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Poetry Café . Wendy Kim 2B. If. <Notes> Wreath : an arrangement of flowers, leaves, or stems fastened in a ring and used for decoration or for laying on a grave. Meed : a deserved share or reward. By. Paul Laurence Dunbar. If life were but a dream, my Love , And death the waking time ;
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Poetry Café Wendy Kim 2B
If <Notes> Wreath : an arrangement of flowers, leaves, or stems fastened in a ring and used for decoration or for laying on a grave. Meed : a deserved share or reward By. Paul Laurence Dunbar If life were but a dream, my Love, And death the waking time; If day had not a beam, my Love, And night had not a rhyme, -- A barren, barren world were this Without one saving gleam; I’d only ask that with a kiss You’d wake me from the dream. If dreaming were the sum of days, And loving were the bane; If battling for a wreath of bays Could soothe a heart in pain, -- I’d scorn the meedof battle’s might, All other aims above I’d choose the human’s higher right, To suffer and to love!
Why did I choose this poem? • Strong impression • “To suffer and to love!” • Could actually imagine the world without emotions • Like the way he described his imagination • “A barren, barren world”
Life without any emotions? • How would life be if there weren’t any human emotions of suffering and love? • World without emotions mean nothing for living • Things that are very normal very precious and valuable • Makes pictures of boring, and awful world without emotions
If life were but a dream, my Love, And death the waking time; If day had not a beam, my Love, And night had not a rhyme, -- A barren, barren world were this Without one saving gleam; I’d only ask that with a kiss You’d wake me from the dream. If dreaming were the sum of days, And loving were the bane; If battling for a wreath of bays Could soothe a heart in pain, -- I’d scorn the meed of battle’s might, All other aims above I’d choose the human’s higher right, To suffer and to love! -‘I’ is the speaker of the poem -author himself Effect: -the person who is reading out the poem sounds like the author
If life were but a dream, my Love, And death the waking time; If day had not a beam, my Love, And night had not a rhyme, -- A barren, barren world were this Without one saving gleam; I’d only ask that with a kiss You’d wake me from the dream. If dreaming were the sum of days, And loving were the bane; If battling for a wreath of bays Could soothe a heart in pain, -- I’d scorn the meed of battle’s might, All other aims above I’d choose the human’s higher right, To suffer and to love! Repetition of words : if, my Love, barren Effect: -emphasis -creates rhythm
If life were but a dream, my Love, And death the waking time; If day had not a beam, my Love, And night had not a rhyme, -- A barren, barren world were this Without one saving gleam; I’d only ask that with a kiss You’d wake me from the dream. If dreaming were the sum of days, And loving were the bane; If battling for a wreath of bays Could soothe a heart in pain, -- I’d scorn the meed of battle’s might, All other aims above I’d choose the human’s higher right, To suffer and to love! First Stanza Tone : horror -World without emotions: awful, boring Second Stanza Tone : realization, determination - Emotions are necessary Effect: -helps to picture what the author is trying to say more easily
If life were but a dream, my Love, And death the waking time; If day had not a beam, my Love, And night had not a rhyme, -- A barren, barren world were this Without one saving gleam; I’d only ask that with a kiss You’d wake me from the dream. If dreaming were the sum of days, And loving were the bane; If battling for a wreath of bays Could soothe a heart in pain, -- I’d scorn the meed of battle’s might, All other aims above I’d choose the human’s higher right, To suffer and to love! 2 stanzas, 8 lines each, - Effect: -similar structures of stanzas create rhythm
If life were but a dream, my Love, And death the waking time; If day had not a beam, my Love, And night had not a rhyme, -- A barren, barren world were this Without one saving gleam; I’d only ask that with a kiss You’d wake me from the dream. If dreaming were the sum of days, And loving were the bane; If battling for a wreath of bays Could soothe a heart in pain, -- I’d scorn the meedof battle’s might, All other aims above I’d choose the human’s higher right, To suffer and to love! A B A B C A C A Rhymes : (dream, beam, gleam) (rhyme, time) (this, kiss) (days, bays) (bane, pain) (might, right) (above, love) Effect: -creates rhythm -makes the whole poem sound like a song DE D E F G F G
Paul Laurence Dunbar • late 19th and early 20th century (June 27, 1872 - February 9, 1906) • seminal African-American poet • Parents had escaped from the slavery • He was the only black student at Dayton Central High School • During his life, considerable emphasis was laid on the fact that Dunbar was of pure black descent, with no white ancestors
What does it teach us about our own humanity? • Life would be awful if there was no emotions • Emotions are necessary
Works Cited.. • http://www.americanpoems.com/poets/Paul-Laurence-Dunbar • http://peabloggy.wordpress.com/2008/09/page/2/ • http://th06.deviantart.net/fs18/300W/f/2007/155/e/c/Suffer_in_Silence_by_DepictAddict.png • http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs4/i/2004/255/c/3/Love__s_new_ID_by_love.jpg