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Writing Essays. . . . 5 Part Form. Disclaimer!!!. This is ONE model of essay writing -- a good one, but not the only one! Variations exist regarding Method of citing Use of first person Form of the introduction Use of present tense, etc.
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Writing Essays. . . . . . 5 Part Form
Disclaimer!!! • This is ONE model of essay writing -- a good one, but not the only one! • Variations exist regarding • Method of citing • Use of first person • Form of the introduction • Use of present tense, etc. • Your teacher may give special instructions. Follow them!
What is an Essay? Essay Purpose
Essay Purpose • An essay is a form of writing in which you try to prove a point or support an opinion (thesis) • You must give reasons for your ideas, and evidence to back up what you say • You must give the sources of your evidence if you use them!
A Report is Different • In a report, you are presenting information that you have collected on a topic • You are not necessarily supporting a point/an opinion
Opinions • EVERYTHING you write is an opinion, whether it is a persuasive essay, an opinion essay, or a research essay • It becomes convincing only when you back up your opinion!!
Opinions • There are opinions, and then there are opinions . . . • You may be entitled to your opinion, but… • Your opinion needs to be supported if you plan on convincing anyone else!!!
Support Opinions With… • Facts • Specific reasons • Logical arguments • Specific examples • Support of experts • Quotations • NOT just because YOU say so!!!
How Should I Write My Essay? Essay Style
Essay Style: Formal u An essay is not a chat room! • Write in full sentences, not point form • Never use slang, dialect, or short forms • Avoid contractions: • Use “did not” instead of “didn’t” • Use “would have” instead of “would’ve” or, even worse, “would of”!!! lol
Essay Style: Objective • Use third person, unless your teacher gives you permission to use first person • Use: • he, she, it, they, those, them (3rd) • Do not use: • you, your (2nd) • I, me, we, us, myself (1st)
How Do I Set Up My Essay? Essay Organization
Opening Comments • Introduce your topic in general terms • Get the interest of your readers • Example: Students in public high schools are allowed to choose the clothes that suit their personality and make them feel comfortable. Catholic students, however, are denied this choice.
Thesis • A thesis is made up of two parts: • Statement • Plan • The statement is what you are trying to prove • The plan is your list of proofs/ reasons/arguments
Examples States the obvious! • Students in Catholic high schools wear uniforms. • Why should high school students have to wear uniforms? • Students should not have to wear uniforms because I think they are ugly. Not a statement. Not provable!
Examples • Students in high school should not have to wear uniforms because they are too expensive, they are uncomfortable, and they limit students’ right to self-expression. • Students in high school should not have to wear uniforms because they are too expensive, they are uncomfortable, and they limit students’ right to self-expression. Good!
Examples It is a good policy for high school students to wear uniforms because this prevents them wearing gang related clothing, it gives them a sense of belonging, and it stops people from judging others based on the way they dress. • It is a good policy for high school students to wear uniforms because this prevents them wearing gang related clothing, gives them a sense of belonging, and stops people from judging others based on the way they dress. Good!
Topic Sentences • Every time you start a new paragraph (argument) you must start with a topic sentence that reminds the reader of your reason • Use key words from the thesis
Examples • Thesis: Students in high school should not have to wear uniforms because they are 1. too expensive, they are 2. uncomfortable, and they 3. limit students’ right to self-expression. • Topic Sentences: • Special uniforms cost much more than regular clothing… • The uniforms students are required to wear are very uncomfortable… • If all students are forced to dress the same this violates their freedom of expression…
Evidence • After the topic sentence, you give reasons, details, examples, and quotations that prove your point • Your opinion is only as good as the evidence that backs it up!!
Conclusion • Start the conclusion by restating your thesis and arguments • Finish up with… • Summary comments • Application • Suggestion for further thought
Citing Sources Don’t Plagiarize!!
The Catechism: Works Cited Catholic Church. Catechism of the Catholic Church. Ottawa: Canadian Council of Catholic Bishops, 1994. Catholic Church. Catechism of the Catholic Church. New York: Image, 1995.
Or… Catholic Church. Catechism of the Catholic Church. 2nd ed. Vatican: Libreria Editrice Vaticana, 2000. There are many versions! http://www.usccb.org/catechism/text/ http://www.vatican.va/archive/ENG0015/_INDEX.HTM
In-Text citation of The Catechism: • “The one God is triune in nature and consists of three persons, Father, Son, and Holy Spirit” (Catechism 1280). Because of this… • Direct quotation • Note: cite section or paragraph instead of page number.
In-Text citation of The Catechism: • Because God consists of three persons, Father, Son, and Holy Spirit (Catechism 1280) we always end our prayers by saying… • Paraphrase • Note: cite section or paragraph instead of page number.
In-Text Citation of Movies • Include the work in the text lead up, not in a parenthetical reference • E.g.: Terry Gilliam’s film 12 Monkeys portrays James Cole as a Christ figure who is willing to sacrifice his life to save humanity.
Works Cited 12 Monkeys. Dir. Terry Gilliam. Perf. Bruce Willis, Madeline Stowe, Brad Pitt. DVD. Paramount, 1998.
In-Text Citation of Web Sites A • Local Hero teaches about the importance of respecting the environment, “Any movie that can raise the consciousness of its audience without preaching is a rarity, and this beautiful film manages to do just that.” (Internet Movie Database ¶8). In view of this, all …
Citing IMDb Internet Movie Database. Local Hero. 2008. 3 March 2008. <http://imdb. com/title/tt0085859/> Date of site, then date you accessed the site.