four on the kick-off team opened up a seam on the left side of the field. He burst through the crease leaving all Broncos behind except for the kicker. “As soon as I got to the kicker, it was over,” Robert said. “I broke his tackle and blew right by him.” With the crowd and the sideline going crazy, Robert high-stepped into the end zone untouched for the score. “The best feeling was getting into the zone because we had to win the Battle of the Blue,” Robert said.

24. Robert fielded the ball on the 17-yard-line and fired off behind a Dario Jackson block. The front four on the kick-off team opened up a seam on the left side of the field. He burst through the crease leaving all Broncos behind except for the kicker. “As soon as I got to the kicker, it was over,” Robert said. “I broke his tackle and blew right by him.” With the crowd and the sideline going crazy, Robert high-stepped into the end zone untouched for the score. “The best feeling was getting into the zone because we had to win the Battle of the Blue,” Robert said. A huge swing in momentum hushed the Bronco nation, and Robert’s kick return proved to be too much for Boyd to overcome.

25. On the final drive of the game, Coffey hurled a ball into the Lions’ secondary in desperation only to be picked off by safety Matt Hanson.

26. On the final drive of the game, Coffey hurled a ball into the Lions’ secondary in desperation only to be picked off by safety Matt Hanson. “It was nice being the guy to put the nail in the coffin,” Matt said. “But our kick return is what won the game.”

27. On the final drive of the game, Coffey hurled a ball into the Lions’ secondary in desperation only to be picked off by safety Matt Hanson. “It was nice being the guy to put the nail in the coffin,” Matt said. “But our kick return is what won the game.” Joe Arriola (Class of 2007) Never had an AP class, and found yearbook his senior year.

28. The interview

29. The interview Quotes: answers given during the interview that contain emotion, opinion and character

30. The interview Dialog: conversation said while an event is in progress. Can be gathered either by observing the event or by having a participant recall the interchange.

31. The interview Hint: If you get stupid answers, you didn’t do your part.

32. The interview Hint: If you get stupid answers, you didn’t do your part. Stupid answers include “a lot” Only facts, no emotions or opinions No new information Attempts to be funny Cliches

33. The interview Hint: If you get stupid answers, you didn’t do your part. Great quotes include Voice Opinions and emotion Profound insights into character

34. The Writing Process - Not • Make handwriting neater. Leave out all the scratch-outs. • Use the thesaurus to find bigger words. • Computer spell check and grammar check. • Type it. • Add filler to make it longer.

35. Revision - Step 1 • In a word processing program, run a word count. • Write that number in the top right corner of the first page.

36. Revision - Step 2 • Read it aloud. Mark any place where you stumble, pause in confusion or have to reread. • Rewrite those sentences.

37. Revision - Step 3 • Look for summarized or implied dialog • Rewrite using the actual exchanges said during the scene.

38. I slinked into the publications room that Monday, picked up an application from the quiet lady in the classroom brimming with activity. I filled it out and returned it. Hope Carroll took me when I needed it most. I was in. I dried my tears, and on Monday morning, trudged into the publications room, picked up an application, filled it out and turned it in. To my surprise, they took me. “Welcome to yearbook,” said the lady with the glasses that covered half her face and the reassuring voice that let me know others had suffered setbacks and found their home here. “I know you’ll just love it here. Everyone does.” For example

39. Revision - Step 4 • Circle all the -ly words -- adverbs. • Select a better verb if the adverb enhances. • Keep the adverb if it contradicts the meaning of the verb.

40. At the end of my junior year, I anxiously applied for an editorial position. At the end of my junior year, I applied for a couple of editorial positions. For example - enhances

41. The teacher’s high heels clicked with each step as she purposely walked to Edward’s desk. The teacher’s high heels clicked with each step as she headed to Edward’s desk. For example - enhances

42. She leaned down to his ear and whispered loudly, “If you think you’re funny, think again.” A whisper is not loud so there’s a contradiction there. “killing me softly” For example - contradicts

43. Revision - Step 5 • Underline all the verb phrases twice. • On a separate sheet of paper list the verbs straight down the page. • Look for weak verbs and rewrite those sentences. (ing verbs, verbs with lots of helpers, be verbs)

44. For Example - Bad Verbs • The good ol’ boy system was still in tact with administrators at a high school in South Arkansas when I satdown with them one afternoon. The topic of discussion was the lack of qualified bus drivers when I walked into the office after teaching summer school English that August.

45. Was Sat Was walked For Example - Bad Verbs

46. For Example - Better Verbs • Administrators rooted in the good ol’ boy system complained they didn’t have enough bus drivers. After federal courts combined two rival school systems in the name of desegregation, the bus superintendentreconfigured routes for this small Arkansas school district creating a need for even more bus drivers. • “Where are we ever gonna git that many drivers,” the bus superintendent said.

47. For Example - Better Verbs • “Hell, we’re scraping bottom now,” the associate superintendent said. “I can drive a bus,” I said as I entered the room. • They rebuffed me with laughter and woman-driver comments.

48. Rooted Complained Didn’t have Combined Reconfigured Rebuffed For Example - Active Verbs

49. Revision - Step 6 • Spell check and grammar check with Word. • Check “readability statistics” under preferences. (This will tell you what percentage of your sentences are in passive voice.) Aim for less than five percent passive voice. • Compare the word count from the first step. By now, the piece should be 10 percent fewer words.

50. For example • This is for the passage on the bus driving piece.